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Posted: 8 years ago
Unress

Hey Anu,
For a very long time I had a song in mind for Namik, if he ever goes missing from social media for few days, I would tweet this for him. This is my favorite track from Thomas and Friends. But this would fit perfect in your story. I changed it for your story.

Where O Where is Shravan
Where has Shravan gone
Perhaps he's playing hide n seek
Or something's really wrong
Our Sumo has spoken
Shravan must be found
So she'll be going searching every inch of London ground...



Loved it. So Sumo FINALLY going to London to find Shravan. Awesome. Can't wait. Update soon.

Lubna.

Edited by LubSha - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update
absolutely brilliant
will the family let sumo go or not
cannot wait
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: LubSha

Unress

Hey Anu,
For a very long time I had a song in mind for Namik, if he ever goes missing from social media for few days, I would tweet this for him. This is my favorite track from Thomas and Friends. But this would fit perfect in your story. I changed it for your story.

Where O Where is Shravan
Where has Shravan gone
Perhaps he's playing hide n seek
Or something's really wrong
Our Sumo has spoken
Shravan must be found
So she'll be going searching every inch of London ground...



Loved it. So Sumo FINALLY going to London to find Shravan. Awesome. Can't wait. Update soon.

Lubna.


Finally...UNRESS ho gaya...😃
Ur poem is really awesome...loved it yaar...👍🏼
Sabr ka phal meetha hota hai...Good times ahead...😊
Love,
ANU😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

awesome update
absolutely brilliant
will the family let sumo go or not
cannot wait
continue soon


Thank you so much pinky dea...
Sabr ka phal meetha hota hai...Wait n Watch😉
Love,
ANU😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anukulgr8


Yes...Talaash-e-Shravan jaari...
Hopes crush nahi honge...good times ahead...
Ty for commenting..
Love,
ANU😳

Couldn't have ask for more!😳
Waiting !
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hola cuties...m updating early ...iss bar bhi😳..Thank u so much to everyone jinhone bhi like aur comment kiya...Thanks a lot people...Luv u'all a lot...So here u go with the Part 6...ENJOY...😊 NO PROOF READ

FINALLY

part 6

"Maa, Papa..sabko mai ek baat batana chahti hu...Mai london jaa rahi hu..."

Sumo said leaving everyone rooted at their places...

"Suman..ye tum kya keh rahi ho...???"

"Maa...mai London jaa rahi hu...bohot jald.."

"Par kyu puttar ji...aise kaise.."

"Chachiji...mai Shravan ko dhoondne jaa rahi hu..."

"Kya...Suman ke kya pagalpanti kar rahi ho tum...aab aise 5 saal baad..."

"Papa..kal ko toh usne parcel bheja tha ...matlab who zinda hai...mai use vapas lene jaa rahi hu..."

"Par Suman...ho sakta hai ke kisine mazak kiya ho...???"

"Par ye bhi toh ho sakta hai na Lalaji ke who Shravan ne ne bheja ho...Woh parcel ke niche Shravan likha tha...who toh Shravan ke hi handwriting thi ..."

"Par suman tum ye kaise keh sakti ho..."

"Papa mai jaanti hu uska S likhne ka taarika..aur voh saari chocolates maine he uska lane ko kahi thi...jab who vaapas aa raha tha( on verge of tears)...mai jaaungi usko dhoonde ko...aagr mila toh thik..varna..."

"Varna kya..."

"Varna pata nahi...waapas aa paungi ya nahi..."

Saying this she wept her tears..

"mai aabhi ticket book karne waali hu...issiliye aap logo ko baatane aaye thi...

"Sumo...do tickets book karna..."

"Matlab???"

"Matlab ye ke mai bhi aaunga tere saath..."

"Nahi Pushkar..mai aakeli he jaaungi..."

"Nahi Sumo...maine aaj tak tere har baat maani hai...aur iss baar tho bhaiya ka sawal hai..tu ha keh ya na..mai toh tere saath aane hi vala hu..."

"ha Pushkar...tum thik keh rahe ho...Suman..Pushkar tumhare saatha he jaayega..."

"Par papa..."

"nahi Suman...humne tumhari baat maani hai ..toh tumhe bhi humari ye baat maanni he hogi..."

"Thik hai..."

