Something Like Love - Part 16 on Page 90 - Page 60

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Posted: 12 years ago
ahh! read soo much still 2 parts r left!
deeps.!😲 wat a hidden talent u write soo awsum dat it made me sticked 2 it from freshers party - fever - drums... everything was jst❤️
superb..!😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update!!!
Loved it!!
Really eager to read more of it and virika reaction when they talk it out!
Update soon and Thnks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
update soon...and awesome yr...👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome story
continue soon
virika kiss ws superb 😉
loved d story
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Posted: 12 years ago

One more day to go! 🥳

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Posted: 12 years ago
Deeps tu toh badi talented nikali!!!
Mujhe toh pata hi nahi tha mera BF itna talented hai!!!😆
Awesome story!!!⭐️
Do continue soon!!!
PM nahi kiya toh maar dalungi!!!😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks GF. :*
And sorry for making you wait K. 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Deeps-

Thanks GF. :*
And sorry for making you wait K. 😛


Waiting fast!
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 15

"Jeevikaaa! Beta, come down. We have to leave. We're getting late." screamed her mum from down.
"Coming! Coming!" Jeevika screamed back. She grabbed her handbag and ran down.
"Shall we leave?" asked her dad.
"Oh fishh! I left my mobile up. You'll go sit in the car and I'll be there in two." saying this she ran up immediately.
"Yeh ladki bhi na!" said her mum.

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Now, they were in the car heading to the airport to catch a flight to Delhi. Jeevika was busy with her mobile as usual.
Hey! :) she got a text from Viren on What's App.
Heyy! :D Jeevika replied.
Wassup? :P
In the car. Going to Delhi na. :D
Oh yea! You seem so excited. :P
Obviously! Tum se ek week ke liye chutkara joh mila. :P
Ohoo! Uski zyada khushi hai? ;)
Ji haan! :P
"Jeevika, itna kyun smile kar rahi ho? Kis se baatein ho rahi hai?" asked her mom.
"Boyfriend se baat kar rahi hogi." teased her dad.
"Daaadd! He's just a friend, okay?"
"Friend kabhi boyfriend ban jae pata nai chalta!" added her dad.
"Sahi kaha tumhare dad ne!" said J's mom.
"Mere side pe toh koi hai hi nai!" she said making a puppy face and then started laughing. Her mom and dad laughed with her too. Her phone kept beeping continuously.
"Baat kar lo boyfriend se. He'll miss you when you're in Delhi." said her mom.
"Arree nai nai! Technology. Technology keep hearts connected." Her mom and dad did a high-5 then.
"Bhagwaan ji! Bachao mujhe!"

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Jeevika's mom and dad went to shop at the airport shops while Jeevika sipped her coffee and texted Viren.

What are you getting for me from Delhi? :D
Thenga! :P
Kanjoos. :/
Tum. :P
Oh please! :P
Anyway! Kya kar rahe ho? :P
Tumhe miss. :P
Jhoote! :o
I'm Sachii! :P
Pata hai mujhe! No one's going to miss me. :(
Drama Queen! Like you'll miss us. :P
I'm going to. :P Especially, hanging out with you guys.
Uh-huh! We don't live in the 80's. There's something called Technology in today's world.
Ahh! I know. Skype and Viber. That'll do definitely. :D
Yes! Will keep you updated with lectures and notes too. :P
Blahh! Leave me alone in Delhi at least. :P
No way! :P You're leaving me alone for one whole week. So many lectures without you. I'll go mad.
Look who's the drama queen now. :P They're just lectures.
Well, B.O.R.I.N.G lectures. Which could kill someone.
Oh God! Bunk a day or two.
And come to Delhi? :P
Sure! ;)
Haha! Only if you promise that you'll make me meet some hot chick. ;)
You guys I tell you. :/ Anyway, I got to go abhi. See you tomorrow on skype maybe. :P
All right. Bye! Safe journey. :)

With that she switched off her phone and boarded her flight to Delhi.

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Viren,Virat and Manvi were sitting in a cafeteria after school.
"Why is everyone so quiet today?" asked Manvi.
Virat was least bothered to reply as he was playing a game on his phone. While, Viren simply shrugged.
"You guys are so boring." said Manvi.
"We just don't keep blabbering crap like you."
"I blabber crap eh? Viren, look at your brother. So pathetic and pissing off he is."
"Don't praise me so much please!"
"You just know one thing. And that's pissing people off. Loser!"
"Now I'm the loser? Then what are you? Maha maha loser?"
Virat and Manvi kept fighting while Viren was lost in his own thoughts. In his thoughts of Jeevika. It was clearly seen that he was missing her a lot. Like a lot a lot. He felt like calling her or texting her but felt as if he's disturbing her again and again. So he just dropped the idea. He couldn't wait for night as they were going to skype.

