FF: Mora Piya Part 7 Page 20 *3/31*

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi! Here's a short intro to my next FF. I'm gonna make it as passionate as possible, ok? Will try to do this as well or better than the Sainya Ve one 😃
Intro & Part 1: Page 1
Part 2: Page 4
Part 3: Page 5
Part 4: Page 7
Part5 : Page 12
Part 6: Page 15
Part 7: Page 20
Intro:

The breeze was wet with the arriving monsoon's hint in it. When the breeze touched her face, it was as though the invisible dew drops had changed into moistness in her eyes. A teardrop trickled down her cheeks and dropped onto the paper she held. She closed her eyes and gulped down the lump in her throat. When she opened her eyes again, she saw the view of the beautiful place around her home. With a final memory captured in her mind, she turned away from the window and placed the paper on the table , taking out the bag to pack. As she started packing, she heard the song change on the stereo.

Piya .. mora .. piya .. mora piya ..

Mora piya maanat nahin .. mora piya ..

Her hands faltered as she saw her wedding's sari in the wardrobe. Memories flood in of the day her relation had changed to this house, this family. The mixed reactions she had received and the dilemma in her heart regarding her feelings.

Mora piya mo se bolat naahin

Mora piya mo se bolat naahin

Dwaar jiya ke

'.dwaar jiya ke kholat naahin

She shut the bag and went towards the door. Just as she was about to leave, she turned back and gave a last glance at her parting gift to her husband. The gift for standing with her through her death-battling phase of life. The white paper on the table. Their divorce papers. Her hands involuntarily clutched her dupatta and she left wordlessly. Leaving her home of 1 year and taking her memories of 365 beautiful days with her first and last love.

Ok, this was kind of a teaser. Its the beginning. The end of a relation and the beginning of another. Between the same people. Hope you guys will like it 😃 Please comment and show your support?
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sonika_virman thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yippi me first
MIA m so glad to read this update
It is a again a very different story from any of your other ss/os/ff . I think that she is leaving the house coz of sanki budhi update soon or else m gonna kill u
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aawhh... nice concept pm me whn u update... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Mia, awesome concept yaar... Even the prologue is so intense, can't wait to read the next part😊

Thanks for the PM and update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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heey nice one...
loved it...
add me in dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ok, here's part 1. It may seem somewhat vague and lame but there's a background story which will come in the later parts. Hope you all like it 😃

Part 1:

"Virat? Mr.Virat Singh Vadhera?" he heard someone call out to him and Virat turned to see his client's brother looking quizzically at him. He came out of his reverie and nodded his head. "Main aapko thank karna chahtha tha. Aaj aapke wajah se mere bhai ko insaaf mila hai. Thank you sir." the teenager shook hand with him and Virat mutely accepted his thanks. He was getting impatient now. His mom had called him 20 times when the session was on and had left a text message calling him home urgently. It had taken a long time today at court and Virat was in no mood for any more trouble. But when he saw the calls from his mom he knew that something was seriously wrong at home. His thoughts immediately went to her. "Kahin use kuch hua toh nahi..No, no…Manvi bilkul theek ho chuki hai right? Phir ? But mera dil kyun darr raha hai ki kuch galat hua hai?". He wanted to hurry home but his Chachu was stuck with some of their opposite lawyer team and they were exchanging formal pleasantries. Virat waited for almost 3 minutes before going over to the group and whispering to his Chachu that he was leaving. Inder didn't have any choice so nodded and Virat rushed to his car while trying Manvi's number for the umpteenth time. His wife had switched off her mobile and Virat hated it when she did that. It meant trouble and he didn't want trouble today. Not on his wedding anniversary. He sat into his car and whizzed through the lanes of Chandigarh, praying that his wife was ok.

"Manvi beta, please mat jaao! Bataao to sahi kya hua? Tum dono ke beech jhagda hua hai kya?" Vanshika tried one final time as she saw her daughter-in-law leave the house. Jeevika and Viren had gone to Rishikesh for her pregnancy's final month. Beeji had wanted the delivery at the place where Jeevika felt her parents were and the Vadheras had agreed. There was nobody who could stop Manvi now as Dadaji had gone to Delhi with Buaji for a few days. Vanshika felt helpless as she could see her third child, her Manvi leave her. Manvi hugged her mother-in-law who had become her mother "Ma, main yahan jis wajah se aayi thi, wo poora ho chuka hai. Main jaanti hoon ki mere is faisle se aapko kitna dukh pohunch raha hai par agar maine ye nahi kiya to aage jaakar is poore ghar ko dukh hoga. Aapko apne bete ki khushi important hai to mujhe jaane dijiye. " she consoled her and went out into the taxi she had booked. To take the journey back home from home. Unaware that as she went through the lanes of Chandigarh there was another car which was coming in search of her, to their home.

