VirMan OS:The 'Last' Kiss..

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girl_rocks

@girl_rocks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

this is so freaking awsm
m just speechless
do write more nd pm me if possible

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Break.The.Code

@Break.The.Code

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Shruti21
nice...
but i din got the last part...
"Virat ignited fire to her pyre with a heavy heart that his life would be back to where he had started it.

"I love you Manvi!"he declared before he jumped into the fire he had ignited hoping to join her in heaven, earning shrieks of horror from the mourning crowd.

Virat embraced death with a beautiful grin on his face and looking at the garlanded photo of his Manvi which Jeevika held in her hand.

Afterall,death did not seem so bad to him!"

ermm..Virat is now used to the colors Manvi had brought into his life.With she gone,he has lost his colours which he doesn't like.So he wants to get back those colors in his life.That is why he jumps into the pyre hoping that he would join her in heaven i.e he would meet her there!

Hope it is clear😳

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Hooria

@hooriaa

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

After reading this u have rendered me speechless im jus shocked that this is your first os on virman
This is was jus phenomenal it was jus so emotional made me cry i hope manvi doesnt die though in the drama
Seriously this was a one of a kind
Beautiful OS

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sonika sharma

@sonika_virman

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

u know what this was sooo cute I actually cried while reading it
Amazing work

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guluna

@guluna

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

OMG u knw wat i m still crying 😭my GOD it is amazing i dont knw hw to tell u dat hw much i lovvvd this os i m speechless seriously hats off to u for writing this heart touching story👏