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wowww virat shirtless... awesome... loved it.. waiting for next part...

@imsid LOl! Even Prachi,Aaliya,Reva and the others have been forcing me to come on fb :P I guess I'll do that pretty soon. Just that I am not that big a fan of fb, thats it.

hey mia cm on fb soon ya nd do tel me wen u create ur account. U r nt less than a celebriti fr me.

Hi nice update yaar its realy osum pm me wen u do next prt ...

wow wowww mia this update ws tooo tooo gud...am soo soo loving this...smart naughty virat n poor confused soul manvi...😆... fab update...n continue sooon...cant w8 for their dance...😍..n thnx for d pm...

amazing update!!😆

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Mia, took the privilege to re-read the whole FF and I m totally out of words gal.

Loved the way you described Virat sensing the emptiness in his bedroom without Manvi. How you described the ornaments, sindoor,the ruffled bed and her fragrance lingering in the room was totally mind blowing. You conveyed his longing for her in such a beautiful way.

His pain turned to fury and how he was determined to bring his wife back, that is so Virat and how Manvi described her mangalsutra has her last souvenir of Virat. Aww that part really touched me.

Loved the game Virat was playing with Manvi. She expected an angry young man to confront his wife but Virat had a different plan. I m loving this so much.How he wanted her to realize her mistake and acknowledge her love for him. Virat enjoyed seeing Manvi being bothered by his behavior is simply superb. I got no words to describe your imagination Mia esp the accidental touch during lunch.

How he was so well composed despite his emotions, laid his condition and wished her Happy Anniversary. This is too good yaar, you wrote it so well till the minute details. It was so sweet of Virat to marry her just to ensure she got her treatment and how maintained his distance and promise despite him being madly in love with her. Aww you had to make Virat so sweet here yaar.

I'm in love with Virat and his attitude, and enjoying seeing Manvi being so helpless in resisting him. Btw the shirtless Virat scene reminded me of Jodha Akhbar scene.

Mia, I juz wish the Cv's would read your idea in case they are trying to bring in wedding b4 love in the show. This will be a treat to watch gal...

I couldn't help myself from writing such a long comment, plz bear with me yaar...😊

Originally posted by: Khushnav

Shehroon, if you keep this RES as it is I will murder you this time. I mean it ok? All my recent works you have commented RES and left it. Theek se comment kar na? :P

oh my god..