Only You..... A ShraMan TS - 16/01/2017 - Part 3 - Page 20

Originally posted by: Akriti12

Hey zoya...Amazing TS...👏..superb story line, great dialogues and wonderful timings..👍🏼

Thank you Akriti😛

Cutie-pie ShraMan, Adorable ShraMan, jealous ShraMan & sensible ShraMan,all in one TS😊..

And Shravan.The jagga jassoos,is amazing..finally oxford brain worked..👏

Hehe shukriya...

So,zoya ji,the lift part was truly hillarious,sumo 'll always be sumo and her dialogues..🤣

the last part of lift scene was so sizzling...😉

Sizzling it was for sure 😛

coming to the second part,that was really really awesome,we have always seen jealous shravan but jealous sumo is just a fun..her reactions..🤣

Hahaha True that! Maza aata... Urvashi was underused I feel😆

liked the determined shravan who was trying to look beyond the curtain..😊

He was a lawyer after all...

and the dhulayi of aditya and shravan's dialogue-ladki jab na bolti hai to uka matlab na hi hota hai..

waah waah..👏

Haina 😳

shravan-nanu converstion was bliss..loved it to the core..

It was my favorite bit in the whole thing...

nanu was ❤️(kaash nanu show me bhi itne intelligent hote)

Haye aaise kaash bohot hai humare...

finally much awaited Shravan's proposal...loved sumo's reaction..so sumo like...😃

Yo! Very much in character...

ramu kaka ki to band baja di shravan ne..🥳

Layak hi tha woh uske😆

thoroughly enjoyed the story..😊

Glad you did...

well done zoya..👏

Thanks bro!

Originally posted by: evaviego

WOW... What an update...!!! Good job bro...!!! 👏

Thanks so much Eva!!!

first of all... Awesome song... and thats my fav song from Splitsvilla. and your friend sang it really well. 😊

Thank you! Glad you liked it...

Lawyer Mode ON... He indeed is the most sexiest lawyer and smartest also but only in our forum's stories, unfortunately. 😉

Unfortunately indeed

The bluff game was mindblowing... brilliant idea Zoya.. 👍🏼

Shukriya!

I can imagine kitna bada dhakka laga hoga Shravan ko... I really felt for him.

He was beyond shocked, hence the day going in a blur and incapacity to do much...

Shravan and Nanu convo was Super cute and awesomely penned...

My fav too😆

Mr. Hotshot lawyer ki toh hawaa tight ho gayi Nanu ke saamne 😆

I seriously have lost count of the number of times i have read that part.

Aww man...

He thought Nanu would reject him thinking he wasnt a good lawyer... awww... how cute...!!!

I know right!

What i loved was he did not divulge his dad's misdeed to Nanu. That is how our Shravan is...Khud toot jayega but wont harm others.

So well put!

The proposal was outstanding... 😳

Yey!!

Shravan, Pushkar, Preeti , Vandy & Varun saying it in unison... Awww... I liked it a lot.❤️

Cause dhakkan Sumo didn't quite get it😆

Suman's "gale padh gayi ab humesha ke liye" was ❤️

Haina! Just imagine if it happened...

Tom Uncle's tea stall. Loved that part too... What a perfect end to such an amazing part...

Thanksie!

I really hope we are getting an epilogue soon.

Sorry to disappoint you but nope, there is no epilogue for this one... The story is complete...

Originally posted by: sptrno

Awww this so beautiful emotional intense heart-touching romantic...you know how much I love you & your writing Dearest Zoya!

Aww man.. Thank you so much Spandana.. Yes I know😳

Thank you for not going missing this time haha!!...Actually, I'm so sorry for commenting late...I was just a bit...

Hehe pleasure Ma'am😉

And that's okay, no issues...

Love,

Spandana

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

What the hell!

Who do you think you're Zoyi? Matlab how do you manage to do it?

My name is Zoya and I'm not sure how😆

You know, I was reading Part One

And as it build on the intense part, Mom came in and asked like 'What are you doing'

I got so damn tensed, kya bolun usko, what am I reading!?🤣☺️

Hahaha you should have said murder mystery padh rahi hoon 😆

Suman did kill Shravan after all😉

Lol, anyways, its beautifully done

Wonderfully expressed

Thank you!

Bada accha laga, itte din baad, I came so close to them. Thank you jaan!

Bada accha laga itne din baad you came around here...

Keep rocking, writing and surprising!

Hopefully 😳

Muah. :*

Muah back!

Originally posted by: shaggy8

Hi zoya...
Wow...amazing update yaar..

Thank you ya!
Loved the way how shravan was fumbling in front of nanu 😆 ...

Me too😆
proposal was like cherry on the cake...loved it...

Glad you did...
Thanks for pm

You're welcome anytime!

