SHRAMAN SS - DIl Sambhal jaa zara last part updated on pg 20 - Page 16

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Posted: 8 years ago


Your ending it :(( it was a very beautiful narration Priti 😳 you covered so many aspects of the characterization 👍🏼


Hope you come up with more 😳

Mayuri
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Posted: 8 years ago
My pretty Priti.😛
What an ending amazing girl but only my complaint is less Shraman scenes in the last chapter.😲
Only Ramnath & Nirmala confession, Shravan's delimma & his angerness & outburst & his forgiveness to his parents that too only Sumo asked for him.😒

Epilogue hai kya agar hai toh sir Shraman scene pls, waiting

Thanks for PM

Vinu❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunain

Res😭
***
Unres!

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Angel!! 😭
gimme a hug🤗


Ohh my devil is crying come into a hug jaldi a big bear hug🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
What a beautiful story this has been Preeti. .loved it do.much and perhaps that's why I am so upset that it ended.
Shravan and his pain was 's beautifully captured by you, but you know what was so different about DSJZ. ...it was the fact that Sumo was with him throughout. She didn't ditch him, she didn't watch his downfall silently or play with his emotions. This is what makes this story so special to me.

How about an epilogue Preety😃
Edited by reshmanair356 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Tinna28

Res for now diii
Thanku for dedication 🤗
But cant comment right now
I hope u understand dii


waiting tii baby
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Posted: 8 years ago


Ab bhi waiting diii
Itni lambi chori mahabharat ke baad bhi 😆 😆
Its nearly 70 conversations u know 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: deltadawn

😭

I knew you would end it. But this was on such a sad note Priti. but all bases covered well.

hmm...yeah yaar i told na this is too much emotional for me to handle 😭, but you really think i have covered all bases 😲 its really a very big thing for me dips 😳

his questions and his decision in the end. If it took him years to forgive Sumo. These are his parents and this pain is much greater atleast till this point. Maybe if he was already living with Sumo by tthe time this revelation occured, it would be OK to not think about it, cause then attachments are different as well.

yes true and he went through all this alone so it would be his alone decision what to do next that is what i think 😕

Superb thought process. and mujhe kyu credit de rahi hai, I gave no valuable input to anyone ever😆

are tumhe nahi dungi toh kise du it was really helpful for me when i was in big muddle about this 😳

Yeah although I liked it that you extended this that was the best advice I think which came out of my mouth so far😛

hmm...me too 😉

Awesome.

Epilogue maangu kya?

are gundi ne already epilogue mang liya hai woh kaha chodegi 😆
Shraman starting a life in london...itna to banta hai yaar Priti !! please 😃


thank you so much my lovely dips 🤗 love you so much
and yeah epilogue to dungi but thodi der baad abhi soulmates likhana hai bahot pms aa rahe hai aur mein toh alasi banake baithi hu 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Tinna28



Ab bhi waiting diii
Itni lambi chori mahabharat ke baad bhi 😆 😆
Its nearly 70 conversations u know 😆


yeah yeah and how i can forget tumhara update bhi usi me nikalwane me lagi huti thi 😉
are leking jab tak tere GIF's nahi dekhati maja nahi aata hai 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: priety.priti



yeah yeah and how i can forget tumhara update bhi usi me nikalwane me lagi huti thi😉
are leking jab tak tere GIF's nahi dekhati maja nahi aata hai😳



Ok my pretty preeti di
I know update ke naam pe blackmailing hui thi mera sath 😆

Ok my diii I will unress in night aram se
Par Aap abhi epilogue de rahi ho kya 😉 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Tinna28



Ok my pretty preeti di
I know update ke naam pe blackmailing hui thi mera sath 😆

Ok my diii I will unress in night aram se
Par Aap abhi epilogue de rahi ho kya 😉 😉

are nahi baba abhi nahi pahale soulmates me shraman ki shadi kara du yaar pm bhi aa rahe hai aur wattapad pe kitane sare comments aur massages bhi 😔 aur waise bhi yeh wala update dhamkedar hoga aur bada bhi toh usamehi thoda time lagega usake bad esaka epilogue😳

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