Virmaan OS:Burning Up updated part 3

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ARRI

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Leena Pattni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

wow finally virat and maanivi meet after 2years

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Preeti Ravindra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Beautiful is the apt word 4 it!!! Ur writing style, ur plot, ur word selections- seriously Gayathri how do u manage 2 emote so well!!!??? 😳 😊

I loved d 1st part... nd Im once again in love wid d 2nd part 2!!! Thank u so much 4 ur wonderful stories nd thanks 4 d link!!! 😃

Plzzz update d last part soon..d plot is progressing fabulously nd Im dying 2 know what happens next... Whom did Virat see?? Who covered Maanvi's mouth?? Uff...getting too impatient 😆

Thank U onc again 4 d PM nd Excellent Job!!! 👏

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Sruthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

He hoped Swamini Bua wouldn't rush to hold one of her society parties.

This made me laugh like crazy!!!

Awesome work... WE all know d person who closed her mouth 😉! Do continue this amazing stuff!!

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girl_rocks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

this is just superb awsm!!!

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lavender_A2

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

I just can't wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please update today itself, pleaseee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Jesmin

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

again awesome piece of work... 👏👏👏
just love your writing...👍🏼
keep writing dear...🤗
thanks for d pm...😊

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sania

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

OMG!
Awesome!!!!
Can't w8 4 next part...update soon!
Thanx 4 pm!!

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Athira

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Loved both of their povs...Aww, Maanvi hasn't given up hope! I adore Virat's thoughts about each of his family members. Missed jeevika though. But maybe that was intentional, as thinking about jeevika will bring up maanvi again, but still... i missed the devar-bhabhi bond. I think the person who hitched a ride with Virat is either Viren or Dr.Manan. No idea about Maanvi though. Loved the scene of Maanvi in Virat's room. Simply, I loved everything ;-) update soon..