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deltadawn

@deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#431

Originally posted by: Jerry2308
Brilliant update...There sumo is jealous becoz of Niharika Nd here shravan is jealous becoz of ved😆
The phone Convo was really cute❤️
Nd the flashback shows how much shravan want to stay close to Sumo..
Bechari Sumo Diya corrupted her mind with too much information couldn't face anyone locked herself in her room🤣
Eagerly waiting for next update

Thanks Jerry ... Next one coming up hopefully today or tomorrow morning.😊

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#432

Originally posted by: deltadawn

reshma ne bola na.. dusri biwi leke aati hu.. wais ebhi ye Tv serial jaise ban hi gaya hai 😉

U r write jab tak doosri nehin ayegi Shravan ke zindagi Sumo ke mote akal ko Shravan ki keemat samaj nehin ayegi... Tab tak humein us cheez ki ehmiyat samaj nehin ayegi jab tak humein uss cheez ko koh dene ka darr na satayegi... Jub woh cheez hum se door hone ka ehsaas hota hai tabi humein uss cheez ki value pata chal tha hai... Jo cheez asani se milta hai usse hum for granted lete hain... Sumo ko ek zor ka jhatka dena padega... 😆😡

Edited by vimikrao - 8 years ago

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adityasingh.246

@adityasingh.246

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#433

Originally posted by: deltadawn

Seriously Adi... I am telling you atleast start a story and maybe we can work together... But u ll do good. Try to karo..

Ah! So sweet of u .. But I'm engaged in life like striving for job now,So only reading good works here now.. But U'll be 1st if I ever start smtg .. ❤️
And haan I am also a big fan of mush. And words... So you ll get that always in my stories.
That's what I love about ur stories..
Sumo os naive... She is not a stone!! Chappal hum dono saath me kha le ge 😉
Haan , dono khaa lenge !!

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#434

Originally posted by: Itssanjh
Res
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Unres
Sorryyy Deepti, res to kar gayi, unress karne ka waqt hi nahin mila! Loved the update. Sweet and simple. I don't know about others! But like sumo I also become very uncomfortable of watching PDA. And as I said, earlier, if I were Sumo, I would have done the same, giving priority to my studies and career first. But let's see what is in your mind...abhi to dhamal hoga ji! Now that she is married.. And diya already corrupted her mind... Pata nahin Sumo ka dimag kis gutter mein jayega...waiting for more.

ha ha I was waiting.. chalo you got time to read it and I am glad.

Stuck in the next one.. ki sumo ka dimaag kitne gutter me jana chahiye 😆

Lets see... soon.

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#435

Originally posted by: deltadawn

ha ha I was waiting.. chalo you got time to read it and I am glad.

Stuck in the next one.. ki sumo ka dimaag kitne gutter me jana chahiye 😆

Lets see... soon.

Pada to pehele hi tha... But got stuck.. Yeh.. College wale... Jaan leke chodegi! Final year hai... So everyone is going ga ga over exams and campusing! Pata nahin mera kya hoga! 😭

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Maggot16

@Maggot16

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#436

Amazing update dipti👏...but want more of jealous shravan and intimacy😉...and you said updates will be faster than light since you have got less work..i kept on checking the forum today to see your fast update...but didn't get any😭..par chalo koi nhi..bas kal mat wait karwana😳

Edited by Maggot16 - 8 years ago

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#437

Originally posted by: Itssanjh

Pada to pehele hi tha... But got stuck.. Yeh.. College wale... Jaan leke chodegi! Final year hai... So everyone is going ga ga over exams and campusing! Pata nahin mera kya hoga! 😭

he he ... achcha hi hoga. don't worry

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#438

Originally posted by: Maggot16
Amazing update dipti👏...but want more of jealous shravan and intimacy😉...and you said updates will be faster than light since you have got less work..i kept on checking the forum today to see your fast update...but didn't get any😭..par chalo koi nhi..bas kal mat wait karwana😳

sorry ho gaya yaar.. got pulled into meetings so not able to edit... really sorry

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nadeeka1200

@nadeeka1200

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#439

I am the one who comment first omg.

Really nice update

Thank u waiting 4 next update

Edited by nadeeka1200 - 8 years ago

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priety.priti

@priety.priti

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#440

finally gadi thodi to aage badhi 😆...atleast kiss pe to pohchaya, so virus working on other way system working in diff way😉...sumo initiated it i am so happy and grinning like a idiot man 🤪. dusari biwi ka tease was just added sugar in ur update, i loved this so much

aisehi jaldi jaldi update dete raho dear a big 🤗one for this update

till then

luv

priti