SS- Goodbye Shravan-Epilogue updated on page 61 - Page 14

Nice update...

Originally posted by: deltadawn

I should get timezone allowance.

Second!!

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Unressingg

Tujhe fever hai na rest karna ya aankhe fod ke lene ka plan hai😡

Arre pakk gayi thi Dips😕

But I know baithe baithe kisi ne nahi kiya update to finally khud ke hi haath me khujli ho gayi hogi😆

Hmm. ..a celebrity writer here told me the other day that a long break usually breaks our own link with the story😉

But update was very good. Ofcourse tune likha hai.😃

Chal jhooti...rehne de😆

So Seher is his shadow and obsessed fangirl from London. Ow poor girl. Uska past jaane bina she has so blindly followed him like a puppy dog. Now , today got to understand the depth of her feelings and her pain for Shravan. Heart went out to the girl❤️

True that, she didn't have an inkling that he was a mirage.

Sumo knows everything. 😊 so Shraman are Shraman to the tee sharing evrything. Aww.. and Shravan knew Seher did all this for him.. still feeling sad for Seher.

You know , I could never buy the theory of people being oblivious to other's feelings, especially when the feeling is as poignant as love. So at least someone as intelligent as Shravan had to know.

Yup..here Shraman discuss everything 😛

Ek tarfa pyaar ki taakat...

Auron ki tarah Yeh do hisson mein nahi battin.

But she is moving on. Feeling jealous of her own hubs talking to another woman even from a distance and between an ibteresting convo.she got wife mode perfected 😉

Hasn't she now😆...she had all her answers in front of her, but her glance strayed to her husband.

Good job and thanks for updating. But please take rest now.

Thank you 😳

Tune ne fever me likha aur maine aise hi still got more typos and you I think got none.⭐️

Bimaar main hoon, aur modesty naam ki dawaai tu ne piya hai lagta hai.😆😆

Read all parts in one go & I was like how can I miss this beautiful piece of words??? 😲 Thankfully, I got here on time.

Ressi res 😳
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Unres
Reshma 🤗
Dedication to me ...Awwiee!!... 😳
Thank you yaa..🤗🤗

Coming to the upii..!!
Lovely one dear... 👍🏼
Loved the whole Sumo-Seher Convo...❤️
Specially loved how they talked while Sitting in a calm environment ...❤️ ❤️
Seher loved Shravan for this long, did soo much for his attention , to stay close to him, changed herself completely, even went to confess , to stop him from going..but!!!
Feel for this girl!!

So Sumo know everything about them...Thats good !!
Soo happy to know that ShraMan share everything...This is what needed in a relationship...In love 😳
But!!...Whats with missing Shravan???
Kya ShraMan saath nahi rehte?...Kya Shravan kahi or rehta hai or Sumo ke paas aata jaata rehta hai?!!
Too many ques 😛
N curious me...😆

Superb upii dear...❤️


Thank you for the pm dear...😊
Loads of Love n 🤗
Nikka sa Nik

P.S Hope you are ok Reshma...!!
Take Care dear 😊

How are you now?

Originally posted by: Safire

Reshma,how is your fever now?

Take care and have rest..

Now,coming to the update,it was fantastic as usual!!!

Nice flow of storyline👏

Originally posted by: girlgunjan

Read all parts in one go & I was like how can I miss this beautiful piece of words??? 😲 Thankfully, I got here on time.

Hi Gunjan!...Boy am I glad that you got here on time😛

And I am doubly glad that you liked what you saw here!!!

After reading the first part, I was not sure if I should read it further or not bcoz ShraMan are married to different people??? Nooo. Can't deal with it but as my curiosity level was too high, I just decided to read for knowing who is shravan's wife...Urvashi?!? 😆

Lol. .I can understand. .gave a few heart attacks here after the first chapter😆

Plz, add the index on 1st page yaar. For reading 2nd part, I actually gone through all the pages 🥱

so, the 2nd part, when I read everything that you mention for shravan's wife, I was damn sure this is none other than suman itself 😆 kahani me twist tha!!!

Felt so relieved...ShraMan are together. Awww...they are deeply in love. The song you used is my favourite one. Now the curiosity was about who is this girl who loved shravan?!?

Gunjan can't thank you enough for reminding me about the index part. I had completely forgotten about this trivia. I have updated the index now.I could feel your relief too😃...the song is a huge favourite of mine as well.

And, the 3rd part, their convo, which I thought will not go well but they talked so friendly. Everything is clear & pure in ShraMan's relationship. That's the best part!!! 😳

I have always been a huge fan of a calm conversation dear. It always works. I am usually pretty composed in my personal life, so just got the same concept here. I'm am so pleased to know that you liked this part.

You are surely an amazing writer who knows very well how to keep readers hooked. Update sooner. I'm waiting 😊

Hi di thanku pehle toh dedicating a chappy to us



Now coming to update
Its too good di
Loved the convo of sehar and sumo 😳
But also feeling bad for sehar
She loved shravan from london ...aaww poor baby
And the you described her feeling ..too good
And i love sumo how she described that kii shravan ne usse sab kuch bataya
And how is sumo is calm ..tooo too good
And shravan tells everything to our sumo
Perfect husband and wife
And its good that seher is trying to move on !! Hope her husband help her
And i also loved the ending ...too emotional
Fever mein bhi itna acha likh diya
Maza aa gaya
Need a lot of training from u 😛

Update soon

And get welll sooon di

Sending a chocolates to u





Luv
Tina

I hope you are fine now...
Coming to the story..
So finally we know the connection between Shravan and sheher... Shravan and sheher are college friends and colleague in Shravan's Office...
Sumo should be proud of her husband...
So Shravan told sumo about sheher when sheher asked her how she knew her.. Good that Shravan told sumo everything about sheher remaining honest to sumo. ..
Like "SAB KUCH" 😉 😃 dialogue...
Sumo is right pyar kiya nahi jata, pyar ho jata hai...
But who cheated Shravan?
Update soon and thanks for pm. . .

Love
Shrujani