SS A STORM BREAKOUT upated chapter 12 on page 8 - Page 4

Ooh scary precap but amazing wirrten. Keep write more!

Nice...dear...amazing writting...pls do continue... 😊

Part 9:

"Gautham try and understand the Payal rape case getting risk, please I request you stay away from." Shuritya speaking Gautham phone, while Shuray over hears the convestion say out loadly to himself "Gautham you had can't learn Dev to stay away from things that don't concern you." Shuray walk away when Gautham reply "Please aunty dont worry about or Sonali we promise Dev that we will get justice for Payal." While Akash has listen to the whole confusion between Shuritya and Gautham, and Shuray plans to get ride of Gautham.

Akash get worried and call's Druga "Hey Akash everything ok," Akash reply "No Druga everything not okay, we have saved Dev but Gautham and Sonali life in danger. Shuray has plan to kill them tonight." Druga not stock at all Shuray sick in head, Druga reply "Don't Akash I will not let Shuray harm Gautham or Sonali". Druga rush of phone and goes out Dev room to go help Gautham. Druga thought Dev a sleep but heard everything and think "why Gautham I told so many times to stay away from case, god dam it I can't even move. Please god don't anything to Gautham."

Shuray get Gautham houses with his firends he really beats Gautham up, and Sonali. Shuray then about kill Gautham and Sonali just then fake police which send by Druga. Shuray and his firends run away. Druga and Akash to save Gautham and Sonali but both badly injuried especially blood in comine every where. So Akash and Druga rush them to the hosital.

To be continue...

Precape: "I'm sorry Mr Gautham we won't able save your child." Gautham is heart broken, Druga is unable take and crying by Dev bed. When Dev sightly move hand Druga head strocks it. Druga Shock by Dev movement...

Part 10

"Please doctor Dhayal save my wife, her smoach has not stop bleeding." Doctor Dhayal nods and say's "Don't Gautham I won't any thing happen Sonali trust me, in mean time get your dressing done." Gautham shacks his head and says "No Doctor Dhayal I'm fine." Then Druga say's "Baba right. Baba don't worry I'll Gautham dressing," Then Doctor Dhayal attend to Sonali who is badly injuired and operate on her. Sonali is badly injuired, she has alot of intial injuires. She was 6 months pregnant but dues injuires Doctor Dhayal unable save baby but he manages save sonali. A few hours has pass doctor Dhayal come out segury and break news to Gautham. "Gautham I'm sorry we won't able save your baby but Sonali fine."

Gautha heart broken, then Gautham hears Druga speaking Akash "I have Shuray Gonika, he had rape my sister first. Then took my parent away, then killed Nitya who is me. Forcue me be Druga, then Dev now Sonali and Gatham. Shuray a animal you will have pay for it." Gautham is shock Druga no other then Nitya, he very upset and angry, he walks Druga and claps hand "Very clever Druga or shall you Nitya. " Then Druga try explain to Gautham "please Gautham let me explain" Gautham is faurious as he know how much Druga hurt Dev who like brother " Forget dont try explain. You know Druga Dev loved Nitya. Dev had open up RTI file get Payal justice not go against you. You know Druga I really pity you, you had true firend who always wanted best in you. But you push him away, there no use feeling gulity now, Dev in condition because of you. Anyway I dont time chat people like you, I need be with my wife."

Gautham walks away breaking Durga completely she run Dev round and seat next his bed. Hold his hand cry her heart out say "Dev please forgive me, I cause nothing pain" Druga sobbing away when feel Dev had on head strocking Druga suprise and says "Dev"...

To be continue...

Precape : " Druga this great news and improvement on Dev nevious system back slowly." Then Dev trying say Nitya which Druga hears realises her Dev has reconise her.

Wow gautham is so mean to her😭 I hope dev is not so mean to her😊 Superb😉

awesome...
dev makes a movement.. means he is on road off recovery...
continue soon...

Read all the uodates in 1 go
Bit tired now
Superbb
Just fantastic till now
Totally fabulous
Update soon
I m waiting
Plz make an index 👏

Originally posted by: diti96

Read all the uodates in 1 go
Bit tired now
Superbb
Just fantastic till now
Totally fabulous
Update soon
I m waiting
Plz make an index 👏

Thank u for your comments.
As requested put a index page 1

Part 11:
"Baba" Druga cryed out loudly. Doctor Dhayal rush to Dev room "Beta what happen." Druga went to Doctor Dhayal " Baba Dev just strock head." Then Doctor Dhayal went do Dev check up. As Doctor did Dev check up, Dev said soft voice "Nitya." Then Doctor Dhayal said "I think Dev trying say something, as Dev said again "Nitya." Then pointed at Druga, Druga sense Dev reconised her. Druga had tears in eyes, as Dev continue softly "I'm sorry" Dev had so much pain and tears in eyes. Druga went wipe tear and nod asking him to stop tears and pain. Doctor Dhayal was happy that Dev was slowly more then that his daugther her love back.

Then Doctor said "Welcome back Dev slowly you recovering with some one love and care." Doctor smiled at Dev and Druga think to himself "may Durga maa keep both you together." Then Gautham knock door and say "Hi Dev how u." Dev smiled nodd to say his fine. The Gautham said with gulity face to Druga "I'm sorry Druga I should'nt of reacted that why, I was just angry and hurt." Druga smiled and said "It okay, I can see your love and effection for firend Dev." Gautham smiled "Dev not just my firend his my brother, baba papa meaning Arnav uncle had stood by us when my dad pass away. Dev been there for us through tick and thin I just can see him in pain. I know what happen was miss understanding so im sorry once again." Druga smiled say "Gautham please saying sorry now firends" Then Druga shock hands become firend, Dev smile thought "thank god you made the two important people in my life firends.

Then few weeks pass Druga help Dev with phyical excise slowly Dev was getting better, Shuritya saw Druga and Dev together and thought " I found prefect daughter inlaw for my son, Druga love him so much." Shuritya went asked Druga "Will please be my son bridge" Druga was plesantly suprise and she smile shyly.

To be continue...

Precape: "Nitya I'm sorry for not being there when you need the most" Druga stop Dev from talking and just hugged him, Shuray had seen this said himself "So Nitya you played duty game on me, I'll make sure that you pay for it. I'll make life hell worse then your sister payal"

Nice one. Hey u can put the title for latest part in the FF title, that way we will know it is updated.