SS A STORM BREAKOUT upated chapter 12 on page 8 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awwh poor dev, he can only hear Hope he can do more someday
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 4

After long 8 hours saguri on Dev, Doctor Dhayal come out the operation theature. Druga rushes to doctor Dhayal and say's "Baba how's Dev"...Druga notices her Baba being tense, Druga is worried as Doctor Dhayal "Well I have done best but it's hard say next 24 hours very cirtical for Dev, we will have wait and prayer he regain constion otherwise he can go in coma."

Druga take divya in hand and prayers for Dev life, while on other hand Shuray get call from the track drive to say job done. Shuray is under the impresion that Dev died he get happy. Shuray get home, and he see the police talking to Suchitra saying " Mrs Geoginka we found some belonging son in car crush, car totally burnt and had blast. We beleive that person did not serve the crash." The police hand a bag with Dev wallet which has Nitya picture Suchitra, Suchritya state stock she screams and say "no Dev you can't leave faint" When Skashi grab back save from fulling, skashi had everything and first she true tears eyes and feel her babhi tears.

Back at hospital Druga by Dev bed when get call from Akash, Druga pick up phone say "Hello". Then Akash say's "Hi Druga have look at news paper today" Druga confuse but in no mood talk about revenga at moment all that on mind is Dev well being. But she reply "No why Akasha what so special". Then Akash reply "Druga Dev dead, and Geonika is shaken by news. Sadly Suchritra madam is in state shock she unable speak anyone". Druga is shock news but glad the Geonika think Dev is dead aleast she protect Dev from Sharay. But at same time feel bad Dev mum, as Druga new what Dev meant to his mum.

Next morning Dev regain consions and open his eyes then see Druga in lap sleeping beside his bed. Dev try speak but able also move but ni hope. Druga get up notices Dev has regain constion Druga happy and give Dev tight hug. Druga tears in eyes, Dev confuse in why he got so much effection a person who hate him. Druga notices Dev trying speak and move but not able to. Druga scream "Baba look what happen Dev" Druga has tears eyes Dev see love in Druga eyes and gulit Dev really confused. Mean Doctors come examise Dev and does couple test,,,,,..,Then with analise inform Druga "Beta im sorry inform you Dev nerve system completly broken, he can't speak or move but he hear everything you say." Druga is speechless and shock shs just has tears eyes, as doctor Dhayal continue "But that does mean he stay like all his life with right teatment, love and care i promise he can be better" Druga wipes her tears and says " Baba i will look after Dev and make he get better ".

To be continue...

precape : Shuritya is in Dev room and holding on Dev childhood toys and crying. When Druga come in Dev room wipe Shurita tear hold hand and take to Dev.

Edited by indian10 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i just love it
wonder how dev breaks failed
i feel bad for durga and dev
plz pm me when u update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
just read all parts. It's a beauty. Please continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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all parts in one go dear.it was lovely .please continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was amazing!, can u please update today for more?😃😃 I cant wait
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Tfs..its wonderful... 😊 continue dear..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 5

Dev is staring at the celling when Druga walk chumpy and bubbley "Good morning Dev look I have brought food chilly panner". Dev confuse how Druga favourit but the think nothing of, Dev think it all act Druga put on and turn other way as think Druga still hate why does stop fake concern. Then goes in front with a smile and say "Dev I understand your upset as in the past I have cheat you and treated you like shit but I really care about you." Dev no mood in listening Druga as frusted he cant talk or move. Then seat next him and say "Dev please dont be angry" Dev give dirty and angry look at Druga. Druga remeber all Dev from she was Nitya, so Druga smiles and say "okay anrgy young man you be upset at me please dont out on food" .

At moment Dev remember Nitya, just Doctor Dhayal walk say "Good morning Dev, how you" then Dhayal check his four head and "oh my god you have fever, you need medician but you need eat..." But no use Dev doesnt and stuburn not eat. Worried Doctor Dhayal "look Druga eat he wont get better, and I feel he has loss hope in life." Druga wipes her tears and says "No baba i wont let Dev loss hope I'm gone get Shurita aunty." Then leave to go to the Geonika house.

Druga walking Geonika house everyone wearing white and seat glands on Dev picture feels bad. Then see Shuray who has fake tears his eyes, Druga pretend show sympty to Shuray but think to herself "murder n rapist you will punish for sin" Druga goes her condulance everyone Shuritya is no wear be seen. When ask one searve where she they tell Druga that Shuritya is Dev room. Druga quitely when no one looking sneak in Dev room and see Shuritya seat on floor looking lifeless and holding Dev child toys and tears rooling her face. Druga feel bad and goes wipes Shruitya tears and give hug. Then hold hand sneak out goinka house and take to the hospital to see Dev.

To be continue...

Precape: After seeing Dev Shuritya get normal, that when Druga tell what happen Dev. ?...
Edited by indian10 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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fantastic update...
let durga clear dev's misunderstanding...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow amazing written. Pfff cant wait for precap😆

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