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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: reshmanair356


Thanks love. And I have to catch up with your story, which I will shortly 😃


Yay! Waiting to hear you thoughts. 😊
Edited by BloodRune - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey!!!
Nice Update😃
Why do they both always have to act so stubborn and stupid
Hope they sort out everything.

Excited for the next.
Do update soon

Apoorva
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Posted: 7 years ago

Goodness Tabby..fastest unress ever for you👏

Treat yourself to an ice cream on my behalf❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: reshmanair356


Goodness Tabby..fastest unress ever for you👏

Treat yourself to an ice cream on my behalf❤️

Hahaha... ghat jaati hain aisi durghatnaye kabhi kabhi! 😆
A chocolate ice cream ... 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey,
Nice story di.
It was a bliss to read all the chapters early in the morning in one go. It was there in my reading list from a long time but time nahi mil raha tha padhne ka and jab aapka pm mila toh I thought time bhi h aur mujhe neend b nhi aa rhi thi toh padh lu.

Update soon!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Mmm...
I knew I wud love this chapter before reading it...


I knew something good ws coming...
Aand u proved me right...

Mujhe San kuch pata hai
(aage bhi achhi achhi chapters aane wali hai )



Thank you soo much...


Humse chutkara Abhi do din ke liye mil sakta hai...
But after that phir se nudging aur nagging for next suru...



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Posted: 7 years ago
The fire that burns a lifetime❤️
When two ambitious, extra reasonable nerds meet in the story of Ms. Practicality, this bound to happen.

I am split in two halves, the all heart one wanted them to confess a young love and chuck it all.

But the little bitsy practical me is happy. It's difficult to push that raging hurt, the pull, the excitement of new found butterflies away and focus on the important things in life. I respect the teenage shraman for doing that.

Ten years or more, a love based on such companionship and mutual support, helped by matured minds will stay forever strong. Will eagerly wait for the last part Resh.

Some people are twisted upstairs, when they can write a blooming, beautiful romance this well, they dwell into murder mystery! 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

entire life on a weird diet of chicken and chocolates...feels familiar !

😆😆...Kindly attribute it to a certain someone😳

A fourteen year old Sumo had taken two weeks to fall in love. Just two weeks and a fixed route of commute with a boy who never spared her nerves and there.. her tender heart was in love... ye Un Dino ki baat hai. ..😳
These kids I tell you😊. Yeh Un Din has Delta and Sanjh as ardent followers, I don't watch it. Will start now.

One day whether you are 14, 48 or 75 you will meet that one person in life who would start a fire in you that would never end. ...14 to 48... hayo rabba... kuch zyada hi gap hai...😆
Well..I remember Raj Babbar singing 'Na umr ki seema ho"
😆

Suman smiled as she remembered how many times had she touched her forehead that evening to feel that kiss. Aww!
Pehla pyaar hota hi khoobsurat hai😳

Sumooo, this was the tenth time that you narrated that incident to us, and it was actually cute till the second or third time know." Avni yawned in absolute exasperation... haha... cousin woes!
I swear. Cousins and friends can ruin even the most memorable moment.
I had actually imagined my best friend .

she saw a an angry him storming off the cafeteria with his result sheet in hand... kuch to hua hai...
Paarkhi nazar aur Tabby super😆

"Pushkar ko bada pata hai Sumo ka." ... ahan... I like that !
Bhai, our Shravan is forever possessive.

Reasons ?!
Tum sunogi na?"... sunley Sumo...aagey hain lambiya si judaiyan !
Sun leti Sumo, toh ek chapter aur na likhna padta.

She chided herself the very next second, nope, she wouldn't. Never... uff...
Batao😕😕

Loved this one !
Thanks Tabby😳

Update soonish!
I am on it.

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: BloodRune

I got so many questions now! I know it's too soon but... Update soon!! 😃


I know..the next part would be conclusive. So all your questions would be answered😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: tarushiv

Hey,

Nice story di.
It was a bliss to read all the chapters early in the morning in one go. It was there in my reading list from a long time but time nahi mil raha tha padhne ka and jab aapka pm mila toh I thought time bhi h aur mujhe neend b nhi aa rhi thi toh padh lu.

Update soon!!!


Taru..that's so sweet of you darling ❤️
I am glad you found this blissful.
I wake up pretty early myself..so I know the feeling.

Will update soon😃

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