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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#61

Sanju bro!

Chapter 1 is too cute!

Childish friendly banter!

Destiny is waiting to play its part...

12 saal pehle...

Can't wait!

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#62

Adorable chapter!

From exam apprehensions to freedom!

From preparation for shows to fulfilment!

Perfect 6 ki tarha perfect!

Highlights for me were "Enigma", "Holding his hand too tight" and the last bit, I'm here for you..

I'm loving how you're developing the piece!

And now that my long due comments are here, please update bro!

🤗

Also, I'm loving the editing and packaging of each chapter, very well polished!

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San

@slippedaffairs

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#63

UPDATED ON PG 8

chapter 3!!!!!!!!

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San

@slippedaffairs

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: orion23
This is so epic!
The epilogue is brilliantly gripping!

"Kisi ko waqt kai saath milta hai aur kisi ko maut kai baad"

This slayed it for me!

Hooked bro!

And Coming home... That was always love!

Zo!! Finally!!

Love Ya <3 Thank You so much!! :)

You meant Come Back Home! Yes it id and if not for you and many others, I would've had never started this.

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San

@slippedaffairs

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: orion23
I loved the first part!
Very intriguing...
I love how you've given the central premise and the story will be divided into two parts...
Loving it bro!
😳

that's chapter 0! 😆

well had to keep everyone bound somehow na.

i am happy you are. :)

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San

@slippedaffairs

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: orion23
Sanju bro!
Chapter 1 is too cute!
Childish friendly banter!
Destiny is waiting to play its part...
12 saal pehle...
Can't wait!

Yes 12 years before which is so long but no I don't have the puberty effects which were actually quite late in the show, they were what? 16 when they separated? Height samjh ata hai, shakal hi badal gayi, waah! 🤣

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San

@slippedaffairs

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: orion23
Adorable chapter!
From exam apprehensions to freedom!
From preparation for shows to fulfilment!
Perfect 6 ki tarha perfect!

Highlights for me were "Enigma", "Holding his hand too tight" and the last bit, I'm here for you..

I'm loving how you're developing the piece!

And now that my long due comments are here, please update bro!
🤗

Also, I'm loving the editing and packaging of each chapter, very well polished!

so much inspired by Chinese school dramas which are so nostalgic that it made me cry.

yes, all those celebrations from preparation till the day of execution it's such a rush and you make so many memories along the way.

She will always be an enigma to him and i won't snatch that right from him. 😆 Well as said perks of being her best friend. ;D As I said she needed assurance at times and even if she never asked him for that, he still did and that changed in the next chapter and you'll find that as you read it.

I am loving ki how you are finally her. :p

Thank You rai!!! <3