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Posted: 7 years ago
Hello Sid...
Pleased to meet You!
I'm trying best...
Too many things to juggle...
Soon I promise!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Okaz take ur time, just can't wait... 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Sid_28

Okaz take ur time, just can't wait... 😊

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For now, the other series has been updated if you are interested!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Unresd qatra at 84...😳

Finally
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Unresd qatra at 84...😳

Cap ya!
You keep rendering me speechless!!
I shall reply in detail shortly!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Zoya, missing your great writing !!! Pls update ..it's over a month now,
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Unresd Meyaar @100😳

Loved it babe!
Grinning like a fool!
Reply I shall do shortly!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: kanash

Zoya, missing your great writing !!! Pls update ..it's over a month now,

Great writing 😳
You make me gush!
I know, I'm so sorry..
Life has been a mess..
I swear I started working on an update 3 weeks back, just haven't been able to complete it..
Soon pakka!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Overwhelming! !
Sigh...

Sun...Butterfly...cloud...Rains...Green...Fruits !! Beautiful cycle of life! !
And when we have Nature giving us life lessons... this can't get any better! !
Everything has a reason and a season !! Live the moment! !
It does doesn't it! Your UN fits the bill perfectly! Carpe Diem!

Set in motion a life changing event...noted...😳
Good girl!

...Telling her this was her moment... i could feel it right here...😳
I'm glad you did!

He saw little droplets come together and form a bigger drop only to slip away to merge into the window sill and lose it's integrity... this line out stands for me for the reason unknown...😳
I guess its cause of the profoundness, we are something, we become greater and eventually perish. Its the cycle of life ...

"Zindagi kya hai anasir mein zahur-e tarteeb,,
Maut kya hai ini ajza ka pareshan hona !! *
Kahan jaaon kya karoon!
You leave me spell bound by these couplets!
Wattpad pe aaise hi continue karna okay? Later... I would miss this otherwise!

"Life, When elements become ordered, that's all,,
Death, But a moment when into chaos they fall

Sumo may have been his tormentor but she was also his peace. If it wasn't for her ushering him, he would have been archived...

He heard paced breathing on the other end. He sensed the dull ache of his chest disappear.

Her heart returning to it's pace while his sped up. 😳

If he wasn't any wiser he'd say they shared something deeper than friendship. But he was wiser... Can't wait to see a hotter, shayar and wiser SM 😉
Me neither. And that's also why the update is taking so long! Anything that pops makes me feel nah, not his caliber!

A small tear made it's way down his face as Suman held the phone close recognising that timber of his voice. ❤️

You write exceptionally well... Had this been any other story/author I would read it,,liked it n went away! ! I am not capable of analysing writings like these! !
Yikes! Now you just stole my heart! Thank you so much love! I'm glad my writings have some depth!

The couplet! !⭐️
Yeyy!

There is a void is their lives. One doesn't have it and other is bearing the brunt of a broken family !! Someone who will always have your back. Your strength. Anchor of your life. When they are around not a dark thought trespasses... Your Safe Haven! !
Safe Haven ❤️

The wound is the place where the Light enters you. Rumi !
Rumi! This man! He could romanticize anything! I just can't get enough of his works!

This is where they meet... their souls connect! !

"And you won't.. I told you that already.." there I could see Zoya telling all the time ... I am not leaving the forum !! 😆
Oh shoot! Now I'm just 💔 How I wish to have replied to this comment earlier. It would have been a different reply. I would be telling another story and it won't be an easy end...

Something deep down assured him that this vow was to be the corner stone of their story... noted!! 😳
Ji!

I hope their second chance lasts a lifetime !! 😳
Chance Number jo bhi ho, I hope they last a lifetime!

The letter !!❤️

Samunder si wasee Zindagi se,,
Diya wo Qatra jo Moti ho jaaye !!
Maar de tu! These couplets are life!

In those words there was hope !!
Indeed!

Princess and the Prince they are... They rule our hearts !! And So does your writings! ! 🤗
Ah man! Bas kar ja Cap!
*credit... original writer ! !

@Bold I love you ya! Thank you so much!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Class of 2011, the future of Law... this looks familiar 😃

You scared me there for a moment 😆 I thought you have read it someplace and how did I do this 🤣
This is called intriguing,,right from the very first sentence !! 😆
Compliment dena koi tujhse seekhe! Thank you ya!

to Eric's Dad. #relief
Yeah.. I didn't think it necessary to give a back story just yet.. Eventually though!

