SS A STORM BREAKOUT upated chapter 12 on page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello firends,I'm back again after alot FF stories for EHMBH for long that was my favourit but now Ek Hassina Thi. My story very short it about when Durga/Nitya find her best firend, her life and soul Dev was innocent all this time he never sent such email.
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Part one

]One cold night Shaurya out with firend's at bar drinking at table but little he notices in his jacket pocket Durga has hidden a mirco phone. Durga in car listen whole converstation, Shaurya is laughing and saying "My big brother Dev is biggest fool ever and such idiot." As Durga carries on listen as Shaurya continues " He trying get hold of his best mate Niyta who we killed and distroyed before she died she call out for help from Dev...But saddly that message never got her thank to you Karan." Durga has tears rolling her checks remebering all this time hated Dev but he was innocent, as Shaurya continue dirty month talking " Karan you the master of hacking how u hack in Dev email reply to Nitya that Dev will never go against his family in reality Dev wanted come to India. But thanks to dad contact he stop Dev getting Visa and how he black mail badi maa to stop Dev from coming to fufill Bada Papa dream..." Shauray laugh lordly as Durga is filling empty and hurt from inside totally broken and thinking how could think her Dev betray her...

As Shauray continue " Big brother why can't you leave thing alone...I'm sorry badi Maa and brother but Dev it's time to you to go badi papa im sure he waiting for..." Durga is shock with Shaurya plan and say's "I dont think Sauray you may have distray Nitya but not Durag or her love I wont let you distroy her love".

Precap: Durga driving fast and fallowing Dev, trying get his attention to stop going high way but it to late Dev has massive accident track and car crust...Dev shouts Nitya as Durga runs crying Dev...

Index:
Part 1 - page 1
Part 2 - page 1
Part 3 - page 2
Part 4 - page 3
Part 5 - page 3
Part 6 - page 4
Part 7 - page 5
Part 8 - page 6
Part 9 -:page 6
Part 10 - part 7
part 11 - page 7
BR]Part 12 - page 8
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I love this ss please write more and fast!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome one... plz continue soon...
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Part 2

As Durga hears Dev in touble she says "Dev you haven't anything so why should be panish I am coming. Dev your Nitya coming save from Devail who brother" saying that Druga try call Dev on mobile but no answer, so Druga ring Akasha find out if he know where is Dev " Hello Akash you have any idea where Dev is?"

Akasha suprise why Druga is asking for Dev as reply"Why Druga ? You shoul worried what happen..." Druga get fastrated and say "please Akash with 50 question just anwere my question you know where Dev is ...I dont have time example to you know will tell you later." Akash a bit hurt Druga spoke him in such rude manner, as reply "Druga Dev head toward Dehil high way, he going dehil find Nitya..." without wasting time Druga say "Thank askash" and rush toward Dehil high, Druga notice Dev car she descide but to late there big track come in Druga way, Druga try over take it and get Dev attention but there another track coming head Dev he try break realise his break are fail before you know the track smash car and hit fire...But the car door open as car roll and Dev body out...Druga stop car and scream Dev run toward...She manages get Dev out the car ...As Dev is unconsions but still mumbering "Nitya" Druga has tears in eyes "Dev your nitya right beside you nothing wil happen to you...Im really sorry for everything but I will not let anything happen to you"...

Druga rush Dev to hospital...to be continue soon
Edited by indian10 - 11 years ago
Serena.V thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awwhh poor Dev, now i need more! It was superb!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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AHhh finally koi Ss milla... Its awsum continue soon... N do pm me if possible...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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oohhh this is tooo good, waiting for more ...
great work
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey yaar!🤗 This is fab!👏 LOved it ❤️nicely written!👍🏼
Plz do update soon!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 3

Druga gently take Dev head put lap and take her dupta and cover Dev head which cover in blood while whole body is injuired badly and full burn...Dev find difficult breath as it like taking last breath, Druga just pain her eyes and tears are none stop rolling down cheeks as say"please Dev stay with dont loss hope...I will not let anything happen to you" Then Druga gently place Dev head on car seat and get in front in drive seat driving as fast she can to the hospital, whilst "Dev please hung in there and stay with me" .

Druga final reaches Doctor Dhayal hospital , she rush out luckly she bump into her baba, but Druga no state to talk and she has blood all over her clothes...Doctor Dhayal shock see Druga in such state "Druga you ok? What happen beta?" Druga in shock states and histrical as unable speak she point car, Doctor confuse but he know Druga very well she only get this emotional when her love one are hurt...So without wasting any time doctor Dhayal rushes to car and Dev who is badly injuired. Doctor curry Dev into hospital and get ward boys to take to special empancy room...

Then take Druga and put on beanch , and say " Druga dont worry I'll will not let anything happen Dev" Druga still in shock at this stage on able speak, Doctor feel pain and understand without Druga saying a word. Then finally Druga come her senses hugs doctor Dhayal then says "Baba please save my Dev." Then Doctor Dhayal assure Druga nothing will
happen Dev he will save him,.,,

Doctor Dhayal attent to Dev who laying bed who got burn all over his body accept face but head badly injured...Doctor operate on him while Druga prayer to Druga maa saying "Please maa for once please forgive my sins for suspect my true firend and love who always prayed for my protection. But in return what did give him just pain, in this revenage inoccent people are getting hurt, please save my Dev. I cant live without him."


To be continune...

Precape Doctor Dhayal manages save Dev but Dev has lost speech and unable move, all he can do is hear...Druga is shattared that Dev in such state due her mistake.
Edited by indian10 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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oww nooo

he can now just hear this is soo sad...but nice work

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