Unfinished Business- FS (Part 3 updated on page 17)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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So it's my jigri Lubs ki Saalgirah ( I adore this honeybunch) and I had planned something for her..but couldn't finish it due to multiple reasons. My head of planning, Deltadawn, suggested that I at least post a Foreward to the story now and post the OS later, and as always she made sense😃...so here it is folks.

P.S- I travel to my mom's house in India tomorrow and any female who has moved in circles around the Pavitra Agni will understand my euphoria 😃..nonetheless, I might not be around as much as I would like to for the next one month owing to the annual relatives visiting spree but I will definitely pop in as and when I can or when Namik posts😉

Miss me😳

Foreward


Little Sumo was terribly upset, all thanks to that new boy in her locality. This had never happened in the whole of her 12 years of life on this earth.

He came, He saw and He conquered with ultimate ease.

He was tall and lanky and had already taken over the hearts of all we friends, in spite of the fact that he had moved here only a couple of months ago. The other kids warmed up to him in a matter of days, it was only Sumo who was yet to break the ice with him and the reason for this was quite simple, he was a jerk who stole away her importance. She was no longer the star of the group. It wasn't her that Nihal approached for help in Math homework now, it wasn't her that Riya came running to build a bird house, it wasn't her who was unanimously chosen as the leader of their colony cub scout group and it was definitely not her who was envied any more for throwing the best birthday parties that their colony had seen, it was all him .the star of Royal Enclave, Shravan Malhotra and Suman Tiwari was sure that she hated him with vengeance.

She wanted nothing more than him to leave, he wanted nothing more than her to lose. She was chaos to his thoughts and he was poison to her heart , her and him..they were unfinished business.

Part 1- Page 5
Part 2 - Page 11
Part 3- Page 17





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Posted: 8 years ago
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Happy Birthday Lubs.😃 and thanks tumhare birthda ke liye one lady came out of her no writing shell !!
Resh, hooked I am !! I need ot go book myself a flat in Royal Enclave to watch over the proceedings from now on !!

India has 4G now ok so please be there and please oh please update. We all know about your impeccable phone typing talent now😉

Really want to know why she is chaos to his thoughts😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: deltadawn

Happy Birthday Lubs.😃 and thanks tumhare birthda ke liye one lady came out of her no writing shell !!

Resh, hooked I am !! I need ot go book myself a flat in Royal Enclave to watch over the proceedings from now on !!

India has 4G now ok so please be there and please oh please update. We all know about your impeccable phone typing talent now😉

Really want to know why she is chaos to his thoughts😆


Dipsy❤️
I have no idea Dips 😆..what exactly is the chaos..actually I don't even know for now what to write and how to take this forward, probably once I am well fed and terribly nagged, I will get a clearer picture of what to do with my Shraman😃




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Posted: 8 years ago
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Dipsy❤️
I have no idea Dips 😆..what exactly is the chaos..actually I don't even know for now what to write and how to take this forward, probably once I am well fed and terribly nagged, I will get a clearer picture of what to do with my Shraman😃





Yes food definitely helps. also shraman is a respite from caring, fussing, nagging moms always 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Tashan!! I live for this ;)
Can I see a future in this story where the childhood ennemis become best friends and then lovers ? ;)
I would love to see this transition, if you decide to extend this.
Please write more and have fun 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: deltadawn


Yes food definitely helps. also shraman is a respite from caring, fussing, nagging moms always 😆

Thank you so much Resh!!! Prologue me hi itna tashan hai to aage kya hoga... I'm too excited for this. They are like opposite poles, the more tashan the more they attract to each other. Jealous for what ever reason brings out what's deep in their heart. I can't wait. I told u to update after coming back from India but after reading this😳 My Heart Goes Hmmm... time mile to jaldi update karna.

Dips my Birthday got me out of no writing shell too😆😆
Ab tumhari baari Fate update kardo jaldi se. I have a new neighbor who's a firefighter, usko dekh kar tumhare Shravan ki bahut yaad aati hai😆 Saare Firefighters ki kasam tumhe🤣 jaldi update karna!!!!🤗

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yay yay ppl resurfacing !! Lubs thanks to your birthday 😳 Phele Kyu nahin Ayi 😉


Btw Resh feel you bro 😆😆 happy holidays have fun being fed food and fodder!! Sh..ks I meant other fun stuff of having to meet n greet family and RELATIVES 😛 and the monsoons respite compared to whr we are camped 😳

Take your time as long as get Shraman we are good !! ' Intezaar and Unfinished Business ' toh humari taqdeer mein likha hain learnt to deal with it 😉

Safe journey

Xoxo
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Tashan!! I live for this ;)
Can I see a future in this story where the childhood ennemis become best friends and then lovers ? ;)
I would love to see this transition, if you decide to extend this.
Please write more and have fun 🤗


What's life without a little Tashan?😆...Haven't yet mapped the path leading to the transition..but the destination would be the known one babe😃

Thanks Sal🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: LubSha

Thank you so much Resh!!! Prologue me hi itna tashan hai to aage kya hoga... I'm too excited for this. They are like opposite poles, the more tashan the more they attract to each other. Jealous for what ever reason brings out what's deep in their heart. I can't wait. I told u to update after coming back from India but after reading this😳 My Heart Goes Hmmm... time mile to jaldi update karna.

Lubs🤗..will write this as soon as I settle down darling. I promise😳. I love it when they compete and so I thought of this.

Dips my Birthday got me out of no writing shell too😆😆
Ab tumhari baari Fate update kardo jaldi se. I have a new neighbor who's a firefighter, usko dekh kar tumhare Shravan ki bahut yaad aati hai😆 Saare Firefighters ki kasam tumhe🤣 jaldi update karna!!!!🤗
Fire fighter for a neighbour . ..is he burning hot like Shravan?😆
Usse kam koi attractive nahi lagta.

Hope you had a great birthday Lubs! !
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Posted: 8 years ago
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You left this business unfinished Reshma! Enjoy your hols and come back and finish the business. 😉

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