Virmaan OS:Burning Up updated part 3

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shaimah

@shaimah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

this is just awesome

please continue soon...actually today itself..please we all are very curious to read the next part..lol!!

and please do pm me!!

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Sarah Ashraf

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Very nice!! Waiting for the next part to be up. Thanks for the update and the pm :)
Love
Sarah

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@AdorableTrouble

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Main na tujhse katti hoon ! Kahaan gayab ho jaati hai tu ? I miss you so much ! But why would you care ? Update mast thi. Waiting for the next part. Hope it comes within a month 😛 Ab tera bharosa nai raha. Mujhe bhool gayi aise ise bhi bhool gayi to ? 😒 Phir bhi, waiting for the update. And you trying to manaofy me 😆 Jaldi haan ! Varna demands badh jayegi 😈

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ehmmbh_luvr

@ehmmbh_luvr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

i luvd it...your update yet again brought tears in my eyes...continue soon...n thanks for the pm!

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EHMMBH_fan1

@EHMMBH_fan1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

amazing...u have 2 continue soon gayathri😊

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neenu chandran

@NeenuAmmu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

hey my lovely sister gayu...😳
loved itr a lot... muahaaa❤️
it was just awesome...
i missing uuu🤗

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inajnar

@inajnar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Read it in one go !! So beautifully written...btw when is the next part coming ?😃

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NinaArief

@NinaArief

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

oops looks like im the last one to have read this! sorry yaar- busy life..
but you, maam, are a perfect person to request an angst ss from, you have excelled all expectations.. definitely CRAP material!! the suspense and the pain in your narration is beyond explanantion, i cant describe how intense this was and for that *hugs*..
and ill repeat what evryone else has said - update soon or there will be blood.!!!

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Menika

@BrunoMars

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

It was beautiful!

I read it over and over again,

I appreciate your work a lot.

It's so perfect and complete.

If you start to describe a feeling/thought/anything

you go till, I get the same feeling.

It's so perfect, no, beyond it.

I love the concept(s) you have come

up with. I actually wouldn't mind if

this story takes a lot of time,

I enjoy every bit of it.

Great job. Thank you for being so talented,

and sharing it with us/me.

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Aisha

@Aisha202

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#70

Awesome part Gayathri!

Totally loved it! Your descriptive details are just awesome!
What I want to know is who waved down Virat's car to get a lift?
and who did Manvi bump into on her way out of Virat's room! Can't wait to read the next part!

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