OS: The Girl With The Broken Smile

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Anchal Gulati

@Anchal_Kamli

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

superb yr...
thnx fr d p.m..
plzz continue soon...

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Ashima

@sweetdollashita

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

itss superb...you are an amazing writer...you expressed every emotion of them through words...just loved it...continue soon n plz pm me...

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Preethi

@preethis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

wowww awesome dear... if you are writing part 2 i would surely want to read it.. its too good...

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Pyaasi Chudail

@PyaasiChudail69

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

wohoo it was aussum

imagined virman loved it

hope will get part 2

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-Aswathy-

@-Aswathy-

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Loved it...You have written it so beautiully..And I love the title also..😊

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hangok

@hangok

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

wow thats amazing, and i have to say i loved it that you havent give names for the couple ...
i have imagined all my favourits couples in this os

thanks for pm

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Sarah Ashraf

@aa_mnhs

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Loved loved it!!! I was thinking of virika while reading. Its always greatreading oss on them. Waiting for part two. Write soon :)

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MaebyFunke

@MaebyFunke

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

You're a brilliant writer, you know that? Where do you get so much creativity from? This one is fantastic! Better than your previous one. I read everything twice. The flashbacks in between and the present situation, how you made a connection between the two. I liked the way you used the sentence "A guy and a girl could never be friends". It's so soothing to read. And believe me universal writings do work here when writers like you write so perfectly!

BTW the song is brilliant and my favorite. And will there be a second part to this?

Edited by ITrustMyHeart - 12 years ago

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Kryan4ever

@Kryan4ever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

loved it , especially in the end when he said i ran !

it was soo cute and beautifully written

thanks for the pm 😊

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sajanfan004

@sajanfan004

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

This was one of the BEST stories on India forums according to me, honestly, it was great! I imagined virika to be quite frank!

But I'm sure both even virman would rock it!

Coming back to the story, it was mind blowing, your concept, your idea, the way you presented it! Everything!!!

I loved it to the core, especially the way you explained things, it was beyond anything. Loved all the emotions of the two characters you showed! Truly, I loved it!!

I love virens decision, and I can't wait to read the next part... I love this OS!

Please PM me when you update... And once again, it's a BEAUTIFUL, WONDERUL, story!

Your a great brilliant writer!! Thank you for sharing your idea with us!!