Originally posted by: pearl100

Hello Zoya 🤗

Swathi🤗

Dhanya bhaag humare jo aap yahan padhare😳

Kya likhti ho boss 👏 The first Part was superb ...the ending part set the temp very high 😆 the pepper spray phir davai lagana 😆 full chance pe dance hovving 😆😆 That was too good, read this part a week ago 😆yaar thik se yaad nahi kab padha tha maine.

Tu na, best hai😆

Thank you haan ke mai yaad hoon tujhe🤣

The second part 🤣 the jealousy making part was so hilarious esp when sumo n shy were giving each other names 🤣 shravn opening his top few buttons...and Sumo's Jealousy saying nange hi aajate 🤣and then loved the way he protected Sumo from that creep Aditya...love your sense of humor yaar...

Thank you ya! I love it too😆

Will be back after reading the last part...I'm so loving it...Till then take care.

I shall be waiting for your response!

Originally posted by: ReebaS

Awesome

Originally posted by: Nik03

Hey buddy... 😊

Hey Nik!
Sorry for being soo late...!!
Oh that's okay...
Comeback of sassy Shravan Malhotra...A treat to read..!! 😉
Glad you liked it so...
Threaten Sumo with suiside...Really filmy Shravan... 😆

Hehe
So the peon gave the cheque to Shravan...Special shout out to the peon here..!! 😆

The peon is the real MVP!😆

Your Shravan has BRAINS!!!...n he do uses it.. 👍🏼

@Bold Mine indeed
Waoh!!...kya Cross-Questioning ki h Mr. Malhotra ne mr. Manager ke saath... Impressive...👏
Camera recordings...Ab lagta hai ke Oxford ki degree hai Shravan ke paas... 😳
And he figured a lot by the recordings...!! 😊
Proved his metal bro...
Angry Shravan... 😳

Such a jaan...
But why Pushkar was defending Aditya...Idiot!!
Pushkin was Aditya's friend at the end of the day, he would find it hard to grasp his behavior 😛
Shravan's way of putting haldi on Sumo's cheeks was... ❤️
Show me to dekhne ko mila nhi... 😕
Imagine kar lo... koi na...
ShraMan in a room alone n Shravan locked it... 😳
What a blind arrow Shravan...!! 👏
Nishne pe to lagna hi tha...!!
Sexiest and smartes lawyer...Exactly..!!
😳
Finally Sumo blurt the truth..!!
She needed but a nudge and she would have blurted out everything... Shravan knew her way too well...
The emotional turmoil Shravan was going through is written beautifully dear...loved it!!

Glad you mentioned it...
Preety's side... 😊
N nanu is nanu...who understands ShraMan in and out..!!😊
Shravan's blabbering over Pyar n bohot saara pyar literally cracked me up... 🤣
If it would have happened in show, Namik would have Nailed it...!!!
Oh he would have slayed! Maza hi aa jata...

"Beta mujhe umeed hai ke courtroom mai daleel iss tarha nahi dete tum, warna case haar jaate."...😆
"Nanu mai accha lawyer hoon sach mai."...Aww!
"Safed baal? Abhi bohot kam bachehai.."... 😆
Nanu-Shravan convo was just love...!!
I just loved their banter from the initial episodes... It was pure love!
Shravan didnt wanted to spoil Ramnath's image infront of his mentor so he lied...Thats our Shravan...!!

Aye! My Shravan😳
I loved how Shravan asked Sumo first before proposing her in front of everyone..!! 😊
Gentle man 😎
And what a proposal Zoya... 👏
In ShraMan style..!!
Yey🥳
Shravan-Ramnath showdown was mind blowing buddy...loved it..!!

Cold and killer😉
And what a perfact ending buddy...!! 👏

Thank you!
Loved the song... 😊
Happy yoy did :D
All in all it was a mind boggling TS dear...Thanks a ton for writing it..!! 😊
You're welcome bro!
Keep these coming...!!

Hopefully I will😃
Loads of Love n Loads of 🤗 to you buddy...!!

Love and hugs right back at you!
Nik

Originally posted by: pearl100

Zoya 🤗

Swathi 🤗

Read the final part ...Awesome chapter yaar ...I was smiling, giggling, laughing 😆 at shravn's blabber in front of Nanu...Loved and enjoyed reading your story...I always found the scenes of Nanu and Shravn's to be very natural...That proposal scene was so sweet, Lambu is smart must say 😎 sidha Cctv leke he came to the right conclusion.

Yey! So happy you liked it and even happier that it made you smile 😃

Enjoyed reading this TS thoroughly dear 😃😃 will have to read your other stories...Cya there...Till then take care. 😃

You're on a reading spree it seems!

I shall await your presence on my threads...

Btw 😆 Priii and Reshu ki replies dekh ke hassi aati hai mujhe esp Prii 🤣 her gif's are too good.

I know right! Their comments and gifs are lit AF!

Originally posted by: orion23

@Bold Thank you so so much Eva...

Loved your comment...