VIRMAN SS... SAVIOUR OF HER LIFE(chapter 4 pg6) - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey dear...welcum to the forum...🤗
well...amazing concept...
virat , an oncologist...sounds really interesting...
plzz cont soon...wud luv to recieve a pm for ur future updates!!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 2

It was midnight now... HE went to her room and saw her sleeping with bhabhi on her side... He always used to wonder that why his bhabhi love her so much? and now he was thinking that why wouldnt anyone? how could anyone resist loving her?
and then he noticed smile on her face while sleeping... smile which was making her more heavenly...
smile which was the signature sign of manvi choudhary...
and that smile made him more determined

Next Day...

every one was at dining table for breakfast and then they noticed Virat coming from outside all dresssed up..
Viren: Virat where were you? Was looking for you
Virat: bhai. actually some work, coming from the hospital... and where is Manvi?
Jeevika: she is in her room, i have given her breakfast there...
Virat: ok then i am going there and bhabhi what about Manvi's case history files? Have u asked Beeji to send them?
Jeevika: yes. beeji had already sent them..
Virat: ok bhabhi, give it to me as soon as they are there...
Jeevika nodded her head and then he turned back and was heading towards manvi's room, when he heard jeevika's voice on his back
Jeevika: Virat, Manvi would get allright na?
About many times, same question have been asked by many of his patients relatives and he never failed to comfort them,to assure them,to make them hopeful...
But today this question seemed different... the question which he was trying to avoid...
Then he took a deep breath, trying to swallow the fears, turned back, smiled and all he said was,
SHE WOULD HAVE TO

Manvi's Room...

she was sitting on bed with legs crossed...

Virat entered and she giver her hundred million dollar smile to him...
Virat: Manvi Have u taken your medicines?
Manvi: very funny Virat... donot try to be like Di, bcoz u couldnt...ofcourse I have, I am not a small child for whom you have to run around for medicines...
Virat: very funny Manvi, and you cant make me fool like bhabhi bcoz i am your doctor now and i have added some sedatives to your medicines regime and in case if you have taken the medicines then you would have been sleeping... so stop being a child because i cant run around you...
Manvi: seriously, i cant believe that Di have chosen u as my doctor but plz Virat, just for today i dont want to take medicines, just for today, plzzz...
Virat: and can i ask why should i?
Manvi: arey tomorrow is my birthday and i want to wish myself first of all as always... so plzzz, i would consider it a birthday gift from your side...
and at the very moment his heart stopped beating, how could life betrayed such girl... yes she was betrayed by her own life, whom she loved a lot... live is so unpredictable... the biggest deciever

Virat: okey, though i am not that much soft hearted but only for u as u are my bhabhi's only sister, avoid the sedatives but atleast take the other medicines...
Manvi: ok, thanx... now i can say that u r a good doctor...
Virat: ofcourse I am, but now stop buttering, i came here to inform you that within two days u r going to have your next chemosession... so be prepared...
Manvi: i am always prepared Virat...
and she noticed something in his eyes... some kind of restless ness in him of which she was not accustomed of...
You know Virat, Life is giving me surprises and i am giving it return surprises... We both r at WAR... Guess who will win?
VIrat: dont know about you but ofcourse I WOULD WIN...

Manvi: and from where you came in between?
VIRAT: from nowhere, leave it
By the way, i am going outside for coffee... would you like to join me?
MANVI(with big smile on her face) : well in that case, u have to take permission from my doctor... dont know but sometimes he is so weird😉...
Virat(smiling): well i asked him and guess what... permission granted... Thats so nice of him man... he is so genuine...
Manvi: God, Have never seen anyone praising himself...
Virat: but i have seen one, so b ready at 6:00 pm... till then good bye
Manvi: but why 6 virat? why not now?
Virat: u r so fast Manvi, thats because i have to leave for hospital now.. and you should sleep for some time now
Manvi: ohkkk Virat, bye, see you soon



i hope that i didnt turned out to be weired...




Edited by crazyvirmanians - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved the update .It was not weird,but to the opposite in fact very lovely.Love the conversation between Virat and Manvi .Virat's feelings and his thoughts were beautifully expressed.Thank u so much for the pm and pls pm me wen u update.😊
Edited by preetipc - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: preetipc

Loved the update .It was not weird,but to the opposite in fact very lovely.Love the conversation between Virat and Manvi .VIrat's feelings and his thoughts were beautifully expressed.Thank u so much for the pm and pls pm me wen u update.😊

than k u so much... would do it definitely...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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of course it's not weird but a beautiful one ..
jus read both the parts n trust me i liked its every single bit...u really portrayed emotions of Virat so nicely ...
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eagerly waitin for nxt do cont. soon n yes do pm me whenever u update nxt...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: say_cheese

of course it's not weird but a beautiful one ..
jus read both the parts n trust me i liked its every single bit...u really portrayed emotions of Virat so nicely ...
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eagerly waitin for nxt do cont. soon n yes do pm me whenever u update nxt...


hey thank u so much, would love to pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh awesum
that was cool
continue soon
and thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey...it is good story...how did i miss this...i loved 2 parts...virat is a doctor...something new to read...and for ur second part its not weird..its very good...and plz continue soon...i m waiting to read...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome dear !!!!!


very interesting .


wow virat as long a doctor !!!!!


this is going to be very different and exciting .


continue soon .


And welcome to the forum dear .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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cool update
virat is manvi's doctor
continue soon
thanks for the pm

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