Alaahida - A ShraMan Drabble - Page 6

Originally posted by: orion23

LMAO!

Ji bilkul!

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Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

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That's good to know...,,😳

Hum bhi time pass hi kar rahe rt they...😛😆

Res to hamara janam sidh adhikaar h...😆

Originally posted by: Nik03

Ye kahin suna suna sa hai Tabby😆

Haha. ..aapko to bola bola lagna chahiye 😆

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

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Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

So many words come to my mind, when it comes to this one and yet not one to truly describe it.
Aww man! Thank you so much Sal! 🤗
First of all, the title which I feel stands true for the Relationship they shared throughout the show.

It does, doesn't it?
What I loved about this piece was how the parallels displayed their hidden feelings.

I aimed for that, and you felt it! Yey!
Your pices are extremely beautiful Zoya but what makes this one stand out for me is that you made me feel for both the characters and most of the time, your stories (actually every writer's story on the forum, even me) tend to accentuate Shravan's pain, so when someone gives me an insight into Sumo's world to mujhe bohot accha lagta hai, because I feel that this is the Sumo, we never got to see.
I know.. I have a bias cause I connected with him more.. But the past few pieces of Alfaaz or Mrs. and Mr. I have tried to bring forth both of the, With Alaahida I wanted equality.. I'm glad I could do justice!
Wo bole na bole, usko bhi takleef hoti hai and this was heartbreaking yet so fulfilling to read. 💔
Sal ya... Shukriya!
And what do I say about the sharayi?
Jo bhi bolna hai bol do...
Stupendous. Out of the world.
Thank you love!
I actually feel and that shayari is one of the form where you have to be actually really good to pursue it, to keep writing and you my friend ace into this department! Teach me some time! 🤗

I honestly don't think I'm so good.. But ping me for tips whenever!