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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: Nitequeen
Mmm...
I knew I wud love this chapter before reading it...

I knew something good ws coming...
Aand u proved me right...

Mujhe San kuch pata hai
(aage bhi achhi achhi chapters aane wali hai )

Thank you soo much...

Humse chutkara Abhi do din ke liye mil sakta hai...
But after that phir se nudging aur nagging for next suru...

Haan ji Madam. Aap na hoti, toh kalti kar chuki hoti main😆

I am so so happy that you liked it.

Accha chapter likhne mein waqt lagta hai, but I will try and update asap.

Thanks for being this sweet🤗

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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

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AnuradhaMG

@AnuradhaMG

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#143

Dear Reshma,

That was a wonderful update after an eternity of waiting for it...but loved it...

Some story cooking up...something had happened...kya hua tha zara jaldi jaldi batana...

luv
Anuradha

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_anukulgr8

@_anukulgr8

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#144

Finally

This was such a cool surprise Resh 🤗

Pura din kharab gaya but this update was so so relaxing. ...

I am so happy you are going to continue this ❤️

Loved the update.

I feel so sorry for Sumo... Shravan ko aisa nahi behave karna chahiye tha😵

But now that Sumo has her attitude up... I feel scared that her Sharp tongue will cause havoc 😳

Make everything fine yaar. ... Aakhir mey toh Shravan ki Sumo hona he hai 😆

Love ya,

Anu 😳

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shirly amirja

@shirlys

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Posted: 7 years ago

#145

Thanq so much di for updating...as usual the chapter was just awesome...waiting for more

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KitkitMkb

@KitkitMkb

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+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#146

How long it has been since I have read something from you?!
You might have had a block while writing this one, the chapter flowed with such ease that I didn't even realized when it had ended.

she knew for a fact that what she was experiencing was love and not some teenage crush I really like the characterization here, for her to be so sure of her feelings at this tender age is so rare.

She wanted to study hard now because he wanted her to excel, she wanted to wear more of blue because he liked it on her. Love brings out the best in people. ❤️

One day whether you are 14, 48 or 75 you will meet that one person in life who would start a fire in you that would never end. Suman somehow knew, her fire had already started. ❤️

Suman smiled as she remembered how many times had she touched her forehead that evening to feel that kiss. My feellls. I feel that forehead kisses are the most beautiful way to show affection towards someone as you won't give it to anyone.

Oh the hurt, I secretly wished he had turned around and saw her when he was saying that she was only his responsability, so the guilt would have been even greater. 😆

I guess Nirmala's Relationship with Shravan is the replica of your own equation with your son. ❤️

Okay, so I have really missed your writing I was even reading Kinara yesterday so basically I need the next chapter soon, soonish, sooner.

Lots of love from me to you!

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: akrocks77
Hey!!!
Nice Update😃
Why do they both always have to act so stubborn and stupid
Hope they sort out everything.

Excited for the next.
Do update soon

Apoorva

Hey Apoorva!

Thanks for reading sweets😳 I actually didn't know what to do with this story and hence the delay.

Shravan and Sumo have always been moronically obstinate. Can't help it.😆

I will update the next part soon 😊

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: deltadawn
The fire that burns a lifetime❤️
When two ambitious, extra reasonable nerds meet in the story of Ms. Practicality, this bound to happen.
Aur kya😆. Future over feelings..my pick any day.

I am split in two halves, the all heart one wanted them to confess a young love and chuck it all.
I had the same dilemma while writing. Then, I and you we both know what's the lifespan of these teenage romances. If the ache stays years later as well, you have hit the jackpot!

But the little bitsy practical me is happy. It's difficult to push that raging hurt, the pull, the excitement of new found butterflies away and focus on the important things in life. I respect the teenage shraman for doing that.
There, you said it all!😃

Ten years or more, a love based on such companionship and mutual support, helped by matured minds will stay forever strong. Will eagerly wait for the last part Resh.
Isi bahaane tu forum par toh dikhegi😆

Some people are twisted upstairs, when they can write a blooming, beautiful romance this well, they dwell into murder mystery! 😉
Blooming romance, it's kind of sweet honestly.
And a pathetic murder mystery at that. One nice episode is all we get for the time invested.

Thanks Delta🤗..somehow it sounds very alien to talk to you here now.

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
good

Thanks Mystic 😳

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: AnuradhaMG
Dear Reshma,

That was a wonderful update after an eternity of waiting for it...but loved it...

Some story cooking up...something had happened...kya hua tha zara jaldi jaldi batana...

luv
Anuradha

Super glad you loved it Anu❤️

Bilkul..koshish yehi hai ki jaldi bataoon😃

Love you!