VirMan OS:The 'Last' Kiss.. - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: rev4eva

Sally, very few people can make you cry through their words and you are one of them. You made him embrace death with a grin coz it gave him the joy of joining her in heaven... I m speechless

My eyes are still teary while writing this... Do write more and some happy walla ones. If you make death so beautiful, I wonder what jadoo you can create for happy ones...
PM me whenever u decide to post ur "so call crap"... Gal if this is crap, I wonder what perfect would be like...
Love,
Revathi

How sweet Revathi😳Thank you..I will add you to my PM id..for sure😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
I'm speechless.❤️..got tears in my eyes while reading it...Amazing OS!!👏 Plz pm me whenever u update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: EHMMBH_fan1

Aww that was so beautiful yet sad..😭..Good job 👍🏼

Aww..thank you😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
You won't believe i m still crying ! Touched my heart ! Beautifully written ! 👏
this is the first time i cried so much reading an OS ! I have read many sad OS's but this one is just out-standing !
Do write more on them 😊
Edited by JuhiDoll - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
i have no words it is just ...wonderful..
loved it...
m 😭... n great job👏.. u made me cry😭😊
Edited by NeenuVirman - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: JuhiDoll

You won't believe i m still crying ! Touched my heart ! Beautifully written ! 👏

this is the first time i cried so much reading an OS ! I have read many sad OS's but this one is just out-standing !
Do write more on them 😊

Thank you Juhi.Thanks a lot:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17

nice...

but i din got the last part...

"Virat ignited fire to her pyre with a heavy heart that his life would be back to where he had started it.



"I love you Manvi!"he declared before he jumped into the fire he had ignited hoping to join her in heaven, earning shrieks of horror from the mourning crowd.



Virat embraced death with a beautiful grin on his face and looking at the garlanded photo of his Manvi which Jeevika held in her hand.



Afterall,death did not seem so bad to him!"

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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
Ummm!!!!! Supab 1 !!!!! wow!!!!! Unique :) !!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
i loved it but next time make sure manvi doesnot die pzzz,i cant imagine it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
gr8 wrk dear .👏 luvd it !!!...i really choked reading dis os..wish 2 see more of ur writing..plz pm me wenever u write next.

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