I Promise - a shraman os - Page 3

Originally posted by: shaggy8

Amazing dr... beautifully penned... loved it...
Kash serial me aisa hota...but thank u so much for this cute emotional os 👏 ...
Keep writing more yaar... 😃 ...
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Originally posted by: evaviego

Good one... 👍🏼

Show mein toh Sumo bhool hi gayi thi abt that incident.. she never confronted him...

I really liked your version of the scene... 😊

And Sumo's boldness is ❤️

Great Job 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Good one

Originally posted by: krutish22

Hey dolly

Sorry for late comment

I read it but comment Karna hi bhool gayi

Nice os

Kash serial mai Sumo confess Kar deti or Aditya ko samj aa jati ki they love each other to itni kand nahi hota or hame ShraMan scene dekhne mil jate

Really love this one

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Originally posted by: vimikrao

So nice it was Dolly...

Shraman's story can't be bored anyone... How many times u read every time it seems new to us...

I can imagine Shravan in his black sherwani & Sumo in her peach lehenga with golden colour blouse...

So romantic ... Fattu ya Shravan is... when it comes romance he is always... He hesitants to hug her even in the show...

Keep writing

Thank you

Vinu

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Nice..👍🏼

Originally posted by: kishugarg

ye bhut achhi thi aur mai bilkul bor nahi hu and i loved it

kaash serial mai bhi isa kuch ho jata