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deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#441

Originally posted by: pritiyerne
finally gadi thodi to aage badhi 😆...atleast kiss pe to pohchaya, so virus working on other way system working in diff way😉...sumo initiated it i am so happy and grinning like a idiot man 🤪. dusari biwi ka tease was just added sugar in ur update, i loved this so much
aisehi jaldi jaldi update dete raho dear a big 🤗one for this update

till then

luv
priti

glad you liked it dear. Heading out for the weekend so no update for few days...mostly !! mera dimaag sumo se jyada alag nahi hai.. jhatke aate hain

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imshveta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#442

You are so good!! you practically tempt people to comment... even stubborn silent readers like me. 😕.
And the best part is you update so regularly. It's like getting your daily dose of shraman.. I actually wait for it everyday.
Thank you so much for treating us with your writing and this beautiful story.
Please keep it coming

Love
Shveta

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deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#443

Originally posted by: imshveta
You are so good!! you practically tempt people to comment... even stubborn silent readers like me. 😕.
And the best part is you update so regularly. It's like getting your daily dose of shraman.. I actually wait for it everyday.
Thank you so much for treating us with your writing and this beautiful story.
Please keep it coming

Love
Shveta

First of all a big hug to you for commenting. 🤗

Welcome to tue crazier side.. now u started so dont stop giving your inputs 😊

So glad you liked the story. Keep reading and letting me know how u felt abt the update

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MadhuGupta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#444

Lovely update.i will wait next update.😊

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kranti

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Posted: 8 years ago

#445

Really very awesome update... You know when we read every episode you write whole situation,scene comes front of me... there characters,house,university ,her friends,raghu kaka comes front of me... it's like I am watching on TV... off course Suman Shravan & their love comes indent of my eyes.

Whatever I missed in EDKV ( Romance. Between them) I can feel here.. thx dear

Daily I wait for your update...

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Safire

@Safire

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Posted: 8 years ago

#446

It was a fantastic update!!

Iam wondering how you are good at giving even the minute details!!!!

I was reading this forgetting my breakfast itself,it so hooked me into it!!!!

And the last line...

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adityasingh.246

@adityasingh.246

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Posted: 8 years ago

#447

Is this called a special update ? It was so good .. Infact reading your updates,those few minutes of the day is like stress buster,travelling to another world and watching lovebirds Shraman ... 🤗

It was awesome,the way she thinks in her head,confused,lil afraid,lil shy just like me .. She made moong dal ka halwa to make up for her behaviour .. And he's one step ahead,deep freezed it,madly in love,he is .. The movie idea was gr8 but left them both even confused,it was hilarious that they travelled silently and didn't have anything to say .. shravan's thoughts r cute 'he'll die virgin-married but vrgin😉'& she thinks he's keeping distance ..

She was sharing her confusion with Ved 😆"baby steps" hahha.. poor shravan wasted his b'day reading law book .. Raghu always is in team sumo akka .. 😃 shravan always has a doubt about raghu's food,perks of having a chef as wife .. his happiness was beyond measure at finding her home finally on his b'day .. Ah ! finally she accepted the possessive biwi side,that she might kill her friends..And she took the next step finally,with him not backing out ❤️.. love love all the way .. last line was👏 update soon ..

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vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#448

Toh Sumo ki bail ghadi todi todi tez chalne lagi... Shravan what should I say about this guy... 😛 He is missing her so much that Halwa made by her eating every night little that too deep freezed.!.. Now birthday cake how many days will be there in deep freezed...Sumo madam took her one baby step of her to reach Shravan & kissed him after so long... Poor guy longing for this since so many months... 😒

So how many days weekend chutti of your's... Jaldi vapas ake update dena... Waiting...

Thanx for the PM

Vinu

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deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#449

Originally posted by: kranti
Really very awesome update... You know when we read every episode you write whole situation,scene comes front of me... there characters,house,university ,her friends,raghu kaka comes front of me... it's like I am watching on TV... off course Suman Shravan & their love comes indent of my eyes.
Whatever I missed in EDKV ( Romance. Between them) I can feel here.. thx dear
Daily I wait for your update...

Thanks Kranti.

Glad you are fond of the updates. Keep reading😊

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#450

Originally posted by: Safire
It was a fantastic update!!
Iam wondering how you are good at giving even the minute details!!!!

I was reading this forgetting my breakfast itself,it so hooked me into it!!!!
And the last line...

Thanks Saf.

The last line is a reminder for moi to remember where I was headed...

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