VIRMAN SS... SAVIOUR OF HER LIFE(chapter 4 pg6) - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
loved it
i love the way u r explaining virat's feelings
cont soon
thnx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi welcme 2 dis forum..i read ur post it was just awsme loved it...plz do pm me:):):)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
lovely update!!!!
beautiful potrayal of virat's emotions...
n virman's convo wz the highlight of dis update for me...⭐️
luvd mannu's dialogues on her war wid life...cant help but admire her character...
all in all a beautiful update...
plzz update soon...wud luv to recieve pm for ur future updates...
thnx for dis awsum piece of work!!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
chapter 3

it was 5:30 pm, virat leaves for the home, he didnt want Manvi to wait for him, good for him otherwise he knows the consequences... thinking about it he smiled and headed towards the home...
on entering home Tarun told him that Jeevika bhabhi has gone to Mandir and no one at home so if he wants to have food?
No, i will get it by myself, he replied to tarun
virat was heading towards manvi room, on entering her room, he found her sleeping...
he took a deep breath... about an hour ago she was calling him to be on time and now she was sleeping... he smiled and thought of not to interrupt her sleep and to postpone the coffee idea... virat was going to turn back then suddenly something clicked into his mind,
Why there was no smile on her face today? all his fears swept across his face... he rushed towards her.. he called out her but she didnt responded...
he quickly took her arm to feel her pulse and found it slow... he immediately checked her BP and it comes out to be severely low... he immediately inject her with the required drug and then he carried her into his arms and made his way towards the car... he was driving towards the hospital with one arm around Manvi...
he reached the hospital, hospital in which he worked as a doctor, the hospital which he owned was no more looking familiar to him... he made her way towards one of the room... he had already called the nurse and his assistant, so they were already there... he quickly took the blood samples and give it to him assistant for samples and advised him to do the required tests as soon as possible...

Something was going in his mind, he still remembered the day when for the first time Manvi had a fainting spell,

flashback
Di, you know that i cant bear the injection thing, then why u and jiju r forcing me? whats wrong with you
Jeevika: nothing wrong with me, there is no other way to take the blood samples, why dont u get it...
and then he remembered himself saying to her, For God sake Manvi, U r really a drama queen, its for once only, you are not having it in daily basis... so stop being a kid...

and Now there she was, having the injections on daily basis... life is really unpredictable, The best Giver and the same time never remains behind in taking away the things...
he was sitting just close to her, he noticed some tears on Manvi's face...
was she crying?
was she out of unconsciousness?
he thought to himself... and then it took no time to he realize that it were his tears... he was crying for her...

he Dr Virat Vadhera, who was famous for his professional approach and his colleagues thought this was the reason behind his success, was crying for Manvi Choudhary...
he wiped off his tears from her face, called the nurse and advised her to take care of her as he was going to check for the tests results...
after giving her the instructions he was going out of thr room when he saw Jeevika and Viren coming towards him

Jeevika: Virat, is Manvi fine?
Virat: yes bhabhi, she is... she will get consciousness in some hours or later but she is fine, really nno need to be worry
Jeevika nodded her head and went towards manvi

Viren: but happened to her Virat?
Virat: bhai may be it was due to alteration in sugar levels she was having a hypotension attack... i have asked for the tests otherwise... but bnow she is fine... dont worry
on assuring them he moved towards labortaries, though he succeeded in assuring them but what about the fears growing inside him... NO SHE WOULD GET ALRIGHT SOON.. he said to himself in a more determined way...
then something echoed in her mind,
tomorrow is my birthday and i wanna wish myself first of all as always...
he just closed his eyes, ofcourse Manvi u will, i will never disappoint u...

and this time more than a reassurance it was a promise to himself...


note... i am going for exams, want u people to pray for me, wanna pass through the exams at any cost... lol... love u all
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This update was just amazing amazing... I was reliving throught the cancer track of the show while reading this... Instead here Virat is a doctor... We see doctors to be professionals all the time but when it comes to their own loved ones, they become vulnerable... they get into worst fears of losing them... You described it beautifully...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
awesome update dear !..
i always love the way u depict Virat's feeling n this time too u succeeded ..
thnx 4 the pm ..
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best of luck for the examinations.. ( me too needs the same wish 😊 )
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was awesome
continue soon
all the best for your exams
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow yaar wonderful update.Love the way how u explained Virat turmoil and his feelings .Loved the way u explained about his fears and tears .Love the updates more .Each and every updates makesus to love it more.Love Virat and Manvi in the SS equally but Love virat a little more in every update.

All the best or Best of Luck for ur exams and we will pray .Dont worry do well in ur exams .U will surely pass with good grades.Best of luck😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey amazing ss..

just read all the 3 parts.. virat as oncologist..thats new..
manvi is cute. i admire her courage.. but i liked virat more.. the way he realised his love for manvi, his caring nature , his emotions, his fear, u described everything beautifully 👏.. i loved it..
thank you for the pm n good luck for your exam..👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30

hey its really awesom update.. i loved the way u explained virat's feelings.. nd thanks for PM😊

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