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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Akriti12
Hey Malika, Amazing update dear..it's so so beautiful..👏
Really liked the theme of write-up..⭐️ It's so real, something we often came across in real life.😊
Loved your version of Shravan, so supportive & understanding..the way he took stand for his sumo is commendable. .(really wanted to see this shravan in EDKV...😭)
ShraMan's convo in last part is so lovable..❤️
If ever EDKV 2 happens, I wish they use your OS as their theme..😊
Best wishes for you..👍🏼

Hey Akriti, I am really happy you could connect to this version of Shravan. I think all of us wanted to see this version of Shravan...the Sumo's Shravan or I should say the career-oriented Sumo's Shravan 😉 You know till now most of the couples I liked, I always said I wanted to see the hero become the wind underneath the girl's wings but ShraMan were so different. In case of ShraMan, Sumo always ahd the wings, she just needed Shravan to hold her hand during the flight and enjoy the view with her 😎 ❤️

Anyways thanks for reading and commenting Akriti, really means a ton!! 😳

.You're most welcome dear,you deserve all appreciation..👏👏

And yes. you are right sumo always wanted his support in terms of emotional and motivational and that she made very clear during khosla case episodes..All she wanted was him to hold her hand...shravan though emotionally vulnerable, but always stood strongly by her be it khosla case or accident one..but ya we lost that shravan after that but you excellently depicted that shravan in your write-up...shravan again standing for his sumo and ultimately for their life...😊

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Akriti12

@Akriti12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: evaviego
Amazing OS Malika 👍🏼
Beautifully written.. and superb concept..

what i loved the most about this one is that the crux of the story is the plight of many young women in our country... and you penned it so beautifully... i am in awe of it...

Great Job Malika...

Wish to read more and more from you...

And i would be very grateful if you could post the link of your writing index. 😳

Thank you 😊

And

👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
That would have been beyond awesome to watch..!!!