Hide n Seek.. Shraman FF - Epilogue 2 page 101 - Page 43

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Pillow talk
"I am a fitness freak not a gym freak... jali 😆

"Clean it on the day she comes back" he gave his butler a defeated look before walking... 🤗

So status quo maintained hai?" ... 🤣 daya ka paatr Shravan! !

They reached home in the night and Sumo scooted to her room to never appear..!..what next!😲

Rooh se chaahne wale aashiq,
Baatein jismo ki karte nahi..

Bol do na zara
Dil mein jo hai chipa
Main kisi se kahunga nahi..!


hhhayyyeee Tabby mere dil me abhi ye hi aya tha !! 🤗

abhi to Pushkar ki re-entry baki hai.. !! picture bahi baaki hai mere dost


they should give a LOUUUV button for posts too.. and you would get that right now

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: mehersudhar

Hi

Reading story with so much enthusiasm. Daily checking forums for 10 times. And the updates r damn fresh and interesting. You have a nice future as a writer and screenplay too in tact. Thoda love bits shuroo karo shraman keliye. Shravan is waiting from her side first.



atience baalike !! patience.. love to hai.. jo lafzo se aur ankho se bayaan ho.. baki sab to len den ki baate hoti hain...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ReebaS

Jalkukkada shrawan... Well I can understand suman's situation... Overall a very good update dear.. Its awwwesome


😆 I want to explore that some more !!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: pritiyerne

hey dips thanks for PM...the chapii was awesome...but feeling bad for shravan ab to biwi bhi ban gayi phir bhi etana distance maintain karna pad raha hai 🤔

finally diya corrupted sumos mind with virus 😉 lets see kya hota hai aage...very excited😃


hmm virus entered.. now system can completely shut down or just act out of order !! kuch bhi ho sakta hai
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: deltadawn


hmm virus entered.. now system can completely shut down or just act out of order !! kuch bhi ho sakta hai


hoping sumo's system should act out of order as complementary for her j hubby😉...but being sumo her system may shut down completely 😆...both the possibilities are there lets see what u have in ur crazy mind and where u will lead them dear


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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh my seems Shraman ki after marriage bael gaadi ke speed par chal rahi hai.
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Posted: 8 years ago
That was so nice update .. the night talk with pillows ,so cute,just love it .. James Bond & Sherlock Sumo ki kahaani .. That moment when she lied to Niharika 😉possessive Sumo ..Shravan Jealous by Ved,fun to watch him Sadte hue😛 .. Ved entry is good,u might work upon it and use him later too as noone knows she has such a hot husband already and may be hit upon by Ved😉 And the bus stop scene , I'm fan of such beautiful scenes and 1 liners "Mujhe kuch sunai ni de raha , 2 min chup rahogi" and their lovely hug,both finding peace in each other embrace.. 👏Poor Raghu ! Didn't even know that his boss scolded him coz he cleared up feel of Sumo's presence .. And Diya corrupted Sumo's mind,poor Sumo !! 😃 kya kare,pushkar aur shravan ke alawa koi friends the hi nhi,jo usko aise guttaral gossips de sake ..And was always under so much burden.. She's too naive and innocent;toh difficult to hoga hi yeh sab digest karna... Phone conversations made her crazy,ab live display toh lil too much ho jaega for her comfort zone😊... Let's see what happens .. (I know many ppl won't agree with me aur muje mar v denge but I connect so much with this Sumo coz I'm also like her,can't pay attention and manage 2 things at a time,some ppl r super talented but sm r not !😕)
(I don't know why ppl are hell bent in forcing them to take the next step so soon,I toh just love this slow romance and cute Shraman moments,I don't know of others but for me a romantic heart touching statement,a loving gesture,an eyelock or an out of blue hug is much more appealing than kissing / making out ..That's blissful moments of love for me😳 I'm a fan of shy eyelocks or secret handholds more 🤓 ,, I'll get chappals now 😃)
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awww so cute wonderful beautiful like always dear...thank u so much!


Love,
Spandana
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Posted: 8 years ago
Brilliant update...There sumo is jealous becoz of Niharika Nd here shravan is jealous becoz of ved😆
The phone Convo was really cute❤️
Nd the flashback shows how much shravan want to stay close to Sumo..
Bechari Sumo Diya corrupted her mind with too much information couldn't face anyone locked herself in her room🤣
Eagerly waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: adityasingh.246

That was so nice update .. the night talk with pillows ,so cute,just love it .. James Bond & Sherlock Sumo ki kahaani .. That moment when she lied to Niharika 😉possessive Sumo ..Shravan Jealous by Ved,fun to watch him Sadte hue😛 .. Ved entry is good,u might work upon it and use him later too as noone knows she has such a hot husband already and may be hit upon by Ved😉 And the bus stop scene , I'm fan of such beautiful scenes and 1 liners "Mujhe kuch sunai ni de raha , 2 min chup rahogi" and their lovely hug,both finding peace in each other embrace.. 👏Poor Raghu ! Didn't even know that his boss scolded him coz he cleared up feel of Sumo's presence .. And Diya corrupted Sumo's mind,poor Sumo !! 😃 kya kare,pushkar aur shravan ke alawa koi friends the hi nhi,jo usko aise guttaral gossips de sake ..And was always under so much burden.. She's too naive and innocent;toh difficult to hoga hi yeh sab digest karna... Phone conversations made her crazy,ab live display toh lil too much ho jaega for her comfort zone😊... Let's see what happens .. (I know many ppl won't agree with me aur muje mar v denge but I connect so much with this Sumo coz I'm also like her,can't pay attention and manage 2 things at a time,some ppl r super talented but sm r not !😕)

(I don't know why ppl are hell bent in forcing them to take the next step so soon,I toh just love this slow romance and cute Shraman moments,I don't know of others but for me a romantic heart touching statement,a loving gesture,an eyelock or an out of blue hug is much more appealing than kissing / making out ..That's blissful moments of love for me😳 I'm a fan of shy eyelocks or secret handholds more 🤓 ,, I'll get chappals now 😃)



Seriously Adi... I am telling you atleast start a story and maybe we can work together... But u ll do good. Try to karo..

And haan I am also a big fan of mush. And words... So you ll get that always in my stories.

Sumo os naive... She is not a stone!! Chappal hum dono saath me kha le ge 😉

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