Originally posted by: sabeeha
I don't know what to say, so this may just go on as a bit of a random rant. The cancer topic has always been very close to my heart, especially Leukemia. So before I write anything else, I just want to thank you for giving a credible shot at what the CVs should have done two months ago. It really touched me alot.
Jeevika's reaction was just heart breaking, I honestly found myself with tears rolling down my cheeks because I've witnessed the denial and shock of a revelation like this. My seven year old cousin passed away from Leukemia five years ago on Christmas Day. I still remember how much my mum broke down once she found out about the cancer, because even though it was my dad's sisters daughter, my mum has always loved each and every one of her nieces and nephews on both my dads and her side equally as she has loved myself and my brothers.
I mean Jeevika's reaction completley resonated with me; whilst i was reading this, I just had memories arising of all those years ago and it really shook me. That's perhaps why I'm so passionate about whatever the hell the CVs are doing with this track, so on e again a huge thank you for writing this.
In terms of the OS; the way you described the revelations to Viren, Jeevika and Virat was just flawless. The way Viren has to become Jeevika's strength so she can be Manvi's was just beautiful. And although the revelation to Virat was brief, it was amazingly effective. The thing I loved the most about this, is just how you tied in all the differing perspectives in what seems so edfortlessly. I thoroughly loved it; thanks for writing this Ayesha :)
Aww! Sabeeha...🤗 Now i really dunno what to say. First your comments on part 1 and then here...Your words have touched me immensely. I can understand your pain. Life can be very unfair or harsh for some...just like it was for your cousin. I have personally seen a lot of people suffering from this disease...so, i can understand what you n ur mum must have gone through. Also, suffering from a life-long disease myself...i get damn angry at the CVs at the way they're handling cancer.
And yeah... I'm sorry if i couldn;t do justice to the disease...or made any blunder in my narration..
I'll reply to your other post later...saw ur comments for part 2, and couldn't resist writing back.
Thanks a lot for liking the way i weaved the story. I really wanted Viren to be the sister's strength and support...but the CVs seem to be having other plans. So, i decided to ramble myself, in the story. I'm extremely relieved and glad that you liked it.
As for Virat..well, i didn't write abt him n Manvi...coz then that would've taken the story in another direction. I wanted to reveal the news to Jeevika...and hence, my focus was on them.
Also, as per their characters, writing Manvi-Virat is quite different from writing abt JV...and, i didn't want to expand my scope.
Thanks again, buddy! Your comments made my day 😃