VirMaan OS: Facing Fears

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tulip.flora

@tulip.flora

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

aweesomeee OS !!!! emotions n feelings were depicted very well

n thanx 4 pm😊

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Ankita

@..Ankita..

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Beautifully written...DO continue😊

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VirManForLife

@VirManForLife

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

That was really touching! It describes the characters of maanvi and virat so well, and i love your writing style! Thanks for the PM, and let me know if you write another OS 😊

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BadtameezDil.

@BadtameezDil.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Beautiful Os!! After a long time...

Keep writing

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Gayathri <3 call me G3,Gayu,Gags

@-happilyunknown

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

thanks for all d beautiful comments ppl!! love you guys!!🤗

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Risha

@LivingInPajamas

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Gayathri :') I am late.damn late.But still not late enough to say what a wonderful piece of work!!Take a bow seriously because it sent tingles down my toenails just reading it ..it's just way too beautiful to describe in words-the window date and her fear of heights and specially the "there might not be another tommorow"hits me hard.It makes me realise why life is so important!

Just a very very good actor. And Maanvi was the one who had turned her life into a mere stage.

^^These two lines were brilliant! I loved this-maybe the best piece of work I have read of your brilliant ones :D

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-Aswathy-

@-Aswathy-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Aww...Luvd it Gayu... 🤗 🤗 🤗
Donno how to write the feeling after reading your OS..I will tell it in my own way..kk..It felt like I'have heard a soulful sufi song... 😊 It was soo beautiful... ❤️

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Aisha

@Aisha202

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Hey Gayathri! 😃

Was so happy to see your PM in my inbox after so long!
Absolutely loved reading this one, it's really touching and the ending is so beautiful <3