Shraman ss: SOCHA NA THA part 7(page 17 - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
Hi Piya Di,
abhi ke liye res
thodhi der baad unress karungi😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
Really wonderful 👏
Shravan thoda sa irresponsible hogaya hai uska class lena padega 😉 😃
Sumo waiting for Shravan to have dinner with him but Shravan ne bahar dinner kar liya and it's obvious that sumo will feel bad about it. .

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Posted: 8 years ago
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It was emotional roller coaster of Shraman story. 😭
Shravan is too busy to see what her eyes says, pehle toh bina kahe hi samaz jata tha Shravan now what happened 😭 law firm establish karne mein itna busy he doesn't have time for his wife. 😲 Sumo was also not so vulnerable how she become so senti. 😕

I hope zyada emotional wala story nehin hoga.

Vinu
Edited by vimikrao - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
Di nice update...Shravan dint catch the lie sumo said"...can't wait update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
Beautifully penned Congrats piya 👏
Best part is ramnath care for sumo... interesting continue
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
Normally i don't like sad stories but i love your stories
thank u

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing update
Everyone in the Malhotra family cares for Sumo
But Shravan is so busy that he didn't even messaged Sumo about eating outside
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 2


The room is totally dark
Shravan just changed his position of sleepg...and turned around towards her side
He stretched jis hand and found a soft body is breathing heavily...

He touched her

Is she having fever...he snapped open his eyes... get closer to her...

Cheacked her body temperature by placing his hand on her forehead n neck...

Sumooo...
sumooo

"Hmmm kya hai shravan" ... suman said in a sleepytone...

"R u alright...?? Fever aya kya???? "Shravan got up and he got up putting his body weight on one elbow..

"Kya shravan raaat ko sone donna... m alright... "suman mumbled

Shravan smiled...

"Idhar aao... "he pulled her close to his body and wrapped his one arm on her petite body...

Shravan soghed in relief...
He snuggled to her shoulder...
"M sorry sumo... aj sachmein late kar diya... "

"Hmmm ab so jao... "sumo mumbled

"Gussa ho ... ??"shravan asked in a sleepy voice ...
Suman is in deep sleep
Shravan pulled her more close
He smiled
Sumooo... my sumo...
come on shravan 2 saal shaadi ho haya .. teri hi to hai... jab chaye jee bharke deekh le...

Suman clutched his shirt in her fists
Shravan placed a kiss on her fists


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Suman opened her eyes... and tried to find him but she realised that the side of his bed is empty..
She frowned
Shravaan???? She got up... she checked her phone and her eyes widen as its almost 8:30

Goddd m late...
"Shravnnn why yaar jagaya kyun nahi..."she murmured

"Kyun ki tum sonrahi thi .. "shravan smiled while fixing his tie...

"Haan baas ab mujhe bhagna padhega... "suman made a bun by twisting her hair...

"Kyun?? bhagna kyun padhega .. khud ki business hai aram se jao yaar... "shravan said tucking his shirt

"M not like u shravan ke kabhi bhii jao koi farak nahi padhta raat ko kabhii aooo... "suman said getting up from the bed..

"Are tumhara aur mera kaam alag hai...to timing bhi to alag hoga rite??? Aur kal sorry to bola maine... "shravan said

"Haaan bas ho gaya... ek msg nahi kar sakte the tum?? I was waiting for u like a fool... aur aye bas sone aa gaye... "suman said while folding the blanket

"What's wrong with u... ??why r u behaving like this ????..."sumo shravan stopped there

"Haaan now its my fault...
Tum pct ke paper cout mein submit karna bhool gaye thats my fault
Tumhare liye khana banaya its my fault
Tumhare liye wait kiya thats my fault
Tum khaake aye my fault
Tum nahi ruke my fault... "

"Rite shravan sab mera fault hai... "

Shravan was looking at her
"Sumo r u alright ????"
Kya ho haya tumhe..
I told u 2 days before that the paper which u gave me to submit u forgot to sign...
To submit kaise karu????
Kal to maine bola sorry ... raat ko kitni baar bola... haan meri halati hain...
Why r u reacting so much"

"Nahi shravan galati meri hai..."she felt her eyes welled up
"Sab galati meri hai..."
Her voice choked
She heard her tummy growling
She suddy remembered that she skipped the dinner
"Yumhare liye wait karna meri galti hai...
Tumse itna pyaar karna meri galati hai"


"Baat ko kahan se kahan leke jaa rahi ho yaar...
overreacting karna bandh karo plzzz...
I have told u ke mera yeh wala case bahoot important hai...
Tumse pooch ke hi ho liya tha rite???
Naya firm hai... kaam to karna padega... "shravan was checking some files...

