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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Wow Sanju !!

Loved it ya !!

Childhood sweethearts... Destiny playing it's part !! One amazing tale it is going to be !

I liked the set up !!... Their camaraderie !!... The dialogues !!

Vividha... Nikita... Rohan... Vivan... Names feel so familiar 😆

Present ... Past to Future ...I am hooked !!

And do complete this one !!

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Hey Sanju

❤️

I am sorry I am so late at reading this 😔

But well here I am! Uff I need to remind myself everytime that IF doesn't support google emoticons 😆

ANYWAYS.

this was interesting to read...specially the first part!

Pyaaz k paraathe and incecream ne bhook bdhaa di yaar 😳

great going . I am so proud of you mera baccha 🤗

keep writing.

Just one request. I am not on IF I only came back for you...so can you please watsapp me the link whenever you update. That way I will not miss out on future updates.

Mwuaaah ❤️

Keep writing.

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Hey Sanju

❤️

I am sorry I am so late at reading this 😔

But well here I am! Uff I need to remind myself everytime that IF doesn't support google emoticons 😆

ANYWAYS.

this was interesting to read...specially the first part!

Pyaaz k paraathe and incecream ne bhook bdhaa di yaar 😳

great going . I am so proud of you mera baccha 🤗

keep writing.

Just one request. I am not on IF I only came back for you...so can you please watsapp me the link whenever you update. That way I will not miss out on future updates.

Mwuaaah ❤️

Keep writing.

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#24

superb update sanju.

school days are best memories

interesting.

thnx for pm

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Apoorva Kushwah

@akrocks77

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Hey!!

Lovely Start!!

Beautifully written.👏

Quite interesting story.

So many new characters involved.

Intrigued to see how this shapes up.

And how things arrive to the situation mentioned in the zero chapter.

Loved reading it

Do continue soon.

Apoorva

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Soni

@Dreamy_Girl03

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Really very interesting dear... I had a great time reading it... Continue with the writings.. All the very best..

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San

@slippedaffairs

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_
Wow Sanju !!
Loved it ya !!
Childhood sweethearts... Destiny playing it's part !! One amazing tale it is going to be !

I liked the set up !!... Their camaraderie !!... The dialogues !!
Vividha... Nikita... Rohan... Vivan... Names feel so familiar 😆

Present ... Past to Future ...I am hooked !!

And do complete this one !!

Hey!! I am glad you did. Haha!

I will definitely complete it.

Originally posted by: vatika_r
Amazing update

Thank You <3

Edited by Meraki. - 7 years ago

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San

@slippedaffairs

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
Hey Sanju
❤️
I am sorry I am so late at reading this 😔

But well here I am! Uff I need to remind myself everytime that IF doesn't support google emoticons 😆
ANYWAYS.
this was interesting to read...specially the first part!
Pyaaz k paraathe and incecream ne bhook bdhaa di yaar 😳

great going . I am so proud of you mera baccha 🤗
keep writing.
Just one request. I am not on IF I only came back for you...so can you please watsapp me the link whenever you update. That way I will not miss out on future updates.
Mwuaaah ❤️
Keep writing.

Hey!!!

Ah it's okay ya.

Ha! Tujhe bhook kab nahi lagti ?! 🤣

Love Ya!! okie dokie will do that. :)

Edited by Meraki. - 7 years ago

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San

@slippedaffairs

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Arpi1234
Very nice

Thank You <3

Originally posted by: _Eternity_
superb update sanju.
school days are best memories
interesting.
thnx for pm

Thank You <3

Ah no problem.

Originally posted by: akrocks77
Hey!!

Lovely Start!!
Beautifully written.👏

Quite interesting story.
So many new characters involved.
Intrigued to see how this shapes up.
And how things arrive to the situation mentioned in the zero chapter.

Loved reading it
Do continue soon.

Apoorva

Hey Apoorva!

Thank You so much.

I am glad you loved it.

