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Niki

@luvzindagi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Oh this was superb yaar...👍🏼 👏
You are an absolutely amazing writer 👏, and you are building up excitement in your readers...Please continue soon
and thanks for the PM
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Damini

@VarunKiBiwi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Awesome update!! Please pm me and thanks for the pm.😊

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sonika sharma

@sonika_virman

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

MIA man u r such a good writer yaar
I mean I love your creativity
These two were totally awesome and loved it to core
Lived the precap and paper dance hmmm quiet interesting
Don't take tooo long to update the next part

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isha.raj_98

@isha.raj_98

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

please please pm me the part u have an amazing imagination!!!!

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Aisha

@Aisha202

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Amazing Mia!😃

Gosh you're a speedy updater! 😉 Just caught up with all the parts and I must say this storyline is awesome! Along with being humorous it's so passionate - totally LOVE it! Already liking this FF more than your last one! Virat shirtless! 😳😳😳 That was such a treat! Please do write more scenes like these! and I can just feel Manvi and Virat's chemistry and tension! ❤️ Eagerly waiting to read more!

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Aisha

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ayeshapasta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Love the line virat hotter then fire 😳

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Hooria

@hooriaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Mia Mia Mia after saiyan ve what a amazing FF all the praises seem less in cuz ur jus speechless...u should seriously join cinevistaas...i literally love ur writing ur simply the best...ur talent in writing is unbeatable ur purely and simply mind blowing...I love virat to bits especially his determination on making maanvi express her love...it must havr been proper hard for maanvi to not openly drool over virat's sexy body and seductive andaaz(especially his closeness)...thanx for the pm...
Remember to pm me again when u update...Hope it is really LONG, Full of VIRMAN's ROMANCE and Perfect...Continue SOON we all want more especially ME!!!!

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shaimah

@shaimah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

hey loved ur ff😊

please update soon and do pm me!!

Edited by shaimah - 13 years ago

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love_never_dies

@love_never_dies

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Aww,, very nice update..poor mannu, its hard to stand like that infront of a shirtless virat..😉now wondering, how she will take that paper dance..😉continue soon

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Maya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: rev4eva
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Mia, took the privilege to re-read the whole FF and I m totally out of words gal. The priviledge is all mine Rev 😃

Loved the way you described Virat sensing the emptiness in his bedroom without Manvi. How you described the ornaments, sindoor,the ruffled bed and her fragrance lingering in the room was totally mind blowing. You conveyed his longing for her in such a beautiful way.The song left that effect on me I guess😛

His pain turned to fury and how he was determined to bring his wife back, that is so Virat and how Manvi described her mangalsutra has her last souvenir of Virat. Aww that part really touched me. You know, I always feel that these two will have a bond beyond boundaries of physical sense. Gosh, am being philosophical!

Loved the game Virat was playing with Manvi. She expected an angry young man to confront his wife but Virat had a different plan. I m loving this so much.How he wanted her to realize her mistake and acknowledge her love for him. Virat enjoyed seeing Manvi being bothered by his behavior is simply superb. I got no words to describe your imagination Mia esp the accidental touch during lunch.The simple way a man expresses his love to his wife. But done by our Virat, it takes a new level.

How he was so well composed despite his emotions, laid his condition and wished her Happy Anniversary. This is too good yaar, you wrote it so well till the minute details. It was so sweet of Virat to marry her just to ensure she got her treatment and how maintained his distance and promise despite him being madly in love with her. Aww you had to make Virat so sweet here yaar.The guy is already sweet Rev. I'm sure we'll see a marvellous husband in him in the future, just wait.

I'm in love with Virat and his attitude, and enjoying seeing Manvi being so helpless in resisting him. Btw the shirtless Virat scene reminded me of Jodha Akhbar scene. Finally, someone mentioned it! I am totally in love with that scene in J.A you know!

Mia, I juz wish the Cv's would read your idea in case they are trying to bring in wedding b4 love in the show. This will be a treat to watch gal...It would be a treat for all of us Rev. I so dont want a compromise marriage type with forced love. It depresses me!

I couldn't help myself from writing such a long comment, plz bear with me yaar...😊 I LOVE long comments dearie!