Originally posted by: deltadawn
Nik😊
Hey Deepti.. 🤗 .
why do you need us to validate whether you should write anything further or not? If you don't write how will it become a practice for you? And how will we get to read more of such fun and sweet pieces from you?
Awww!!...Thats so sweet of you to say dear. Actually I was really nervous about it as it was my first ever writing.But am so happy to know that you found it fun n sweet piece... 😳I loved the OS. Put a smile on my face.
N Your comment put a smile on my face..😊.First thing I liked - the concept. Soulmates are not perfect fits. They need to chisel themselves to fit with each other and it takes time and patience, it takes acceptance, respect and a lot of unconditional love for the other.
Thats what I feel.Love ,respect ,trust n Acceptance are must for any relationship to work.Secondly - Your description of Sumo - she represented at least 90% girls in this world. Maybe that's why we loved Sumo in EDKV and I loved her here too. She is real !! So real that when she dresses up you know its different today!😊Why can't girls be like that? who focus on stuff other than themselves. Their family, career, hobby anything apart from their looks. Does that make them less lovable. NO Exactly bro...Every girl has the right to do whatever she wants to do n how she wants to live.But sometimes there are insecurities which becomes a barrior.Sometimes you yourself overcomes them n sometimes you need someone to make you realise it.
He loves her and that all he knows to do. that's Shravan. hotness apart, he is a guy who knows how to love and see what needs to be seen.
Thats our Shravan...just pure Love...❤️ I love you for capturing both of them and Pushkar perfectly.🤗
So happy that you loved it..😃You wrote very well. Grammar was good. Descriptions of emotions, setup were perfect.👏
Please write more⭐️ and soon!
