The Last Letter-Shraman OS *Suman's POV* IMP NOTE- PG3

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_anukulgr8

@_anukulgr8

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Mittu...🤗
This was so so cool yaar..👏
Loved it to the core...❤️
U portrayed Sumo's feeling so precisely...Perfect👍🏼
M always in awe of ur writing and this OS makes be go more...
Plz Shravan ka POV likh de...Its a cute request*with puppy eyes*..😳
All the best for ur exams...Rock there too..
So sorry for being late...
Love,
ANU😳

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nahisa123456789

@nahisa123456789

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#32

nice re...but also writ Shravan mind also...

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humaira

@humairayousaf78

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: SleepyPsycho

Hey! Don't call me mam,I am just a 16 year old girl.
Thank You :)

Oh sorry!

i didn't know your name that's why i called you .but now i know by reading previous comments of members

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Dolly Chouhan

@Namiksfan

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Mitali...this was too good

Really different concept

But loved it to bits

And sorry for commenting this late was bit stuck up

You are too good at this deaa

And please please write shravan's p.o.v...please

And keep writing more...will be waiting

Dolly😊

Edited by Namiksfan - 8 years ago

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Mitali Gupta

@SleepyPsycho

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: evaviego
Wow... this was something different..
Nice concept by the way...

Good one.. Do write more 😊

Thank You! :)

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Mitali Gupta

@SleepyPsycho

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Arpi1234
Wow please write Shravan's pov..

This is so nice

Thank You!

I sure will.

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Mitali Gupta

@SleepyPsycho

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: -siliya-
Amazing OS Mitali... 👏 Sumo is hopelessly in love with Shravan.I never expected that Shravan with Urvashi.. 🥺 Sumo's letter reminds me my best friend love story. She loved a boy who loves somebody else still she is hopelessly in love with him. I have asked her thousand times why can't you forget him and she said she doesn't know why she love him so much. 8 long years still she couldn't forget him till now. I don't know why I'm sharing my friend's story here. I have always wondered how someone could love after knowing he/she is somebody else. Sorry for blabbering stupid things.
Loved sumo's advice to Shravan...I loved the each and every part of this OS.
Plz give us Shravan's POV.

Hey! Your comment made me smile.

Thank You! :)

Well thats what love is sometimes no matter what happens,no matter how the other one cannot reprocate you still get attached to him/her in a way that no one can sperate.Complicated and crazy I know.

Shravan's POV will surely be up soon

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Mitali Gupta

@SleepyPsycho

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Sunain
Mitali!!!🤗
Firstly m so sorry for being this late...pardon me*puppy eyes*
N yaa its been a long long time...so glad to see you😃

Now coming to ur upii...
Oh Man...Wht an update!!...Tremendous!👏
I so so so loved it!❤️
Totally a diff concept and a hell Aamazing one!..Nodout⭐️
Sumo's predicament was so Beautifully Penned!
She kept on trying to win his heart and to convey hr heartiest love to him but he always rejected her...infact not even confrontinh her himself but by sending his silly friends😲...how rude!
Sumo's state just made me feel pity for her!
Shravan with Urvaahi...😲...Paka Sumo ko jealous karanay k leay..just to tease her hurt hr...

Mitu..so eager to knw Shravanz pov..plz plz plz do comtinue it soon..n Thnks for the pm dear😉

Take Care!
Sunain❤️

Hey! Its okay.Glad that you commented at least.

Hhahaa Thank you so much for this sweet a comment :)

I think this letter anyway states that she tried to win him and he rejected again.It just simply says as to how she felt deeper and deeper in love with him despite him hurting her again and again.Sorry for this bit but I had to explain.

About the jealousy you will have to wait for Shravan's POV which will be up soon :)

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Mitali Gupta

@SleepyPsycho

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: anukulgr8
Mittu...🤗
This was so so cool yaar..👏
Loved it to the core...❤️
U portrayed Sumo's feeling so precisely...Perfect👍🏼
M always in awe of ur writing and this OS makes be go more...
Plz Shravan ka POV likh de...Its a cute request*with puppy eyes*..😳
All the best for ur exams...Rock there too..
So sorry for being late...
Love,
ANU😳

Thank You!

Thanks for making me smile with your comment:)

I will surely write Shravan's POV soon.