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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

such an amazing piece this was, 👍🏼

take a bow, actually do it👏

i never realized that just opening the forum, would bring this enormous wide smile that a have prefixed on my face right now, 😊

really loved the last part, the way he said that he was complete with her, that just felt sooo right.

love you fo this one

Arpita

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Akriti12

@Akriti12

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Hey Malika, Amazing update dear..it's so so beautiful..👏

Really liked the theme of write-up..⭐️ It's so real, something we often came across in real life.😊

Loved your version of Shravan, so supportive & understanding..the way he took stand for his sumo is commendable. .(really wanted to see this shravan in EDKV...😭)

ShraMan's convo in last part is so lovable..❤️

If ever EDKV 2 happens, I wish they use your OS as their theme..😊

Best wishes for you..👍🏼

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Dolly Chouhan

@Namiksfan

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

You write so beautifully ...banks do coming up with this update filled with emotions when we had no updates in the forum...really really thankful...i loved the way he understood her and was with her in her decision...their cute antics always mesmerize me...and you write is so nicely...so all in all beautifully penned...thanks girl 👏👏

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Good one dear...

Today's 1st new update about Shraman...

Keep writing

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phoenix_edkv

@phoenix_edkv

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Amazing shraman piece. Absolutely loved it. It's soo sweet, cute, nice, peaceful, romantic, fluffy and soo much beautiful. You kinda made my day with this. I loved the way you penned Shravan's feelings and his respect towards Sumo and her decision about adding a junior bundle to their life. Please keep writing more.

Love

Madhu

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Nik03

@Nik03

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Wow!!!
Amazing one dear...Nailed it!!!
Loved Shraman's morning romance... 😳
"Crush on you like that Khosla" cracked me up!! 🤣
Sumo n shravan's emotional talk was amazingly written!!
Loved how Shravan supported Sumo!!
"I am complete with u"...
This line said it all!!! 👏
Love love loved it!!
Plz Do write more ...
Love
Nik

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malika

@_symphony

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: minho
Wow beautiful moments between shraman 😳 loved it 👏

Hey thankyou so much dear for reading and commenting...really glad you liked it 😊

Originally posted by: arshuaar
a wonderful piece of writing...
U r just awesome...
amazing...
loved it...

Thanks so much arshu for the sweet words 😳😊 Means a lot...😊😊

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malika

@_symphony

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: dhanyata
amazing piece of writing !! seriously made my day ! was feeling very very dry for not getting enough dose for the hangover disease coz of missing shraman😭
Respect for shravan went to a different level from this update !! so loving, caring and he respects her a lot !! can't express enough

Hats off👏

Hey Dhanyata thankss so much for your sweet words buddy...It feels so good when someone actually cares to mention the parts they liked in the story...😳 Really means soo much!! Thanks once again 😊😊

Originally posted by: sptrno
Aww this was beautiful as always hun..love your stories always they are always so heart-touching emotional so deep...thank u so much

Love,
Spandana

Hey Spandana...Your comments always leave a smile on my face. Thankyou so much buds for reading and commenting and always being so generous to me 😳😊 Really glad you could connect to my stories and my depiction of ShraMan 😊

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malika

@_symphony

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: ArpitaSingh1806
such an amazing piece this was, 👍🏼
take a bow, actually do it👏
i never realized that just opening the forum, would bring this enormous wide smile that a have prefixed on my face right now, 😊
really loved the last part, the way he said that he was complete with her, that just felt sooo right.

love you fo this one
Arpita

Aww thats so sweet of you Arpita!! 😊😊

So happy you could connect to that part...I think a woman not wanting a child or choosing a career over child for some time after her marriage is something yet too bold for our society. Especially in a show like this where the protagonist has been shown to be brought up with this mentality that a career oriented woman gives two hoots about her family. I would have definately LOVED to see Sharvan break these age old norms of the Malhotra khandaan. Especially the fact that Preeti and Pushkar planned their family so thoughtlessly awould have been an amazing contrast to ShraMan...How I wish we could have had this track. Would have loved to see Ramnath being uncomfortable to these novel ideas while Shravan would have emerged as the anti-thesis then thereby proving himself to be Sumo's perfect soulmate ❤️ To see ShraMan become Ram-Nirmala's anti-theses was undoubtedly a dream of sorts.

Originally posted by: Akriti12
Hey Malika, Amazing update dear..it's so so beautiful..👏
Really liked the theme of write-up..⭐️ It's so real, something we often came across in real life.😊
Loved your version of Shravan, so supportive & understanding..the way he took stand for his sumo is commendable. .(really wanted to see this shravan in EDKV...😭)
ShraMan's convo in last part is so lovable..❤️
If ever EDKV 2 happens, I wish they use your OS as their theme..😊
Best wishes for you..👍🏼

Hey Akriti, I am really happy you could connect to this version of Shravan. I think all of us wanted to see this version of Shravan...the Sumo's Shravan or I should say the career-oriented Sumo's Shravan 😉 You know till now most of the couples I liked, I always said I wanted to see the hero become the wind underneath the girl's wings but ShraMan were so different. In case of ShraMan, Sumo always ahd the wings, she just needed Shravan to hold her hand during the flight and enjoy the view with her 😎 ❤️

Anyways thanks for reading and commenting Akriti, really means a ton!! 😳

Edited by Malika - 8 years ago

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evaviego

@evaviego

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Amazing OS Malika 👍🏼

Beautifully written.. and superb concept..

what i loved the most about this one is that the crux of the story is the plight of many young women in our country... and you penned it so beautifully... i am in awe of it...

Great Job Malika...

Wish to read more and more from you...

And i would be very grateful if you could post the link of your writing index. 😳

Thank you 😊

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Originally posted by: Malika

I think a woman not wanting a child or choosing a career over child for some time after her marriage is something yet too bold for our society. Especially in a show like this where the protagonist has been shown to be brought up with this mentality that a career oriented woman gives two hoots about her family. I would have definately LOVED to see Sharvan break these age old norms of the Malhotra khandaan. Especially the fact that Preeti and Pushkar planned their family so thoughtlessly awould have been an amazing contrast to ShraMan...How I wish we could have had this track. Would have loved to see Ramnath being uncomfortable to these novel ideas while Shravan would have emerged as the anti-thesis then thereby proving himself to be Sumo's perfect soulmate ❤️ To see ShraMan become Ram-Nirmala's anti-theses was undoubtedly a dream of sorts.

👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

That would have been beyond awesome to watch..!!!

Edited by evaviego - 8 years ago