Channa Mereya ShraMan FF Chp-18 updated Page 73 July 5th - Page 33

Awww this is sooo dreamy beautiful emotional adorable sweet lovely as always & your lyrics awww just amazingly beautiful as always dear...Thank you so much...Akhir Mil hee gaye Dil jo bane Hai EK DUJE KE VAASTE!

Hello Lubna

Hi everyone, Happy Valentines Day. So here I am with a new chapter, not exactly on Valentines Day, but still technically before it ends. I know you guys were waiting for it, and I really hope I don't disappoint you. This is the first time I'm writing intimate stuff and I know I'm not good or comfortable writing this. But this was important for the story, so I attempted it. Hoping you guys will like it. Please let me know. Also included is a new stanza for the title track in the background and I have a feeling it will compensate what I couldn't write. Thanks, and enjoy ShraMan's special night together. Please Like & Comment. So sorry I didn't reply anyone for the last chapter, was just being on and off and was not getting enough time to reply. I'll reply to them soon for sure.Thanks.

Amidst all the cheering from everyone Shravan moved forward not breaking eye contact with her, taking small steps towards her who was reluctant to the idea of Shravan picking her up in his arms and going up to their room.

But then this is all he wanted, to enter their heaven with holding her in his arms.

He reached to her and still without breaking the eye contact swiftly picked up his life in his arms and slowly moved towards the stairs, without noticing anyone or everyone still watching them.

Every step he was taking, the way he was holding her, the way he was looking at her just spoke love, pure love.

They reached at the top and he pushed the door open still eyes locked with hers and closed the door behind.

We are in, don't you wanna put me down??

He nodded in No.

Are you not hurting?

I can stay like this forever.

I"m not going anywhere, you can put me down now, she said making him smile.

He gently put her down but he was not letting her off yet. Just pulled her back in a hug and closed his eyes to sink in the fact that his Sumo was his for ever now. Sumo was loving being in his embrace as this was her safe haven from all the distractions of life.

They broke the hug after how long they don't remember, that's when she noticed the room which was beautifully decorated with every color of tulips, and candles making it to be the most beautiful sight ever. There at the night stand was a beautiful frame with their Engagement picture, one corner of the room was a small desk for Sumo with a picture of her family.

Shravan!!!! She could only gasp at the sight in front of her.

Do you like it??

I don't have words to say how I feel.

Then don't say anything. Just feel it. I want to give you everything you ever wished for. I have another surprise for you.

I have one too.

You go first said Shravan

No you go. I always mess it up, so this time you go first.

OK you sit here, he said making her sit on the bed comfortably with her back towards the headboard. He then opened a big Fedex package and got a small wooden chest out of it and got it to the bed.

What is it??

Treasure Box, My treasure that I collected over the years remembering you.

But...she stopped

I know I hated you, a lot but couldn't stop myself from thinking about you. Many a times I did things related to you inherently, as if it was my second nature to think about you.

She opened the box and picked up a souvenir of Big Ben with Sumo engraved on it, she found two tickets with it.

Wow!!! It's beautiful Shravan.

How was it??

I couldn't go.

What??

I went there with classmates and subconsciously bought a extra ticket for you as I always have, but then I remembered you, got so mad at your thought that I couldn't go. While waiting for them to come back I bought this and engraved your name on it.

Shravan!!! She tried to say something but he stopped her by putting his finger on her lips.

Don't say anything Sumo. I'm showing this to make you feel good not to make you feel guilty.

She then got out a jewellery box with exquisite pearls and emerald set. Her eyes were shining in happiness. It was just one line pure pearl necklace with a little big emeralds in the middle along with matching earrings and ring.

So when did you do jewelry shopping for me?? She asked with a chuckle.

This was from my first salary. I couldn't think of doing anything else with it.

She moved closed to him and hugged him tight.

Thanks Shravan, it's beautiful.

As she broke the hug, they shared an eyelock. He just smiled and kissed her forehead. Don't you wanna see this, he said pointing towards a pen set that was in a handcrafted wooden box.

She gasped as she opened it as she saw "Shravan, Sumo" on each pen. These are the exclusive Designer Pens Shravan!!!

Yes I got this I started my own Law Firm, I got it personalized. Never thought I would give it to you though.

Her eyes were rolling down with tears now, he came forward and wiped them.

"You sure like to personalize everything"

"Yes I like to mark my name on everything that belongs to me", he winked making her blush.

Now where is my surprise??

I don't have such fancy stuff like you, it's my memory box, just filled with your memories which kept me connected to you.

"It's just not a memory box Sumo, it's our treasure. Much more expensive than what I had".

He took the box like a small kid, happily looking and finding everything that they did together. From tickets, pictures, rubix cube, cards and letters. Her letters saying sorry to him, pleading him to forgive her in every one of them. And then there were pieces of their picture together. He looked at her with eyes brimming with tears threatening to fall.

I cut those when Nanu made me promise that I will marry Adit...

Sumo!!! He quickly hugged her remembering how close he was to lose her forever. I'm not getting you out of my sight now. I can't live without you Sumo, he whispered.

"I know, you are stuck with me now Mr. Shravan Malhotra. Always be ready for challenges".

He then took the letter in which she confessed her love, he kept reading it again and again, as he couldn't believe how they both felt the same for each other, though miles apart but their hearts were always together.

Sumo, say those words that you confessed in your letter, he whispered close to her ear, making her heart jump to a whole new level.

I already told you, not now she said getting off the bed with a smile on her face when she saw there was something else in the Fedex box. She got the bag out and found greeting cards in there.

Don't touch them Sumo!!! Screamed Shravan trying to snatch it away from her.

Why??? I want to see what's in there, she ran to the other side with Shravan following her.

