SS A STORM BREAKOUT upated chapter 12 on page 8 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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just cant wait for next update
plz update soon
plz send a pm to me when u udapte so i can read soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey this is fab yaar!👍🏼
All the parts are good.. loved it❤️
Plzzz PM once you've updated the next part!😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 6

Druga and Shuritya arrive at the hospital, Druga take Shuritya into Dev room. When they both walk into Dev room, Dev has instend smile face see his mum and may be Druga is not so bad, all care he see in her eyes but also see pain her eyes which cant figure out. Shuritya final come to her sense and Dev hug, and kiss him. She tell of "Dev where all these day you know worried about you" Dev feel helpless he cant his mum tear or tell her anything, all has pain in eyes and tears. Which not unnotice by Druga, the gulity is killing Druga by inside as all this happen because. If only she didnt provoke Shruya against Dev, then Dev life wont in danger. Druga blame herslf for Dev condition, the whole always want see the good in her and help get justice for Payal she was to blind in revenge that she couldnt anything else. Druga notice Dev jacket which all burnt and hanging side of bed, notice his chain and pentant that she gave him.

She quitely takes why Shuritya talking Dev "Dev what happen to you, answere question Dev for god sake"...Dev can't stop tears and helpless that he not able talk his mum. When Doctor Dhayal come in, Shuritya say Doctor Dhayal " Doctor Dhayal what happen my son why can't talk move." That when Doctor Dhayal example Shuritya Dev condition. Shuritya unable take truth run out room crying as she cant see her son Dev in such condition. Druga goes after Shuritya and say " Aunty please be strong Dev he need you now more ever". Druga give Shuritya tight hug, make her feel better.

After few minutes Shuritya say "Do you know and why this happen Dev." Druga feel a little tense as Druga know that shuritya is inccoent all the Geonik sin. But Shuritya think the world Shuray and Rajnat, Druga doesnt know how break news of Dev accident which was cause by Shuray. Shuritya say "Beta what it is you can tell me" Then Druga build carage on tell the who event what Shuray plan was and Druga make listen recording from prevouise night when Shuray made plan to kill Dev. Shuritya feel sick and upset how could Shuray make plan kill his own brother Dev and why. Why is Druga put micro phone Shuray pocket what going on..

To be continue...

Precape : "Druga why are doing all this" Druga in dielomia to tell Shuritya the truth about her iddenty.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey🤗This is awesome yaar!👏
Loved it❤️
Do Update soon!😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Superb updates dear...
Very well written... I love it...
Poor devga...
But your story was so nice...
Please update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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just love it
plz update soon
when dev and durga going come together
but so easily shaurya is in their way adn sakish
best of luck
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 7

"Dev having accident which plan by Shuray. Druga you put a micro phone in Shuray jacket pocket but why Druga. What are hiding from me. In eyes I alway seen some kind pain in them. What is it." Shuritya ask Druga, who is two mind where to tell Shuritya full truth real identiy or not. Shuritya sense the tesion Druga face, but kind person Shuritya she doesnt like interfer people personal life and make feel unconforble. So Shuritya put her hand Druga face and say "It ok if don't tell me your pain that fine. But when every you want I'm here beta and thank for saving Dev life which the most important in my life. After Arnav Dev papa had died I had nothing life accept Dev, if wasn't Dev I would dead along time ago." Druga get emotional after Shuritya word, she can't hold emotion any more she just hug Shuritya and cry. Shuritya find contection with Druga like Nitya. So Shuritya hug her back say "Beta it okay everything ok. You know you remind of lovely girl I knew for years I love like my daughter and love of my son life Nitya. " Druga shocked hear what Shuritya was saying as she continues "Sadly my son faith not with him, he always wanted tell her but the was never on his side." Druga has tears on eyes she wipes them and say "Dont worry aunty I will make sure that Dev get his love and find Nitya for you. But for now we need look after Dev. Aunty please kind request not tell your family Dev alive otherwise Shuray will try kill him again." Shurity smiles and reply "Don't worry I wont say anything. Now we better go back to Dev he must be wondering where we are".

Druga smile say "Aunty you go head see Dev, I just need make call. I'll see you in a few minutes." Shuritya goes Dev room while Druga goes to the tolets, and take Dev chain with pendnat in there out pocket. Then open and see her and Dev picture in there. Druga get flash back from time she gave it when he was going USA and said Dev put picture his girl firend. Druga can't any more and cry loudly and says "I'm sorry Dev for pain I have caused you. You always looked out my well being but what did I do back stub you. I don't deserve your love. " Druga cant tears, Doctor Dhayal sense Druga is hurting. Doctor pass through wash room and hear Druga crying. Doctor Dhayal knock on door and asked "Druga beta you okay." But no response Doctor try few times but no reply. So he descide to go in, Doctor Dhayal on floor seating holding Dev pendant wiping. Dr Dhayal goes seat Druga and wipes Druga tears and "Sssh beta it okay." Druga just hug Dr Dhayal tell him that Dev was inccoent all this time and how wrong she was about him. Dr Dhayal just Durga and confort her.

To be continue...

Precape : Dev lets Druga take care of him, allow her give him a shave, cut nail and clean up put new cloths take walk. Also feed him dinner at favourite park. Dev see Nitya in Druga the way she talk and smiles. Dev has alots question mind which Druga can read in his eyes...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing continue soon
Love it ! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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soo cute
amazing
cant wait till next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 8

Few days had past Dev was getting Druga coming with his mum, but this morning for some reason Shurity was not able visit Dev. Druga walk through the door, Dev just looking at Druga with his eyes he asked Druga "Where mum?" Druga smiles and say "Dev I know you waiting your mum, but today she had work that why she couldn't make. Please allow me to get you ready." Dev smiles and nods to say yes. Then Druga get his toletterie bag but shaving on him, Dev remember Nitya as one day help save when shaving on her know. A little tear come Devs eyes, when Druga say's " Dev I know you miss your Nitya I promise you we'll find her." Dev feel contection with Druga like did with Nitya, and Druga could sense that but there was reason why Druga was not telling truth as she wanted Dev get better. As any shocking news can be life treating for Dev.

Druga gently gave a shave, then with help of the nurse gave spounge bath and put favourit shirt then come his hair. When Dev was all dress with help the nurse Druga put Dev on wheel chair. Dev look at Droga asking eyes "What this and where we going." Druga smiles and reply "Dev I know think why got wheel chair because go out and get fresh air. Today take to your favourit place and have your favourit like we used to" Druga stop there think was thinking she neally let Dev know she Dev, Druga has tears in eyes as feel helpless she cant tell Dev she Nitya and how much she love him to.

Dev just think what Druga hiding and why is she so much like Nitya what contection. Then get to the park Dev and Nitya use come, then goes Devs and Nitya favourite spots to have lunch. Druga feeds Dev chilly panner and nann, Dev teast and thinks "this just way Nitya make it. Why everything Druga does the ways she talks and laugh all like Nitya." Druga think " I know you want know what real idenity is. Dev I wish that could tell the eyes who you looking for is right you but I'm helpless please forgive me Dev." Then Druga chain full which Dev notice and it chain Dev gave Nitya...Dev then realise Druga no other then Nitya...Dev say "okay Nitya it all make sense you angry thing the plazal fit together. I will wait for the day you revel the truth to me" Dev just hug Druga and say sorry for not being there her in crise.


Precape : Shuray here Shurity talking Gauthem saying be careful with Payal rape case, but it my son dream get payal justices. Shuray plan get Gautham out way will Druga able save him...

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