I Promise - a shraman os - Page 4

Sorry dear for commenting so late

Originally posted by: theGoldenGirl

Sorry dear for commenting so late

I had read it before only (as a silent reader) and forgot to comment 😕 sorry for that

But I really loved the way you shaped the story

It was sweet enough for me smile like an idiot through out the read

Thanks for writing

dollu yar aise2 parts uthakr os ya ts likhti h ki kya kahu...i just love it.. that scene when shravu was saying to sumo that apne pati ko bed m khush rkho vo tmhe khush rkhega...i was like seriously how could u say this...was damn angry on shravu.. n tht girl well i knew it he will throw sarcasms, will insult her n will throw her out of his room ;) ...sumo k alawa mr malhotra ko kch dikhta hi kahan h ;) n adi ko to u made hero dollu :-p ...acha kia zyada drama ni kia adi ne ;) n shraman moment... kch ho jaye inke sarcasms to ni band honge n liar shravu ji lunga tumhare bina.. jhuta.. n then their confession n kiss ...n fattu ...lol... sumo hi action le skti thi :-p afterall sumo wrestler jo h :-p tmhare lap m sar rkhkr so jau ..it was so adorable...u slayed it dollu... thanks for pm..keep writing n sending me pm's :) love u dear..

Originally posted by: anonymousanju

dollu yar aise2 parts uthakr os ya ts likhti h ki kya kahu...i just love it.. that scene when shravu was saying to sumo that apne pati ko bed m khush rkho vo tmhe khush rkhega...i was like seriously how could u say this...was damn angry on shravu.. n tht girl well i knew it he will throw sarcasms, will insult her n will throw her out of his room ;) ...sumo k alawa mr malhotra ko kch dikhta hi kahan h ;) n adi ko to u made hero dollu :-p ...acha kia zyada drama ni kia adi ne ;) n shraman moment... kch ho jaye inke sarcasms to ni band honge n liar shravu ji lunga tumhare bina.. jhuta.. n then their confession n kiss ...n fattu ...lol... sumo hi action le skti thi :-p afterall sumo wrestler jo h :-p tmhare lap m sar rkhkr so jau ..it was so adorable...u slayed it dollu... thanks for pm..keep writing n sending me pm's :) love u dear..

Originally posted by: Namiksfan

Thanks a lot meri jaan😉

ur welcome meri jaan :)

Kaash , show ki sumo aisi ho tho😲 This was very beautiful!!!!

Originally posted by: Safire

Kaash , show ki sumo aisi ho tho😲 This was very beautiful!!!!

Originally posted by: Sunain

Dolly!!!..🤗🤗mein yahan bhi agae...😆😆

Ohh..this was an emotional one..😭...but i soo loved it..the way u portrayed their pain their love for each other Sumo's boldness most importantly😳...every part was hell amazzing!

The start was ...when i was watchinfg this Epi i was so disgusted by His deed and was like wht the hell hez doing..was hell mad at him but thn thought wht else he cud become...bachpan say negligence hi dekhnay ko mili woh bhi from the only two women he loved the most..his Maa and His Sumo and abhi bhi wohi ho raha hai..His Sumo is slipping away and therez nothing he could do then just hurting her and himself.

It is indeed a heartbreaking bitter truth

The way he humiliated and insulted her must be really dis-heartening for her.I mean the person she loves since her teen whn says such bitter things will obviously break her heart into trillion pieces😭

Thank God!!...Aditiya here wasn't a jerk...and Sumo not a pussy...kash show mein bhi Sumo aisi hi hoti tu kya hi hota!

Oye Hoye...Sumo's boldness her anger her confrontation...every thing was Mind blowing!👏👏...Brilliantly Penned!⭐️

Their entire convo was..❤️❤️❤️

😆😆...Sumo hai tu aisa hi karay gi..😆😆... Boldie queen...kiss was❤️

And the ending was a lovely one!

All in all..entire OS was penned beautifully!

I loved it A lot!⭐️

Kamaal hi kar dea...you indeed did a beautiful job!👏

Cheers!

Sunii❤️

Aww! This is so cute! Please continue!