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deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#411

Originally posted by: Rubyag23
Yaar first of all a veryyy big thankyou for mentioning me ur chapter... No seriously yaar i was really amused to read all ur chapters in one go... I became difficult for me to leave the chapter in between b ecause of the interst u have maintained in each and every chapter so i decided to read it all... And today was a holiday so i was more elated bcoz i was able to read all the parts without any hindrance... Once agin i would say u are more than fantastic...😆👏... Regarding chapter 24 i loved it the way u presented their phone conversation... They are so cute miss kar ek doosre ko par confess nhi karenge ek doosre ko hahaha... And then my favkurite part of the chapter THE JEALOUS SHRAVAN hahahaaha he got jealous after knowing about ved o my god... And sumo's fluster uff ye ladki doosre ka romance sunke bhi sharmati hai😆... This chapter was alzo very nice... Looking forward for more cute shraman scenes and waiting for ur next update dear😊

thank you dear 😊

Phone convo yeah had it in mind for a long time.. ye time achcha tha.. now that they are getting back on track.

Jealous Shravan ... might take that forward.. ab Ved ko banaya hi hai to lets see... I don't write bulk chapters so even I am not sure till my next flash of ideas where the story will go..

Sumo is naaive.. when he did this on the phone she got so nervous her brain fuzzed out and brought down her grades.. ye sab to ab saamne hoga !!

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#412

Originally posted by: MadhuGupta
Very nice update.

thank you 😊

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#413

Originally posted by: Edkvforever
Nice update

thanks dear 😊

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#414

Originally posted by: vimikrao
Diya has spoiled Sumo's mind inserting inside her mind with all the gutter thoughts... Bechari Sumo couldn't face anyone after dinner locked herself in the room... 😆
I really pity for Shravan lagta hai jab tak Sumo ki padayi khatam hogi Shravan such mein baba ban jayega Himalaya jane ke liye... 😆 Saint Shravan aur kitna din booka rehna hoga... 🤣 Sumo ambitions kuch zyaada hi ho raha hai... 😡

Thanx for PM..

Aise hi bullet train ke speed pe update dete rehna... 😉

Vinu

reshma ne bola na.. dusri biwi leke aati hu.. wais ebhi ye Tv serial jaise ban hi gaya hai 😉

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#415

Originally posted by: arshuaar
thanx for PM...😊
awesome...
so beautifully penned... loved it...
eagerly waiting...

thank dear.

Keep reading 😊

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#416

Originally posted by: anukulgr8
Ye sumo aise kaise hai yaar...Shravan jaise handsome tall dashing fitness freak sexy cute☺️ husband mila hai aur ek kiss bhi nahi???
Yaar plz sumo ko bhagvan akal dedo...🤢
chappy was super...teri bullet train tez daud rahi hai dips...
Loved it...
Pillow talk was bliss...show ki yaad a gayi...
Update soon...
Love,
ANU😳

Sumo to sumo hai isliliye to Shravan itna lattoo hai.. hamare jais ehoti to usko bhi bhaav nahi deta shayad 😉 😆😆

Bhagvan to yaha kuch kar nahi sakte.. akal to deni padegi kyu?

ha ha bullet train kal tak daudegi then I am out for ht eweekend so no updates till wednesday I think.'

Pillow talk.. I had in my mind for like forever sinc ethe time he had left after engagement... its the cutest thing for long distance premis.. personal experience.. 😳

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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#417

Pillow talk

"I am a fitness freak not a gym freak... jali 😆

"Clean it on the day she comes back" he gave his butler a defeated look before walking... 🤗

So status quo maintained hai?" ... 🤣 daya ka paatr Shravan! !

They reached home in the night and Sumo scooted to her room to never appear..!..what next!😲

Rooh se chaahne wale aashiq,
Baatein jismo ki karte nahi..

Bol do na zara
Dil mein jo hai chipa
Main kisi se kahunga nahi..!

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Reeba shukla

@ReebaS

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#418

Jalkukkada shrawan... Well I can understand suman's situation... Overall a very good update dear.. Its awwwesome

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mehersudhar

@mehersudhar

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#419

Reading story with so much enthusiasm. Daily checking forums for 10 times. And the updates r damn fresh and interesting. You have a nice future as a writer and screenplay too in tact. Thoda love bits shuroo karo shraman keliye. Shravan is waiting from her side first.

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priety.priti

@priety.priti

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#420

hey dips thanks for PM...the chapii was awesome...but feeling bad for shravan ab to biwi bhi ban gayi phir bhi etana distance maintain karna pad raha hai 🤔

finally diya corrupted sumos mind with virus 😉 lets see kya hota hai aage...very excited😃