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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: ZehriliChidiya

Finally

This was such a cool surprise Resh 🤗
Pura din kharab gaya but this update was so so relaxing. ...
I am so happy you are going to continue this ❤️
Loved the update.
I feel so sorry for Sumo... Shravan ko aisa nahi behave karna chahiye tha😵
But now that Sumo has her attitude up... I feel scared that her Sharp tongue will cause havoc 😳
Make everything fine yaar. ... Aakhir mey toh Shravan ki Sumo hona he hai 😆
Love ya,
Anu 😳

Anu baby🤗
I am glad I could provide you some relief sweets.😃, aga divas ka wayit hota Punn?
Hmm..you have guessed it pretty right about Sumo here. She's pretty annoyed right now..let's see.
Aakhir mein shayad akal de doon dono ko.
You study hard my love!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

How long it has been since I have read something from you?!
You might have had a block while writing this one, the chapter flowed with such ease that I didn't even realized when it had ended.

Thanks Sal 😃.I have never been this apprehensive about writing before. Somehow this story gave me this biggest block ever.


she knew for a fact that what she was experiencing was love and not some teenage crush I really like the characterization here, for her to be so sure of her feelings at this tender age is so rare.
It is rare undoubtedly. But guess what, I had a friend in school and she used to like this senior. Me being the oh so ever prude used to tell her that it'
Infatuation and she was sure it isn't. The couple have been married for a decade now..so some have that rare trait of conviction I guess😆

She wanted to study hard now because he wanted her to excel, she wanted to wear more of blue because he liked it on her. Love brings out the best in people. ❤️
The love that makes you better yourself is the true love..the urge to change likewise or in any other way should come from within you though, shouldn't be forced.


One day whether you are 14, 48 or 75 you will meet that one person in life who would start a fire in you that would never end. Suman somehow knew, her fire had already started. ❤️
😳😳

Suman smiled as she remembered how many times had she touched her forehead that evening to feel that kiss. My feellls. I feel that forehead kisses are the most beautiful way to show affection towards someone as you won't give it to anyone.
Yup..it somehow a promise to care I feel.

Oh the hurt, I secretly wished he had turned around and saw her when he was saying that she was only his responsability, so the guilt would have been even greater. 😆
You know these kind of breakups..where you know your actual place in someone's life when they are discussing you with a third person, the impact is way deeper than the usual ones.

I guess Nirmala's Relationship with Shravan is the replica of your own equation with your son. ❤️
It is. Though my son is decade or more younger than Shravan here❤️😳,
The element of comfort and need remains the same.

Okay, so I have really missed your writing I was even reading Kinara yesterday so basically I need the next chapter soon, soonish, sooner.
You Sal, are a sweetheart🤗, a true EKDVian . You were reading Kinara? That's sweeter!
I remembered It too since a newbie discussed both Kinara n Goodbye Shravan with me over pms just the other day😊

Lots of love from me to you!
Lots of love Always for you!

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Posted: 7 years ago
Beautiful update
Oh I felt sad for Sumo... Shravan shouldn't behaved like this.
Now Shravan triggered Sumo attitude mode..
Shraman tashan 😳
Loved it

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Posted: 7 years ago
What's with Shravan now? I hope he does have a valid explanation. And Sumo being Sumo might simply worsen the situation.
Long time no see Reshma! Welcome back! 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: -Emerald-

Beautiful update

Oh I felt sad for Sumo... Shravan shouldn't behaved like this.
Now Shravan triggered Sumo attitude mode..
Shraman tashan 😳
Loved it


Arthi my love! So good to see you here😃

See their tashan is like that dash of nimbu on a yummy chaat..uske bina sab feeka hai😆

All will be explained in the next update!

Take care!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: nuttynuts

What's with Shravan now? I hope he does have a valid explanation. And Sumo being Sumo might simply worsen the situation.

Long time no see Reshma! Welcome back! 🤗


Nutty girl..it's you that I haven't seen for a long time!
Even on Twitter!
Busy are you?

He does have an explanation..valid or not is for Suman to decide.
And Sumo is well..Sumo! Let' see😆

You please be regular babe..the forum needs to move.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: reshmanair356


Nutty girl..it's you that I haven't seen for a long time!
Even on Twitter!
Busy are you?

He does have an explanation..valid or not is for Suman to decide.
And Sumo is well..Sumo! Let' see😆

You please be regular babe..the forum needs to move.


😃

Been a bit busy the last week. Have got loads of catching up to do🥱
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Posted: 7 years ago
Loved reading it😳
Sumo seems to be unnaturally brighter than our real Sumo😆
And Shravan Malhotra has much more attitude than he had in his teen years actually.
Loved all of it. Would wait for more.
Update soonish. 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Ranified009

Loved reading it😳

Sumo seems to be unnaturally brighter than our real Sumo😆
And Shravan Malhotra has much more attitude than he had in his teen years actually.
Loved all of it. Would wait for more.
Update soonish. 😃


To what do we owe this rare appearance here?😆
I thought we were busy worrying about the career path of our beloved bhoot!

This one story has become the bane of my life, so I am genuinely relieved that you liked it.

Will do update asap.
You keep visiting..and better still write something on Shraman for us
For the recent couple is not the one I can connect to 🤗

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Posted: 7 years ago
Poor girl dil ke hathon majhboor fall in love in just in 2 weeks. but the boy who was not sparing glance on her. But why Shravan was angry with her. He was avoiding her like plague 😒 Now when he want to mend their friendship. 😔

So Shravan coming back after decade from US. 😛

Thanks for Pm Reshma
sorry being late 🤔
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