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Kanwal_chohan

@Kanwal_chohan

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

U can cut out the last bit
Where u have written complete crap and write
Awesome work because it was ... Can't say how
It was just loved it that's all i can say

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

loved it that was heart breaking and intense but beautifully done thanks for the pm

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Captain_Pari

@Captain_Pari

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

One simple word... WOW...

It was just wonderful.. loved the Virman scene.. and the part at the end made me cry, literally.. it was tooo good!

Hope to read more of your works soon..

- Luv Pari

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nishi12345

@nishi12345

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

omg..

u made me cry

wat a depth

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Fabulous OS Sally

Loved it

thankx for pm

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disha

@Conqueror212

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

its awsmmm sally...
emotional... heart wrenching 😭

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sneha

@snehaluvmaaneet

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

oh gosh this was amzingg

sad and happy os

u wrote so well but a sad one

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luv.u.zindagi

@luv.u.zindagi

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

oh wow...that was..you've left me speechless...! superb work dear! absolutely loved it! it made me smile and cry at the same time. keep it up! 👏

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Menika

@BrunoMars

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Beautiful, that's all I can write at this moment...

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Manali

@I_LoveYou_Kanha

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

it was so beautiful dear...so touchyy...too emotional!!

loved it..

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