Thanks for dropping by.

updating soon. :)

Edited by Meraki. - 7 years ago

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San

@slippedaffairs

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#30

"Sumo out of all the people, what are you so nervous about?" She was one of the smartest people he ever came across, having a photographic memory had its perks and yet she was nervous like the average people who studied for hours and even then weren't able to process all the information.
"Shravan it's hard okay ?! It's programming I am scared shitless about." She shushed him with her glare and again focussed on the Computer Science book in her hand whispering curses over her fate which had Shravan roll on the floor with laughter.
"God knows at what time I decided to take this subject in my elective."
"My bad fate."
"Shravan snicker one more time like girls and I'll tear up your skin with those pointed nails of mine;" which obviously had him settle on his assigned seat.
He looked out the window, pretty confident that he would not flunk this exam. He was nervous the night before, but there was this certain person who calmed him, yes the one who was on the verge of having a nervous breakdown. He looked at the sky having orange-yellow hues and looked at the ground which almost had the color of sky mirrored, it was autumn in Mount Abu and it looked ethereal, he breathed in the fragrance of leaves falling from the trees. I could never get over this sight, this place. He sighed.
Summer did pass sooner than anyone expected, having a tight schedule and spending time with Suman; it went on pretty well and soon after the school reopened, and since then he couldn't remember when he had a fun roaming around the city with Suman as they all got busy in preparing for their half yearly exams. He looked at her, eyebrows scrunched and short lengthed hairs flying out from her well braided her- making her look like a mad woman. He laughed internally as he figured why everyone's so scared of her. She did look scary.
They had been friends since like forever but he never was able to figure out completely. She was like an enigma to him, a beautiful mess, a mess he never wants to clean up but just figure out the surprises it had for him. He may seem like a man in his twenties with all those thoughts but certain things had him grew up too soon, too fast and she became even more important to him as he could always behave like people expect him to for his age and maybe even younger with her.
The bell rang and he smiled at her and did her a thumbs up.

Soon August was coming to end and exams were which never got them relaxed as it came with school festive season and celebrations and had them on their toes. Preparations for teachers day were on the full swing, Suman obviously decided to script and produce a play as she never liked the limelight where everyone seemed to have the rights to judge you, point out your flaws and asses you when they themselves aren't capable of assessing themselves. Shravan took this chance happily to be more indulging in school activities and Suman got him indulged with the student body duties along with being the host for half of the celebration.
Vividha was a born dancer, her sharp moments, hands coordination, her expressive features and the amazing body lifts dripped with perfection had everyone in awe since the practice sessions. Her mother was great in dancing and so was her grandmother. Growing up, dancing somehow from the source to feel close to her mother became her passion but it was a passion she never wants to pursue professionally, it was something she'd like to keep personal to herself.
Suman stretched her body as they rested after a half hour jog in the evening, It was a leisure day after a week full of hectic work. The celebration was after 3 days but they had every decoration done, the show coordination and performance practices were completed which had all of them exhausted and thus resulted in a day off from having a stay at school till evening for practices.
"You seems so tired, I can almost see wrinkles Sumo. You are getting old." Shravan said with a chuckle.
"Yeah right. Like the way I can see you losing your hairs soon and on a way to become a toddler." Suman gritted her teeth and held his hairs in her fist almost ready to pull them.
"Sumo not my hair okay? Speak from mouth na, why are you using your hands?!" Shravan smiled a little looking at her irritated self and quickly released his hairs from her fist.
She sat on the ground with a thump and tied her hairs in a tight pony again.
"Kya hua?" Shravan asked softly and clasped his hands on his lap as he rested on the bench with his legs in a criss-cross position.
"Shravan I am so scared right now, what if no one likes the play?" Suman looked at him without blinking.
"So what Sumo? That is their problem, we don't need validation from people who don't even know the work you do." Shravan sighed and patted her back.
"Shravan they will think that I am just all talk and nothing," Suman said in a sad tone. He helplessly looked at her, of course, it was time he thought. He was thinking that the sun was rising from another world, he figured her anxiety days ago and was waiting for her to just spill it to him.
"Suman first of all, the play would do great, I have watched it during the practices and you've actually outdone yourself and your team is amazing too. Second, it doesn't matter what they say Sumo, you need to believe in yourself, they can think whatever the f**k they want." Shravan pulled her to her feet and they started walking back to their places.
"Shravan I care. I can't help myself." Suman looked shocked at the last part of what he said and said as a tear left her eyes.
"Sumo.." Shravan looked at her and held her from her shoulders. She looked at him and cleared her eyes.
"I know you do care but you tell me, you want to believe me - your best friend or those people who don't even care ?" He looked at her with utmost care.
"I trust you." She whispered and both started walking again. He smiled as saw her smiling again. It was a mere three words sentence but to both of them, their emotions held onto that sentence, it was something they needed to go through their lives like people needed water and food to live physically, they needed such simple phrases, sentences to feed their emotions to stay stabilized.