Sumo rushed to the toilet as she felt urge to vomit...

"Sumooo... r u alright??? "Shravan rushed towards her... her eyes were red...
she was huffing...

"Kal mujhe raat ko laga ke tumhe shyad fever hai.. "he hold her from the back .. while she was splashing water on her face...

"Arora uncle ke paas chalo..."


"Stop it shravan ...
U felt i m overreacting rite
Then plzz stop being over concerned about me...
Mujhe kuchh nahi huya
Kal raat to tumhare upar gussa hoke
Bewakuf ki tarah I skipped my dinner that why...
" She wiped her tears...

"Dont tell me sumo tumne kaal raat se ... he sighed
Come on sumo... tumne jhoot bola????" Shravan looked at her


Haan aur tum pakad bhi nahi paaye...
Tum se main kabhi joot bol nahi paati thi shravan
Ab kya ho gaya???
"she looked at his eyes directly

Shravan closed his eyes...
"M sorrry .. really sorry sumo...yeh berry wala case na... mera dimag kaam karna bandh kar raha hain.. upar se yeh trip ki tension"

"Chale ????
ab saath mein breakfast kare ????"he cupped her face...

"Aur suno aaj raat ko dinner mein chalte hai...
Sirf tum aur main.. kal meri london ke flight se pehle lets make tonight special shravan winked shaam ko sharp 7 pm at tamara...i will arrange tge reservation...shravan brushed his nose
He was about to capture her lips when she stopped him and turned around and again she emptied her stomach...

"Sumo i feel u r not well ... dekho waise bhi main london jaa raha hun.. to chalo lets go n visit doc... aaj pct mat jao ..."shravan said holding her...

Sumo shook her hear...
"bhookh ki wajaise shravan m hungry...
khatarnak bhookh lagi hai mujhe... u go n have breakfast m comming down... "suman said drying her face with the towel

"R u sure???? "Shravan asked

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"Preeta jaldi jaldi yeh saare tiffin pack kar de.."
Sumo said while cutting the veggies

"Sumo kya huya aisi shakal kyun banake ghuum ri hai???"preeta asked

"Khchh nahi yaar aaj bahot thaki huyi lag rah hun... "sumo said .. wiped the sweatbeads on her forehead

"To tu ghar jaa na .. hum kar lenge... "preeta said
"Raat ko shravan ne sone nahi diya kya??? "Preeta teased

"Chup chap kaam kar apni .. "sumo glared...

"Sumooo aaj meethe mein kya banayega??? "One of pct member asked

"Ruk aaj kheer banega main banati huun.."sumo said pushing the veggies aside

"Preeta tu yeh sabzi pakale .. main kheer dekhti huun... "suman went to other table...

"Raita ban gaya???? Wah... kajal mujhe thodi taste karwa na .. d kh ke muhh mein paani aa raha hai..." sumo smiled


Sumo tastes the raita ... "yaar khatta thoda kam lag raha hai.. thodi aur dahi de mujhe.. "preeta n kajal looked at each other...

"Sumo khatta to bilkul thik hai..."preeta said

"Uuhuuu aur chaiye... yeh wala taste kar..."she gave a spoon to preeta from her bowl

"Mmm" preeta scrunched her face.. "yeh toh khatarnak khatta hai..."

"Chood chal kheer bana te hai... "kajal said...


"What's wrong sumo????? Preeta asked
Patah nahi yaar tum logo ko kyun badbu nahi aa rahi hai..
mujhe na kaise kaise smell aa rahe hai... "sumo said holding her nose

"Kheerr mein badbu???????? "Everybody screamed
"Tuna sumo pagal ho gayi hai.. "preeta laughed
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Preeeta huya kya hain?? Tu ro kyun rahi hai??? Suman asked over the phone

"Sumo main woh ... dhurinder ne dekh na phir se "preeta sobbed

"Uss bagga ki to main 4 futiya banake chhodungi..
samajh ta kya hai apne aap ko??"suman clenched her teeth

Nahi sumo tujhe nahi pata.. preeta tried to cover up

"Tu uska side lena okzzz bandh kar... himmat kaise huya uska tere upar haath uthane ko... hath yod ke rakhti huun main ruk ..." suman screamed over the phone...