Virat reached home a little late thanks to an unexpected roadblock and a long diversion. As he entered the gates, he felt an emptiness set into him. Everything looked the same but he felt as though the air of happiness had been sucked out from him. An unknown fear clawing at his mind, he rushed inside "Manvi!" he involuntarily called out the name as he stepped into the hall. His eyes searched for her but fell on a dejected and broken figure sitting on the sofa. "Ma! Kya hua mom?" he asked worriedly and crouched near her, holding her hand as her saw tear stains on her face and looked at a lost looking Kadambari Chachi sitting nearby. "Chachi? Mom? Koi kuch bolta kyun nahi hai? Kya hua? Manvi!" he again called out the name but heard a slight sob escape his mother's mouth "Wo chali gayi beta. Hamare ghar ki lakshmi, meri beti , hame chod ke chali gayi. Apne ghar ko chod ke chali gayi." she said and started sobbing. Virat felt numb and turned towards his Chachi "Pata nahi Virat, kya hua pata nahi. Main bahar gayi thi, aur jab wapas aayi, to bhabhi ne mujhe bataaya ki Manvi chali gayi. Mujhe kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha hai Rabba! " she lamented to an almost lifeless Virat. She had left? Left him? Virat ran towards their room, unable to believe that he could no longer feel her presence there anymore.

Manvi felt the first drops of rain running down her face , mixing with her stale tears as she put her face near the window of the car. She had left behind a broken mother, snatched the joy of a happy family and perhaps earned the hatred of the whole clan. But somehow she felt some solace that she had at least set a man free. The man to whom she would be indebted throughout her life. The man who had her heart, her life and her soul with him. Her husband, her best friend. "Madamji, aap theek to hai na?" the driver asked, glancing at her in the rearview mirror. Manvi closed her eyes again and let the rain fill her emptiness "Sab kuch theek hai. Ab sab kuch theek hoga." she replied and the driver continued driving towards Rishikesh.

Virat swung the door open and glanced into the eerie silence of their room. He felt as though the vibrance and the colour of his world had left with her. He walked into the room and saw the stereo switched on but paused. Mechanically he switched it on again and stood in front of the mirror, trying to find her in himself.

Darpan dekhun, roop niharun

Hoo darpan dekhun, roop niharun

Aur sola shringaar karun

Pher nazariya baitha bairi

The song playing washed over him and he glanced at her bangles and jewellery kept intact on the dressing table, none of them looking beautiful without adorning her. The box of sindoor was open and he could imagine the red powder sitting majestically on her parting, reminding him of their relation and his right over her. The red bangles she had worn during their wedding were scattered on the table and he felt their sparkle had decreased without her hands to wear them.

Kaise ankhiyan chaar karoon

Koi jatan ab, hoo koi jatan ab kaam na aave

Usse kacchu sohat naahin

Virat moved to the empty bed and caressed the ruffled up bed spread where she must have placed her bag, while packing it. Virat almost felt the subtle fragrance of Manvi emitting from the pillow, her wet hair's dampness spread on her side of the bed where she would have dried her hair before leaving. Suddenly his eyes fell on a stark white paper on the table and something magnetic pulled him towards it.

Mora piya mo se bolat naahin

Mora piya mo se bolat naahin

Virat took out the paper from underneath the heart shaped paper weight he had bought for her during her birthday. He tried to read the legal looking document with his tear blurred eyes and furiously wiped the tears. In a matter of second his pain changed to fury and then frustration as he saw the scawly writing of her's in a small paper attached to the document.

"Ab tum azaad ho. Hamesha khush rehna. " he read and slammed the papers back on the table. Damn! What was she thinking?! How could she set him free when his heart had already surrendered to her?! "I'm not taking this Manvi" he resolved to himself " Tumhe wapas aana hi hoga. Ab main tumhe dikhaaunga ki mujhe freedom ki nahi apni wife ki zaroorat hai. And you are not getting away from me , Mrs.Manvi Virat Vadhera!" he said and took out his own bag to pack. To start his mission of getting back his mad wife.

Ok, how bad was it? 😆 Comments please!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Mia, I m speechless yaar... You have left me with no words to describe how wonderful , awesome is this update.

I just have to say that your FF have swept me off my feet, I LOVE this to the core. Loved every bit, every emotion and everything abt this yaar...

🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow nice concept :)
Love it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ur question is wrong ask how good was it????

and my answer it is awesome as usual actuaLLy im fed up of appreciating u everytime yaar u r tooo goood...love jur writing as always plz continueee
Edited by lakshm - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey MIA
It was amazing. I loved this part . And is looking forward to the next part so update soon. Understand?

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