Stroke of Destiny!!! An OS on JV and Cancer Track - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I don't know what to say, so this may just go on as a bit of a random rant. The cancer topic has always been very close to my heart, especially Leukemia. So before I write anything else, I just want to thank you for giving a credible shot at what the CVs should have done two months ago. It really touched me alot.

Jeevika's reaction was just heart breaking, I honestly found myself with tears rolling down my cheeks because I've witnessed the denial and shock of a revelation like this. My seven year old cousin passed away from Leukemia five years ago on Christmas Day. I still remember how much my mum broke down once she found out about the cancer, because even though it was my dad's sisters daughter, my mum has always loved each and every one of her nieces and nephews on both my dads and her side equally as she has loved myself and my brothers.

I mean Jeevika's reaction completley resonated with me; whilst i was reading this, I just had memories arising of all those years ago and it really shook me. That's perhaps why I'm so passionate about whatever the hell the CVs are doing with this track, so on e again a huge thank you for writing this.

In terms of the OS; the way you described the revelations to Viren, Jeevika and Virat was just flawless. The way Viren has to become Jeevika's strength so she can be Manvi's was just beautiful. And although the revelation to Virat was brief, it was amazingly effective. The thing I loved the most about this, is just how you tied in all the differing perspectives in what seems so edfortlessly. I thoroughly loved it; thanks for writing this Ayesha :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sabeeha

I don't know what to say, so this may just go on as a bit of a random rant. The cancer topic has always been very close to my heart, especially Leukemia. So before I write anything else, I just want to thank you for giving a credible shot at what the CVs should have done two months ago. It really touched me alot.

Jeevika's reaction was just heart breaking, I honestly found myself with tears rolling down my cheeks because I've witnessed the denial and shock of a revelation like this. My seven year old cousin passed away from Leukemia five years ago on Christmas Day. I still remember how much my mum broke down once she found out about the cancer, because even though it was my dad's sisters daughter, my mum has always loved each and every one of her nieces and nephews on both my dads and her side equally as she has loved myself and my brothers.

I mean Jeevika's reaction completley resonated with me; whilst i was reading this, I just had memories arising of all those years ago and it really shook me. That's perhaps why I'm so passionate about whatever the hell the CVs are doing with this track, so on e again a huge thank you for writing this.

In terms of the OS; the way you described the revelations to Viren, Jeevika and Virat was just flawless. The way Viren has to become Jeevika's strength so she can be Manvi's was just beautiful. And although the revelation to Virat was brief, it was amazingly effective. The thing I loved the most about this, is just how you tied in all the differing perspectives in what seems so edfortlessly. I thoroughly loved it; thanks for writing this Ayesha :)

Aww! Sabeeha...🤗 Now i really dunno what to say. First your comments on part 1 and then here...Your words have touched me immensely. I can understand your pain. Life can be very unfair or harsh for some...just like it was for your cousin. I have personally seen a lot of people suffering from this disease...so, i can understand what you n ur mum must have gone through. Also, suffering from a life-long disease myself...i get damn angry at the CVs at the way they're handling cancer.
And yeah... I'm sorry if i couldn;t do justice to the disease...or made any blunder in my narration..
I'll reply to your other post later...saw ur comments for part 2, and couldn't resist writing back.
Thanks a lot for liking the way i weaved the story. I really wanted Viren to be the sister's strength and support...but the CVs seem to be having other plans. So, i decided to ramble myself, in the story. I'm extremely relieved and glad that you liked it.
As for Virat..well, i didn't write abt him n Manvi...coz then that would've taken the story in another direction. I wanted to reveal the news to Jeevika...and hence, my focus was on them.
Also, as per their characters, writing Manvi-Virat is quite different from writing abt JV...and, i didn't want to expand my scope.
Thanks again, buddy! Your comments made my day 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: simmy15297

hey ayesha so far its a great story plz update part 2 as fast as u can thanks xx👍🏼

Thanks, buddy. Glad that you liked the first part...and hope the same for the second part too. 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: jenna_p

Wow!!!!! Brilliant post...👏

Now waiting for part 2...

Aww! Thanks, Jenna. You always read and appreciate my writings...it really means a lot.
Part 2 is also posted...now i'm waiting for ur comments 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: fairyland13

loved it... waiting for part 2.. pls pm me when u update...

Thanks, dear. Glad you liked the first part.
Hope the same for Part 2 as well 😊 Looking foward to your comments on it too! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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LOVED IT! You've written down there emotions just perfectly. I was actually going through different posts on the forum waiting for a good read, and at that very moment i got your pm. Thank you very much for sending in the message. Will be looking forward to more os's and an update in the ff. The show doesnt have much to offer, so we'll be needing such writings to fill our stomachs ;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nyci liked it cont sooon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Partner 🤗

Done !! don't you think it was kind a short ?? LOL 😉 and I am not being sarcastic. I mean it. It was kind a short. 😆 Well for me it was 😆

WOW !! I could picture the whole situation. Specifically Jeevi's part ! Loved Loved Loved it ! I was waiting for the OS this weekend. Thanks for the PM by the way 😃 Please do CVs a favor and send them the link to this OS. 😉

I have always said this and will say it again, You are an AWESOME writer. By the way any plans to continue this ?? (with more Jeevi part of course) 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Ayesh🤗 was wondering where you disappeared off to again😉( hope you are well now) Now to get to your OS. i am speechless. You have a way with words that just amaze me. You put into words what we would have loved to see on the screen. Guess the cvs are definately not as talented as you are. The second part choked me up literally. I really felt like I was watching it happen before my eyes. 👏 you were fantastic
Now I know the show seems to be going around in circles and honestly te cvs are not sure themselves what they want to do. They have completely mishandled the whole cancer track and I know a lot of people are totally disappointed with it. I too used to feel this way and used to take it very personally when a show I loved seemed to be getting ruined. But now I remind myself that this is just a show and that the cvs in order to try and compete with all the saas bahu serials forget what the essence of the show is( the sister s love) . Anyway I try not to think too much about it. and just try to enjoy whats salvagable of the show. Get quite irritated that even jeevika and viren dont get any screen time nowadays😕
Anyway before I go on and on about my grouses😆. let me say waiting to read the next part eagerly 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow...👏 What a superb story...

I wish they handle the cancer situation a similar way whenever that may be...I am actually a very emotional person when I watch films and shows and stuff but today I had like a bunch of tears flowing down my eyes throughout the entire thing!!!😭

You have done full justice to the characters and the storyline...I absolutely love it...Probably my fav story so far 😊

I would really like to request you to continue this...Show how they fight the battle of cancer and how Jeevika and everyone else is a pillar of strength for Mannu...Would also love to see the Vadhera's reaction after they find out😊 Especially Swamini bua😈

But thank you so much for this story once again...Excellent job 👍🏼

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