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Posted: 8 years ago
#41
Hey Nik,

Actually I'll call you Tinker Bell too, I love it when Sunain calls you that, I love Tinker Bell and now because of Sunain whenever I read your comment I think of her. You know what actually you are like her tinkering happiness to everyone with your comments.

So my Tinker Bell, loved your first OS. I always found writing OS a little difficult at least for me, I start an OS it becomes so big That I change it into TS. Lo 😆l. You were very good at it. It was beautifully written, and what you were trying to say was very well received. So don't worry just keep writing.

If you have ever doubt about your writing just read your OS title, Imperfectly Perfect. Love this title. You won't believe when I first accidentally found this Forum, I had no idea that I would someday write something here and would be appreciated, this Forum definitely changed my life, gave me the confidence that I have today. So just write what you feel, it starts coming to you naturally. I think I gave too much Gyaan for you today, but really felt your nervousness for your first writing in words before that you wrote at the start of your OS. Couldn't stop myself.

Coming to the story, it was beautifully written, you are a good writer. Loved the friendship between these trio, can't get enough of them. Loved when he said "Meri Sumo", the way you described him standing folding his hands with a smile, we can easily remember Shravan. ShraMan moments were very cute. The end was the best, the way he explains her that being imperfect is perfectly OK and that should not come in between love was very touching.

So my Tinker Bell Congratulations you completed your first OS and the result is out that you have passed it with flying colors.👏

Sorry if I bore you with all the gyaan today.😳
All the very best for your next which I will be waiting for.

Lubna.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42
Beautifully written. Loved it.
A different take, well presented.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43
Oy hoy hoy hoy hooy...
Tussi OS likha...!!!Dil khush kar ditta ji...😃😃
Mindblowing Yaar...👏👏👏Hats Off...!!!
Truly awesome...
Loved it to the core Nik...Biggg Hug to ya...🤗
Sorry specific comment nahi likh sakti b'coz time nahi hai and I loved the nook and corner of this OS..
Especially that part when Shravan said MERI SUMO..Hayye...I so badly wanted him to say that...😊
Phone in jeans🤣🤣ye ladki puri ke puri jhalli hai..
.Even I had did the same once aur mera phone to tab bajne laga jab mai stage pe couple ko congratulate karne gayi thi..🤣The couple too bursted out laughing and I dashed in the bride's room😆😳
And shravan's reply to Sumo's Que...❤️
All in all Super se bohot uppar wala OS...
Par ek request hai..
Plz next part likh do..Like Nimmo telling about ShraMan to Priya and all that...Pluuease...😳
Meet u soon..
Love,
ANU
🤗

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Posted: 8 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: LubSha

Hey Nik,

Hey Lubna...

Actually I'll call you Tinker Bell too, I love it when Sunain calls you that, I love Tinker Bell and now because of Sunain whenever I read your comment I think of her. You know what actually you are like her tinkering happiness to everyone with your comments.
Tinker bell..I love this name..❤️

Aww.. 😳 Thats soo sweet of you to say dear.Am overwhelmed.Thank you so much dear...🤗

So my Tinker Bell, loved your first OS. I always found writing OS a little difficult at least for me, I start an OS it becomes so big That I change it into TS. Lo 😆l
Mine also became too long...😆

.You were very good at it. It was beautifully written, and what you were trying to say was very well received. So don't worry just keep writing.
Am soo glad...😳 .

If you have ever doubt about your writing just read your OS title, Imperfectly Perfect. Love this title.
Aww...Thank you soo much.dear..😃 .

You won't believe when I first accidentally found this Forum, I had no idea that I would someday write something here and would be appreciated, this Forum definitely changed my life, gave me the confidence that I have today.
Believe me when I say that this is exactly what happened with me...😳

So just write what you feel, it starts coming to you naturally. I think I gave too much Gyaan for you today, but really felt your nervousness for your first writing in words before that you wrote at the start of your OS. Couldn't stop myself.
Thank you dear for the encouraging words n I loved the gyaan trust me..😳 😉 .


Coming to the story, it was beautifully written, you are a good writer. Loved the friendship between these trio, can't get enough of them
True.😊.

. Loved when he said "Meri Sumo", the way you described him standing folding his hands with a smile, we can easily remember Shravan. ShraMan moments were very cute. The end was the best, the way he explains her that being imperfect is perfectly OK and that should not come in between love was very touching.

Thank you so much dear...😳 😊
So my Tinker Bell Congratulations you completed your first OS and the result is out that you have passed it with flying colors.👏

Thats a relief...😳 😉
Sorry if I bore you with all the gyaan today.😳
Not at all...I loved it..❤️.
All the very best for your next which I will be waiting for.

Lubna.


@Bold Thank you soo much for the encouragement and appriciation Lubna.It means a lot to me.
Thanks once again
🤗 🤗
Edited by Nik03 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: bworm

Beautifully written. Loved it.

A different take, well presented.


Thank you dear.. 😳
Glad that you liked it... 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: anukulgr8

Oy hoy hoy hoy hooy...
Tussi OS likha...!!!Dil khush kar ditta ji...😃😃

Thank you ji...😳
Mindblowing Yaar...👏👏👏Hats Off...!!!
Truly awesome...
Loved it to the core Nik...Biggg Hug to ya...🤗

Soo glad that you loved it dear...😳
Sorry specific comment nahi likh sakti b'coz time nahi hai and I loved the nook and corner of this OS..
Especially that part when Shravan said MERI SUMO..Hayye...I so badly wanted him to say that...😊


No problem dear...you took your time out to comment is enough for me...😳 🤗
Phone in jeans🤣🤣ye ladki puri ke puri jhalli hai..
.Even I had did the same once aur mera phone to tab bajne laga jab mai stage pe couple ko congratulate karne gayi thi..🤣The couple too bursted out laughing and I dashed in the bride's room😆😳

It wasnt only Sumo dear, It was me...😆
OMG!!...You were too.😆..Same pinch then...😳 😉

And shravan's reply to Sumo's Que...❤️
Thank you...😊
All in all Super se bohot uppar wala OS...
Thank you sho much...🤗
Par ek request hai..
Plz next part likh do..Like Nimmo telling about ShraMan to Priya and all that...Pluuease...😳

Actually I didnt planned it any further.It was meant to be an OS only.I cant promise but I'll think about it...but really cant promise😊
.Meet u soon..
Love,
ANU
🤗


Thank you shoo much for the lovely lovely comment Anu baby...😳 ❤️
Made my day...🤗 🤗
Edited by Nik03 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
Nikudaaa 🤗
First time writing???? Really????

Wow... brilliant it was.
Loved it. ❤️
Jeans under lehenga. 😆 Quite relatable though 😉

Shravan's monologue on Love 👏 Beautifully penned.

Would definitely love to read more from you 😊

Good job 👍🏼

Love
Eva
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: evaviego

Nikudaaa🤗
Eva...🤗
I loved Nikudaaa...😳


First time writing???? Really????
Very First...

Wow... brilliant it was.

Loved it.❤️
Soo glad to know that...😳
Jeans under lehenga.😆Quite relatable though😉
😆

Shravan's monologue on Love👏Beautifully penned.
Thank you dear..😳 .

Would definitely love to read more from you😊
Will try

Good job👍🏼

Love
Eva


@Bold Thank you so much Eva...😳
Its so good to hear from you... 😊
🤗
Edited by Nik03 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49

Thank you dear.. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
Hey Nik😃
This was so beautuful and heatwarming!!! You should definitely write more!! I will look forward to more updates from you😳

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