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That day the time just went too slow. He felt that the clock stopped ticking. He was just too restless. He desperately wanted to talk to Jeevika. Only if knew how he survived so long. Virat who was noticing all this thought that he is head over heels for. But wouldn't listen.
Viren reached ten minutes earlier at the dinning table for dinner. He waited for five minutes but none arrived. So he himself went to call everyone. Everyone except Virat were wondering about his strange behaviour today. Virat on the other hand just laughed at Viren's desperation.
After dinner dadaji announced that he wanted to talk to everyone at 10 o'clock. Viren just slapped his forehead and thought how much he had to wait to talk to Jeevika.
At ten everyone was at the living room waiting for dadaji. Dadaji came and said that his sister along with her daughter are coming the day after tomorrow from Chandigarh. After he was done announcing Viren said "Kya main ab jaa sakta hun?"
"Lagta hai tumhe bahut neend aa rahi hai!" Dadaji said.
"Haan bahut dadaji." Viren said faking a yawn.
"Jao beta. Good night!"
"Good night!"

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Viren waited till eleven o'clock but Jeevika didn't come online. Then he sent her a text.
"You aren't on skype yet. :|"
"Sorry! Can't come today. :(" Jeevika replied.
Viren was too disappointed. He waited all day but now she says that she can't come. He didn't tell her anything as she couldn't help it either. So he just sent, "Ok. No problem. Good night. Enjoy! :)"
"Haha! I was kidding. Coming in a few. ;)" Jeevika replied back.
As Viren read the text a huge smile appeared on his face. He was more than happy. He was so relieved. He switched on his laptop immediately. And replied back "Oh! But I'm sleeping now. :| Tomorrow maybe. :)"
"Aw! :( Good night then."
"I was kidding too. ;)"
"Idiot! :P Wait. I'm coming on skype."
"Waiting."

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"Dad! Can I have your laptop? I forgot to get mine."
"Yes. It's kept on that sofa."
"Thanks dad."
"What for do you need the laptop?"
"To skype. I'm going to sit here only for an hour. Too much noise outside."
"Who are you going to skype for an hour? Manvi?"
"No dad. Viren."
"Oh! Your boyfriend?"
"Not again dad. I'm sitting here because every room in this house is full. And so noisy. And you're going to tease me. I don't know where to go."
"Okay! I won't tease. I'll read my book."
"Yes! Thank You."
Viren and Jeevika were just generally talking and pulling each other's leg. At around 12 Jeevika started yawning.
"Go and sleep na. You must be so tired." said Viren.
"Yes Viren. I have to get up early too."
"By the way, Virat and Manvi miss you. Also, I'm left alone to handle their fight. God!"
"Aw! Poor baby. I miss them too. Oh! You too." she said laughing.
Jeevika's dad wondered who she was talking to. So he quickly went and stood behind Jeevika and Viren could see Jeevika's dad. He got freaked out. Jeevika didn't even realise all this until her dad whispered in her ear that he liked his soon to be Son In Law. Jeevika turned around and just screamed at her dad.
"Dad! Not fair. Again you started."
"Arre I wanted to see who my daughter was missing a lot."
"Dad. He is just a friend. Please!"
Viren was jjust looking at them and wondering what was happening.
"Okay! Okay. Can I talk to your 'friend'? Asked her dad.
"Well, only if you promise not to tease me again."
"Okay. I won't! Now may I?"
"Sure."

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I know this update was blahhh! But, my brains weren't working. And I suck at explaining Viren's feelings for Jeevika. -_- PM's's will be sent tomorrow! :)
Edited by -Deeps- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wohooo i am first!🥳
Lol as i came to know your going updating i was stuck to this page!!! I refreshed the page so many times!!!😆
You see if BF is updating then GF has to be first!!!😆

What an update!!!!
SUPERB!!!!⭐️
If you give such awesome updates when your brain is not working then hope your brain never works!!!😆
Viren has already fallen for her and even accepted it somewhat!!! I want even jeevika to realize quickly!!!
Loved Virika's watsapp convo part!!!
Lol her parents already made him their son-in-law!!!😆
Their so cool and funny!!!
Jeevika in this story seems to be like you!!!🤣
What will jeevika's dad talk to viren?
So excited!!! Feels like he will pull viren's leg also!!!😆

Deepsji your a brilliant writer!!!
I love you so much for this update!!!!❤️
You better update soon!!!!

Edited by KryRan14 - 12 years ago

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