Her phone beeped
As she checked her phone...
"Shiiit sun preeet tu roo mat tu ruk main tere ghaar aati hun ... mere phone mein charge nahi nahi ... "

"Main aa rahi huun preeta..." suman cut the call

Suman took a u turn and headed towards preeta's house


"Tere ko usne dhakka mara aur tu gir gayi??? Aise kaise?? "Suman looked at preeta who was sitting on the waiting area of the hospital...

"Tujhenahi patah suman yeh mard log peene ke baad kaise rakshash ban jaate hai..."
Use daru ke liye aur paisa chahiyetha... maine nahi dia to hata pai mein main siriyon se ... "preeta whinced in pain...

"Chhod de tu usko ... meri baat maan kife achhi ho jayegi teri..."suamn caresed preetas head...

"Nahi yaar suman pyaar karta hain woh mujhse bas jaab sharab peeta hai tab usko.. "preeta couldnt finish as the nurse called them ...


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"Sir what would u like to have ?? "The waiter asked him...


"One more black coffee plzzz "...shravan ordered his 4th coffee

Sumo where r u...
he looked at the candles
The flowers he bought for her...
he took out his mobile and dialed her number for 7th time

The number u r trying to reach is switched off... a sweet female voice replied him

Shravan looked at his watch.. 9:50 pm
"Not again sumo..."

"Sir r u waiting for someone??? "The manager came...
"Ya actually m waiting for my wife... "she will be here in a moment...

"Actually dont mind sir..
I dont know how to say u this but u had a reservation at7 pm .. n we reserved this garden table for u for 3 hours..
Now we have some other bookings...

M so sorry sir but the family has arrived... sir would u mind to shift to some other table .
Its inside
It might not have tge view but m assuring u sir its a nice place..."

Shravan clenched his jaw...
"Yup its ok..."
He got up... and followed the manager inside

"This one sir...
" Shravan yook the seat

"One more coffee sir??? "The manager asked
Shravan glared at him
"Would u plzz leave me alone... "he screamed...
"m sorry sir... really sorry "...the manager apologies and left

"Kya huya sir ????"a waiter asked the manager...
"Are yeh bade log
Biwi to aya nahi bas him pe rob jamate hai.."manager said

"Sir maine is sahab ko pehle bhi kayi baar dekha
Pehle jab main coffee shop mein kaam karta tha tab bhi yeh kisike intezaar karta tha ek baar to 5 ghanta but sir woh ladki ayii nahi "...the waiter giggled...
Kaun yeh ??? Yeh to shravan malhota hain .. delhi ke mashoor lawyer... manager told

Hoga sir par woh jo ladki thi na isko aise hi bithake rakhtithi...waiter told him

"Chhodo tum jao table no 15 ko dekho..." manager let

Shravan clenched his eyes...
He felt his ears are heating up
His face became red in rage
Sumo ... he greeted his teeth...
"Aaj bhi tum wohi sumo nikli...
Bachpan se .. mere saath aisa karti ayi ho ..
Pehle dhoop mein intezaar karwati thi
Baad mein coffee shop mein aayr yahan sab ke samne ...
Mere pyaar ko mujhe aise taken for granted kar logi yeh kabhi SOCHA NA THA"


To be continued
Ok so this update is a little longer than the previous one...
Here i gave u a bold sumo unlike humtum
So let me know. Your thoughts
This is a ss so mabe 3-4 chapter more...

Luv piya
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Unres
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Sumo is pregnant 😆
Loved it!!
continue soon...😃
Edited by Sadia.Ritu - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40
yeh in dono ki life kabhi simple nahi ho sakti kya😭
vaise yeh jo sumo khata-khata kar rahi hai...woh pregnant hai na?😛

aur ab Shravan Suman se gussa ho jayega. ya phir se peekar ghar jayega and then Sumo ko preeta waali baat aayegi 😆

lekin yeh itna chota ss kyun, isko badhao please

love
arpita

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