Only You..... A ShraMan TS - 16/01/2017 - Part 3

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#161

Your Shravan has used his London returned brain to slove the mystery between his father & Sumo & succeeded 🤗

Sumo has full faith on him as he will handle everything she doesn't need to worry about his father & happily agreed to being with him its very cute but what he was going through she couldn't imagine at all... 😒

The way he was blabbering infont of Nanu was really funny i read 2 times like yeh ladka kya keh raha hai...when Nanu said mujhe pata hai tum court mein aise daleele nehin dete, nehin toh tum haar jate... & Shravan, nehin woh main matlab mere saamne koi nehin bol pata 🤣 kaise badbada raha tha Nanu ke saamne... Your Nanu intelligent he knew it something cooking between these 2... Humare show ke Nanu ko toh kuch bhi nehin pata😲

Shravan didn't take his father's truth bitterly... Smoothly handled for him his & Sumo's relationship was imp rather than father's confrontation... 😒

Our love bird together finally happy for them...

Nice update & Thanx for PM

Keep writing about Shraman...

Vinu

Edited by vimikrao - 8 years ago

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arshuaar

@arshuaar

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#162

Totally loved it...
... an amazing TS...
... 've been craved to see this on the show.
thank you for the wonderful write up...😊

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Meera

@Jerry2308

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#163

Awesome update... Finally Oxford return lawyer is back in action..

Shravan's confession in front of Nanu Nd the whole proposal scene was really cute..

Thanks for the PM

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Akriti12

@Akriti12

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#164

Hey zoya...Amazing TS...👏..superb story line, great dialogues and wonderful timings..👍🏼

Cutie-pie ShraMan, Adorable ShraMan, jealous ShraMan & sensible ShraMan,all in one TS😊..

And Shravan.The jagga jassoos,is amazing..finally oxford brain worked..👏

So,zoya ji,the lift part was truly hillarious,sumo 'll always be sumo and her dialogues..🤣

the last part of lift scene was so sizzling...😉

coming to the second part,that was really really awesome,we have always seen jealous shravan but jealous sumo is just a fun..her reactions..🤣

liked the determined shravan who was trying to look beyond the curtain..😊

and the dhulayi of aditya and shravan's dialogue-ladki jab na bolti hai to uka matlab na hi hota hai..

waah waah..👏

shravan-nanu converstion was bliss..loved it to the core..

nanu was ❤️(kaash nanu show me bhi itne intelligent hote)

finally much awaited Shravan's proposal...loved sumo's reaction..so sumo like...😃

ramu kaka ki to band baja di shravan ne..🥳

thoroughly enjoyed the story..😊

well done zoya..👏

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evaviego

@evaviego

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#165

WOW... What an update...!!! Good job bro...!!! 👏

first of all... Awesome song... and thats my fav song from Splitsvilla. and your friend sang it really well. 😊

Lawyer Mode ON... He indeed is the most sexiest lawyer and smartest also but only in our forum's stories, unfortunately. 😉

The bluff game was mindblowing... brilliant idea Zoya.. 👍🏼

I can imagine kitna bada dhakka laga hoga Shravan ko... I really felt for him.

Shravan and Nanu convo was Super cute and awesomely penned...

Mr. Hotshot lawyer ki toh hawaa tight ho gayi Nanu ke saamne 😆

I seriously have lost count of the number of times i have read that part.

He thought Nanu would reject him thinking he wasnt a good lawyer... awww... how cute...!!!

What i loved was he did not divulge his dad's misdeed to Nanu. That is how our Shravan is...Khud toot jayega but wont harm others.

The proposal was outstanding... 😳

Shravan, Pushkar, Preeti , Vandy & Varun saying it in unison... Awww... I liked it a lot.❤️

Suman's "gale padh gayi ab humesha ke liye" was ❤️

Tom Uncle's tea stall. Loved that part too... What a perfect end to such an amazing part...

I really hope we are getting an epilogue soon.

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Spandana

@sptrno

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#166

Awww this so beautiful emotional intense heart-touching romantic...you know how much I love you & your writing Dearest Zoya!

Thank you for not going missing this time haha!!...Actually, I'm so sorry for commenting late...I was just a bit...

Love,

Spandana

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#167

What the hell!

Who do you think you're Zoyi? Matlab how do you manage to do it?

You know, I was reading Part One

And as it build on the intense part, Mom came in and asked like 'What are you doing'

I got so damn tensed, kya bolun usko, what am I reading!?🤣☺️

Lol, anyways, its beautifully done

Wonderfully expressed

Bada accha laga, itte din baad, I came so close to them. Thank you jaan!

Keep rocking, writing and surprising!

Muah. :*

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shaggy8

@shaggy8

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#168

Hi zoya...
Wow...amazing update yaar..
Loved the way how shravan was fumbling in front of nanu 😆 ...
proposal was like cherry on the cake...loved it...
Thanks for pm

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Silverrmoon

@Silverrmoon

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#169

Hello Zoya 🤗

Kya likhti ho boss 👏 The first Part was superb ...the ending part set the temp very high 😆 the pepper spray phir davai lagana 😆 full chance pe dance hovving 😆😆 That was too good, read this part a week ago 😆yaar thik se yaad nahi kab padha tha maine.

The second part 🤣 the jealousy making part was so hilarious esp when sumo n shy were giving each other names 🤣 shravn opening his top few buttons...and Sumo's Jealousy saying nange hi aajate 🤣and then loved the way he protected Sumo from that creep Aditya...love your sense of humor yaar...Will be back after reading the last part...I'm so loving it...Till then take care.

Edited by pearl100 - 8 years ago