Seated to his right was Nirmala Malhotra, his Mom... I was waiting for the comeback... #fingersCrossed
Haina!

she chose a saree, much to Shravan's delight. 😃 #DilHaiHindustani #MammazBoy #Feels
Ekdam! I like my Mother in Indian attire only, mummy wali feeling uss se hi aati merko, hence! And my Mum, no matter which country, kahin bhi ho, Indian attire is all she wears. She says "Jaisa desh waisa bhes" is very chameleon, I'm Indian end of story 😎

he had learned to live with it... we all do...🤗
Yes, we all do.

girlfriend...😲

Am 😊 #ShaadiMubarak
Hahaha! I don't know why I did it but it felt right...

engulfing her in a bear hug, throwing his hand around her from the back.
He kissed the top of her head breaking the hug.
⭐️
Mother from another Brother 😆 If that even makes sense or sounds right...

Shravan had made a casual comment about how she was worried sick for Eric and that had changed something in him... #ELH
I love ELH!

Mr. Shravan Ramnath Nirmala Malhotra... !!! Naam hi kaafi hai 😆
Oh yeah!

He turned to steal a glance, seeing his family so happy, his Mom and Dad moved to tears, he knew he got where he set out to be, well almost. He misjudged a step and tripped lightly managing to get a grip on himself. ❤️
No matter how huge he gets, he's still the adorable dork

top honours !! Hmm. .. toppers are soo un-avoidable 😉
LMAO! Yeah, you can try but not escape!

and got rusticated...😛
Hehe ...

I think I know which part of the update belongs to...😳
Speech! !👏❤️⭐️
Ji shukriya aapka... I was all clogged back then, but glad you liked it!

Nirmala cried of joy telling Ramnath, "Humara Beta Ram. Humara Beta." Ramnath smiled gleefully seeing his son achieve that which was his own dream.
Kjo makes a back door entry! ! Kabhi khushi Kabhi gham na juda hongey hum !!😆
I'm a roughened version of KJo.. I love my drama 😆
I am the King of the world! #Vibes
Yeah😎
The trio is graduating the same year...how is that!?
Oh reasonable answer I have... Shravan studied in London while these two in India. As is seen generally, graduation in most foreign countries is a 4 year course while that in India is 3 years. In my story they have a one year difference of age and hence the graduation is together 😃
Anyways,,

Mr. Jairaj is here in flesh and blood... #interesting!
Who knows what the tide might bring? Who knows eh?

Cliffs in the middle of updates as well... #Mercy!
Blame IF!

She wiped the mist off her face as she folded the letter and carefully placed it in her clutch... Na Sumo Na,,Shravan aa jayega!🤗
IDK why I read it as "Mere Karan Arjun Aayengee!" 🤣

She didn't even want the medal anymore...aww!
Heck she would flirt with Jairaj if that would make Shravan get his ass here... jealousy card on the to do list! 😲
Who knows what the tide might bring in? Who knows? 🤣

"Internship tujhse zyada important hai?" Tanvi shrugged... I could actually imagine a taraazu there...😆
LMAO! Hilarious sight indeed!

As she made her way down the stairs her eyes caught something and she slightly tripped... careful my love! 😉
Aye haye!

He was way more handsome in person, his luscious hair, his deep orbs, she couldn't get herself to look away. 😳
Hair messed up, eyes twinkling, smiling his widest one.😳

Kahan se aaya,, ye hai kaun! Kaun! Kaun!
Mai hoon hot! Mai hoon hot! Main hoon main hoon main hoon hot!
😆

Winking at her he clapped till all other accolades had died down. #endearing!
Yo!

Witty much! 😊

Shravan looked at her and teasingly asked, "Kaun hai phir tumhara?" ... oh my my !! #flirtatious!
Or it could have been an innocent question? Perspective?

But didn't he already? What was she thinking! Where was all this coming from?... Good Morning Dear! 😉
#friendzoned
#Phooti Kismat

Their hearts as though revelled in the suddenly acquired peace. "Sumo wali feeling.. Best hai.." Shravan whispered.

"Shravan wali feeling better hai!" Suman nudged.
❤️❤️
Feels!

"Ruk!" Saying she pulled him by the collar taking him by a surprise... tough time ahead Mr. Malhotra 😎
Tough times, yes, but who for? Who knows what the tide might bring in? Who knows? 🤣 You guys are in for a massive surprise!

Shravan straightened his shirt and himself. Not again Sumo, never again.

For under the bravado and confidence, his heart still beat only for her... and we can't be happier! 🤗
Haina!

Rang -e-nashaat-e-dil-o-jaan se parhaiz kahan hai mumkin,,
Kuch zakhm purana hai,,kuch meyaar-e-Ulfat aazmana hai !!
Maar dala! Allah! Maar dala!
❤️
Kya likhte ho aap!
On that note... The last res !phew! 😳

@Bold Thank you so much Cap!
Love ya!
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