Only You..... A ShraMan TS - 16/01/2017 - Part 3 - Page 19

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

amazing update

absolutely brilliant

so happy for shraman

continue soon

Originally posted by: pritiyerne

OMG zoya...what a update mind-blowing👏

Shukriya...

i was chuckling like a fool all the time when shravan confessing to nanu ...pyar wala dialogue

Flustered Shravu was a treat

u just nailed it dear...everything is just perfect loved it ❤️

I'm glad😃

Finally proved he proved his oxford brain...and shramans antics omg grt part...u did it again👍🏼

Hehehe thanks...

luv u dear

priti

Originally posted by: LubSha

Hi Zoya,

Totally loved the last part too. This was an amazing TS. Another masterpiece from you.

*Blushes profusely* Oh stop it you😳

Wish we could get time on the show to witness this kind of Shravan who figures out everything by himself. The way he finds out truth was interesting.

I swear! It would have been a treat!

The proposal was awesome. We've been craved to see this on the show. Please keep come up with another write up soon. Love your writing. 👏

Here's hoping😛

Lubna.

Originally posted by: bworm

Loved it.

Yey!!

This was fantastic.

Your shravan uses his brains...

MY SHRAVAN! Hayye! I love it when you guys say that😳 😆

Wish hindi serial ke ML itne dumb na ho.

Makes two!

Very well written. ..I had this smile on my face which kept on getting bigger as the story progressed.

Happiness!!!

Feel so good after reading this. Aisa kuch show mein dikhta to maza a jata.

Happy to help!

Thank you

No! Thank you!

Originally posted by: Safire

Superbly written chapter!!!

Thank you 😃

I enjoyed the conversation between shravan and nanu;it was so fantastic!!

Cuteness na!

I could only wish that the writers of this forum to be a part of EDKV story _writing team!!!

Aww man! That's huge! But yes this forum does have some amazing writers!

By the way will there be an epilogue?

Umm.. nope sorry... the story stands complete😛

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Your Shravan has used his London returned brain to slove the mystery between his father & Sumo & succeeded 🤗

My Shravan ... ji shukriya ❤️

Sumo has full faith on him as he will handle everything she doesn't need to worry about his father & happily agreed to being with him its very cute but what he was going through she couldn't imagine at all... 😒

She will make it up to him I'm sure 😉

The way he was blabbering infont of Nanu was really funny i read 2 times like yeh ladka kya keh raha hai...when Nanu said mujhe pata hai tum court mein aise daleele nehin dete, nehin toh tum haar jate... & Shravan, nehin woh main matlab mere saamne koi nehin bol pata 🤣 kaise badbada raha tha Nanu ke saamne... Your Nanu intelligent he knew it something cooking between these 2... Humare show ke Nanu ko toh kuch bhi nehin pata😲

Mere versions mai all the good people are intelligent... baaki bas gadhe hai😆

Shravan didn't take his father's truth bitterly... Smoothly handled for him his & Sumo's relationship was imp rather than father's confrontation...

This was him being mature... forgiveness is yet far fetched...

Our love bird together finally happy for them...

Nice update & Thanx for PM

Thank you and you're welcome!

Keep writing about Shraman...

Indeed!!!

Vinu

Originally posted by: orion23

@Bold Thanks so much Saf!

Originally posted by: Safire

By the way,i like you calling me Saf😃

Originally posted by: arshuaar

Totally loved it...
... an amazing TS...
... 've been craved to see this on the show.
thank you for the wonderful write up...😊

Originally posted by: Jerry2308

Awesome update... Finally Oxford return lawyer is back in action..

Shravan's confession in front of Nanu Nd the whole proposal scene was really cute..

Thank you!!

Thanks for the PM

You're welcome!