The Last Letter-Shraman OS *Suman's POV* IMP NOTE- PG3

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Mitali Gupta

@SleepyPsycho

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: LubSha
Hey Mitali,
Amazing OS. I could feel Sumo's pain, how hopelessly she's in love with Shravan that even after knowing he's with Urvashi her love is as strong as before or even more. But going by the last part that Sumo writes him not to give her sly looks when she's not looking, makes me think as if Shravan is what choti Sumo in the show. He wants to just hold on to the reputation he has but in real he cares and maybe even love her. Please update Shravan's POV after receiving the letter. Thanks.

Lubna.

Thank You :)

Relieved that you could feel the pain by just words,my aim gets completed here.

@bold *smirk smirk"

Since many requests are pouring in Iigjt just write with Shravan's POV

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Mitali Gupta

@SleepyPsycho

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Jerry2308

Amazing...so expressive letter
Would surely like to know shravan's POV

Thank You.

Glad the words could express.

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Nik03

@Nik03

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Hey Mitali...
First of all loved the concept...!!
Sumo's Pain n Love in the letter is soo impactful..!!
She is angry on him but her love is much more stronger n deep...!!
'Sly Glances'.of Shravan gives me a hope that he also feels something for her but dont voice them out... 😳

Amazing os dear... 👏
But plz give us Shravan's pov also...pretty plz..!!
Dont leave it there...!!
Loads of Love n 🤗
Nik

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Mitali Gupta

@SleepyPsycho

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Nik03
Hey Mitali...
First of all loved the concept...!!
Sumo's Pain n Love in the letter is soo impactful..!!
She is angry on him but her love is much more stronger n deep...!!
'Sly Glances'.of Shravan gives me a hope that he also feels something for her but dont voice them out... 😳

Amazing os dear... 👏
But plz give us Shravan's pov also...pretty plz..!!
Dont leave it there...!!
Loads of Love n 🤗
Nik

Hi!

Thank You so much :)

Well isn't this love all about? No matter how much he hurts you,how angry you are love will always soar above all.

*smirk* *smirk*

Will surely consider writing from Shravan's POV.

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humaira

@humairayousaf78

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

hello mam,

i am first time right on your post

so,this story was very emotional😭

i never expected that shravan with urvashi🥺

and sumo's letter that was alawww

and her advice...👏

eagerly waiting for shravan's pov...

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Spandana

@sptrno

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Awww a bit different but heart-touching beautiful like always dear...the best part why I love your writings is they are filled with deep feelings...thank u so much hun!

Please write Shravan's pov along with Suman's pov..Thank u!!

All the best for exams girl!!!

Love,

Spandana

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Mitali Gupta

@SleepyPsycho

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: humairayousaf78
hello mam,
i am first time right on your post
so,this story was very emotional😭
i never expected that shravan with urvashi🥺
and sumo's letter that was alawww
and her advice...👏
eagerly waiting for shravan's pov...

Hey! Don't call me mam,I am just a 16 year old girl.

Thank You :)

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Mitali Gupta

@SleepyPsycho

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: sptrno
Awww a bit different but heart-touching beautiful like always dear...the best part why I love your writings is they are filled with deep feelings...thank u so much hun!

Please write Shravan's pov along with Suman's pov..Thank u!!

All the best for exams girl!!!

Love,
Spandana

I hope this different concept worked out!

Awww that's the sweetest compliment I've got today.Glad my words could express the feelings.

Thank You :)

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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: SleepyPsycho

Thank You :)
Glad the impact could happen.This letter is very important and personal to me.

And as I said if I get good reviews then I will surely write one.(Even I want to write :P)

M sure...it reflects in the writing! !