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priety.priti

@priety.priti

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Posted: 8 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: amks2016

Very well written angel :) hve been trying to read your story for quite sometime now and finally managed to read and finish it :))

Like your style of writing and how the story is progressing .. looking forward to your updates !!

Mayuri

thank you so much mayuri😊

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priety.priti

@priety.priti

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Posted: 8 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: sptrno
Awww this is indeed EPIC hun...sooo emotional beautiful heart-touching sweet cute lovely fab so love it too many EDKV feelsss...Thank you so much dear

Lots of Love Hugs,
Spandana

thank you spandana 😊

Love and hugs to too hon 🤗

Edited by priety.priti - 8 years ago

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sweksha

@sweksha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: priety.priti

oye padhai karate karate keeping one eye on forum😉not done kiddo😆
ya will update soon😉
thank you for comment

kya kare dil hai ki maanta nhi 😳

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#134

Priti I m late
Well written
Shravan's inner turmoil was only calmed by Sumo, she is medicine of his wound. If she is beside him he can fight with anything & anybody. The way she made him realise not to run away from problems & face it, its commendable. Hope Ramnath would not hurt Sumo anymore in front of Shravan otherwise he has to face the consequences.

Hope chachi ko akal a jaye & she accepts Shravan whole heartedly. Pushkar is such a good brother even though he is not his real brother but more than that to him.

Thanks for PM
Vinu

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Tinna28

@Tinna28

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#135

Resss
Sorry preeti di
I thought meine comment kar diya hai
Then I realise
But I will unress tomorrow with lots of emotional gifs

___________________^

The first is like dhamka

First part itself is tooo too romantic

The way u describe shravan 's feeling its just mindblowing di 👏

And I am like 😳

I like the way sumo support shravan

Like in the show shravan is always feel lost

But how perfectly u show their pain

Irrrespective of the family they have

But still they both are in pain

When he said na

Tum mere sath chalogi

But without any question she said yes

This is myy most favourate part

Just like the perfect soulmate

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Loved their conversation .

So emotional

Giving me goosebumps

Loved that part when she say

Kisse aur kitna bhaghoe

The way she explain that he cannot run from his part

Sumo words made me so emotional 😭

How a can women complete him understand

May be just because

Their made for each other

Love is possesive shravan

This is line so just perfect and trrue

Ramnath loves his sin truely

But he is so possesive for his son

That he cannot share his love with anybody

He become so blind that he cannot see that because of his possiveness shravan is highly affected

Pushkar is always a agenl in shraman story

He is so caring for his bhaiya and for his best frnd

And he alwsys like cubid for them

I like the way u potray puskar - supported strong and understanding

Breakfast table scenes is so accurate

Aacha hai uss kamini ka muh band kar diya

Har jagah suru hoh jati hai 😡

Shravan is pretending that he is strong

But sumo can feeel his broken heart

My poor shravan 😭

What whill shravan talk to his parents

I am little scared now

Now I am waiting for next chappter eagrly

Hope u will update soon di

And badi si hug iss beautiful emotional rollarcostar chapter ke liye

Aur plzz shraman ko jaldi happy happy kar dena plllzzz

Now plz plzzz update sooon

Jaldi update kar dena okkk😛

Luv ya diii

Tiii se tinna 🤗

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#136

amazing update

absolutely loved it

continue soon

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priety.priti

@priety.priti

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: sweksha
kya kare dil hai ki maanta nhi 😳

haan yeh to hai if pe new update padhe bina dil manta toh nahi hai 😉

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priety.priti

@priety.priti

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: vimikrao
Priti I m late
Well written
Shravan's inner turmoil was only calmed by Sumo, she is medicine of his wound. If she is beside him he can fight with anything & anybody. The way she made him realise not to run away from problems & face it, its commendable. Hope Ramnath would not hurt Sumo anymore in front of Shravan otherwise he has to face the consequences.

Hope chachi ko akal a jaye & she accepts Shravan whole heartedly. Pushkar is such a good brother even though he is not his real brother but more than that to him.

Thanks for PM
Vinu

np vinu, no ramu kaka cant take that chance 😃 agar aisi bewkoofi ki to sumo to gayi lekin shravan to puri taraha se gaya haath se 😉

chachi ko thodi akal aani chahiye really

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priety.priti

@priety.priti

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: Tinna28
Resss
Sorry preeti di
I thought meine comment kar diya hai
Then I realise
But I will unress tomorrow with lots of emotional gifs 😆

np kiddo take your time 😊