Sumo give it back

No I wanna see first

Sumo!!!

Shravan!!!

She climbed up on the bed and ran to the other side, he followed her.

She tripped over her lehenga and was about to fall when shravan held her tight.

She slowly opened her eyes to find Shravan staring her intently with all his love.

As she tried to break the hug she stepped on something.

Ahhh!!!!

That's the reason I didn't want to open those cards.

She bent down and picked up the cards, those were for her birthday, there were some dried flowers in it.

I'm sorry sumo, I was so upset with you that on your birthday every year I would take a card and put a tulip in after wishing you Happy Birthday, but then I also put a rose flower with lots of thorns as my hatred towards you. So every card had a tulip and a rose with thorns in it.

She smiled.

Are you not upset???

No, thorns doesn't bother me Shravan but they did affected me with happiness, even though in hatred I was connected to you the whole time. And it was not just hatred, the things you did even though subconsciously, they just show your love. I don't care about the thorn with the rose, I care about the tulip and the card you got for me every year. You thought about me at your every achievement, that's important for me.

She took all the cards from him and put it in the treasure box and put it the closet with the memory box.

As she turned Sharvan pulled her close as she came crashing to him.

Shravann!!! She gasped, as he held her bare waist to pull her closer.

So tell me why am I so important to you???

I don't want to say it, you didn't say anything since we got married.

What did I not say Sumo??

That you...

He lifted her face. Look at me Sumo, he said cupping her face

She looked at him as he came very close and whispered I Love You Sumo!!! Always have, always will.

Sumo closed her eyes with the overwhelming feeling that was now engulfing her mind and senses.

Her bend down and kissed her forehead, and her eyes one after another.

She was clutching his Sherwani to the side.

As he kissed her cheeks and came down to her neck, her necklace got stuck to his Sherwani button.

Ouch!!! she screamed and laughed at the same time.

I'll take them out she said coming out of the closet and standing in front of the mirror, but as she was trying to take her ghoongat out from the hairpins Shravan came behind and held her waist making her startle.

I'll help you, he said taking the pins out very gently as to not hurt her.

It looked different without the ghoongat now.

You look beautiful, he said without breaking eye contact in the mirror, making her face go crimson red.

He then turned her around and gently took her hand and kissed it before taking the bangles and kangan out from each hand, and then turned her around again making her face the mirror.

He then took one earring out and kissed the earlobe before moving to the next, she closed her eyes clutching her lehenga.

He loved to see how his proximity affects her.

Next he took out her necklaces one after the other looking straight in the mirror. He then took out her hairpins to let it loose from the bun it was made into.

Suman was all flushed now, his proximity hands and lips were taking her to a whole new world of intimacy that she never felt before. This was something else, something new and yes that she was loving it and ready to experience it.

Shravan then moved her hair to the side and kissed the Mehendi Tattoo he made which was dark red in color, making her melt in him, he turned her around kissing her neck while she was losing all her resolve.

Sumo!!! Open your eyes please, he said cupping her face again.

As she opened them, he looked straight in her eyes,

I Love You Sumo, he said making her eyes close again.

Sumo!!!

Hmmm!!!

I need an answer, he said caressing her lips with his thumb.

She looked at him staring at her fervidly, she smiled and said I Love You Shravan, more than anything in this world, will always love you till my last...

He didn't let her finish and crashed his lips at hers and kissed so passionately as if this was everything he ever wanted.

Her hands reached his hair and both were lost in their own world breaking away any inhibitions they had.

They broke out gasping for air, but not letting off each other.

Sumo!!

Hmmm!!

She looked at him and then the next thing he said took her breath away.

Can I make you mine??? he said looking at her with all the love he had.

She couldn't say anything, just buried herself in his chest.

He lifted her bridal style without breaking the eye contact took her to the bed.

(A/N: Please read this in the tune of EDKV title song)

Sanson se milkar saans ab

Hone lagi madhosh

Dil ki is raftaar me

Khone lage sab josh

Mehekne lagi hai zindagi tere mere pyaar se

Mil hi gaye dil jo bane Ek Duje Ke Vaaste...

So finally they were one, breaking all the inhibitions and boundaries between them, moving forward to a fresh start to their relationship which was now stronger than ever.

Few hours later:

"Shravan you didn't find your name in my Mehendi. I forgot that Vandy Bhabhi told me not to let you come close until you find it".

"I know where is it, on the side of your right palm".

How did you know?? You didn't even look at my Mehendi today.

I was watching you from the other side when you were getting the Mehendi done, and that was the only time you were blushing looking at me.

Great Mr. Oxford Malhotra.

"So I can officially come close to you now", he said nuzzling in her neck again.

No I'm done!!! Let's go to sleep now.

I'm not done yet. Never gonna be done with you... Mrs. Malhotra.

So finally ShraMan started a new chapter of their life. I know we all are happy for them. Hopefully I didn't disappoint you. Please let me know your views. Next chapter will have some trouble for Ramnath, but not for ShraMan. So be happy. Happy Valentines Day. I want to publish it before the date change. Lol.

Ressi res😳

beautiful.

Originally posted by: maddy_edkv

beautiful.

memory box and Shravan's treasure are just soo nice.

he got a greeting card with a rose and a tulip every year. how sweet he is!!

and that new stanza is awesome.

you are an awesome writer Lubna.

the last part was romantic , and you are good at writing that too.

loved it.

P.S. i had sent you a buddy request some days ago and asked for a pm. and i didnt receive pm😔 hope i can get one for next ones.

love

Madhu

Hey Maddy,

Such a lovely update 👏
Shravan and sumo's conversation is so beautiful...
Finally ShraMan are together Forever...

If comment time... Record reading I did twice in 20 mins!! Loved it.

Lovely update!