"Oh my god! You guys were amazing." Vividha gushed to Suman and Rohan and the other students who were part of the play.
"I know right! After watching their performance I can't actually wait for ours Viv." Nikita hugged Suman and jumped with excitement holding onto Vivaan's hand.
Rohan laughed and kept his elbow Suman's shoulder, "of course it had to be amazing, Suman made us do practice so hard and herself went over with our costumes. I thought she'd die with the stress she took."
Suman brushed his hands and blushed and mumbled a thank you. Everyone laughed at her embarrassment and Vividha hugged her tightly.
They looked at the stage from backstage as Shravan made jokes with the audience as the helpers were picking up the props they used in the play, behind the curtains. "I am sure Shravan almost died when Suman was holding his wrist during the play. You could see the marks of her fingers and well need I say anything about the nail marks ?!" Vivaan joked and everyone laughed as Suman showed her tongue to him.
"Can I ask about what you guys are laughing like hyenas?" Shravan came to them as the curtains opened for a singing performance. Everyone nodded and pointed at his wrist to which he laughed and other laughed along.
"Well I can't complain now, can I? I signed up myself for this when I decided to be her best friend." Shravan pointed at Suman to which she shrugged and smiled.
Vividha, Nikita, and Vivaan moved to the stage as the announcer announced for their dance performance. Rohan quickly went to the auditorium to take his seat as Sharavan and Suman stood on the sidelines of the stage which had curtains as it hid them from the audience.
"Told you it would be amazing. It's you, it had to be." Shravan whispered and smiled.
"Thank You, for being here. Always!" Suman smiled softly.
"Cross my heart." Shravan blinked his eyes cheekily and both of them moved behind the stage to help other.

Suman laid down with her head on Vividha's lap as they sat around the bonfire burning on the school grass ground. Being seniors had its perks, they had their share of night stays after school functions and some outdoor trips to tourist places around.
"It looks so beautiful and peaceful here." Nikita sighed and rested her head on Rohan's shoulder.
"Yeah, and it would be ruckus from the day after tomorrow, studies, tests and more celebrations." Vivan came with a tray which had burgers and a two-liter bottle of coke with some paper cups.
"Our tenth-grade maths teacher's farewell as well." Rohan piped in.
"And as I just hanged out with the student body, we have an annual function coming up too," Shravan smirked at everyone's wide eyes.
"Crap! And it's our last year to actually do something together, I don't we would have that much time next year." Suman pulled herself from Vividha's lap and took her burger.
"We'd do something together, it's something to talk another time." Vividha caressed her head like one does to a dog to which Suman smacked her hands and gritted her teeth, "I am not a dog for god's sake Vivs."
"isn't there something to drink?" Suman looked around.
"Can't you see the big bottle of coke?" Vivan wiggles his eyebrows.
"After so many years of being friends what part of not being able to drink coke you don't understand Vivan. It's a clear-cut sentence." Suman said in a sarcastic tone.
"Yeah every time she decides to drink it, she couldn't even finish half of the ten rupee bottle and then we'd have to drink." Shravan laughed and pointed to himself and Vividha.
Suman kicked his legs with hers and scowled.
"Here." Shravan takes out a limca can and gives it to her.
Suman looked up at him and took it excitedly "thank you!" and gave him a quick hug.
To others, it seemed strange as they were not able to accept the fac of Suman being so carefree with anyone other than Vividha but to their small group, it was the most natural thing. They did take time to accept the new addition to their group but as the time passes, Shravan took his own place and they from the fabulous five became the perfect six. They were never so close before, maybe it was because it was the last two years, maybe it was because of him but they loved every part of it, they embraced every part of it, the hard work, the pain, the worries and their friendship.
"You know I'll always be there right?" Shravan asked as they roamed in the garden in circles.
"Me too," Suman whispered and smiled at him. The stars twinkled and the night became colder but all of them held the warmth, of love, or care, of memories they created and would take on for forever in their lives.

A/N : I really hope you guys liked it. It's not a lot but then again this is a short story. There's not a lot to tell in the school days except their trust at each other and the formation of their upcoming relationship. I am yet to introduce all the characters. Also, I have been told about Nikita, Rohan, Vivaan names ringing a bell, believe me, I had them as they were super simple and super catchy names, although Nikita is one of my favorite character from a show so I have her personality super cleared in my mind but I love that name anyways.
Love, Sanju <3

Edited by Meraki. - 7 years ago

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