After 10 days

"Chalo Pushkar...Der ho rahe hai..." Suman shouted from the entrance

"Pushkar...please Suman ka khayal rakhna...tum toh jaante ho uski halat kya hai...aagar Shravan nahi mila toh pata nahi woh khud ko kya kar legi...plz use sambhalna...aur use shai salamat vapas le aana..."

"Aap chinta mat kijiye bade papa...mai Sumo ka puri tarah se khayal rakhunga...aap befikr rahiye...mai jaanta hu uski halat kya hai...par aap tension mat lijiye...jo hota hai aache ke liye hota hai..."

"Ha Pushkar...Bilkul sahi kaha tumne..."

"Chalo na Pushkar..." Sumo shouted once again..

"ha baba aa raha hu...(Pushkar reaches the gate with the family) Chal..."

"Bye Ma...bye papa...Bye sabko...bhagvan na kare ye humari aakhri mulakat ho..."

"nahi Suman...aisa mat kaho...Shravan zaroor milega...tu jaanti hai na tere Pyaar ki taakat..??"

"Ha maa...isiliye hi toh itna bada kadam utha rahi hu... Aur baas aap sabke aashirvaad ki zarrorat hai..."

"Suman...(kisses her forehead)Hamara aashivaad hamesha tumhare saath hai..."

"haa puttarji...humme pura vishwas hai ke tu humare Shravan ko zaroor vapas layegi..."

"Ji chachiji...Chalo Pushkar...(gets into the car)"

"Bye mumma...bye preeti..."

"Bye...Apna khayal rakhiyo..."

They ride off to the airport...

At the airport..

SUMO'S POV

It seemed very restless when we reached the airport...Asia lag raha tha ke London jaana galat hai...but I shooed those thoughts away...Shravan was most important and I wuld have done anything to get him back...I got down from the car..

"Pushkar...jaldi se bags nikal..."

"Haa yaar..nikal toh raha hu..."

"Jaldi kar...Ek Do bag Utha..."

Suddenly...a familiar voice struck my ears and a knot tightened my stomach...It felt so soothing to my ears...I turned back...

SHRAVAN'S POV

I was back to my country at last...I breathed the scent of my land ...but I was a little nervous...Pata nahi kyu..par kuch alag lag raha tha...I started calling a cab...Just then a soft wave of voice hit my ear...That was someone shouting bur it seemed melodious to me...It seemed familiar...but I did't pay heed to it and tried stopping the cab...Suddenly the voice stopped...

POV ENDS..

"Pushkar...Pushkar..."

"yahi pe toh hu...Kya hua..."

"Pushkar...woh... who..Sh..Shravan..."

"Kya keh rahi hai tu..."

"Pushkar...Shravan...Shravan hai ..."

"kaha hai..."

Pushkar turned back and saw Shravan...trying to stop the cab...

SUMO'S POV

I turned back and saw him...he was standing right in front of me...trying to stop a cab...I couldn't believe my eyes...Was it really Shravan...was I hallicunating?? Yes...he was Shravan...mera shravan...

SHRAVAN'S POV

The voice stopped...I don't know why...but it sounded like it was Pushkar and sumo...I turned back right then and saw her...she was standing right there...staring at me...Pushkar was also standing with her...both were gazing me as if they had saw a ghost...I smiled at them...

PUSHKAR'S POV

I thought Sumo was joking but when I turned around I saw him right there...smiling at us...I rubbed my eyes and saw again...but he was there...My Shravan bhaiya was there...

POV ENDS

Pushkar ran towards Shravan and hugged him tight...

"bhaiya...bahiya kaha chale gaye the aap...aap...aap kaise ho...kaha the itne saalo se...bhaiya aap jaante nahi aapko humne kitna miss kiya...bhaiya..."Pushkar couldn't say more as tears made way out from his eyes...

"Chhote...chhote...chup ho ja...aab mey vapas aa gaya hu...Shhh ..kitna royega...mai hu aab...chinta mat kar..."Shravan was also in tears but consoled Pushkar...

"Tu yaha kya kar raha hai...Kahi jaa rahe ho tum log??"

"Bhaiya(controloing his tears) Woh ...Chocolates ka parcel aapne bheja tha...??"

"ha...maine bheja tha...par.."

"Ha...Sumoko pura vishvas tha ke voh parcel aap hi ney bheja tha...issiliye who matlab hum aapko dhoondne ke liye London jaa rahe the..."

"Kya..??? Aacha hua mil gaye tum log yahi pe...warna..."Shravan stopped midsentence...as his eyes were locked at his ladylove...She was staring at him as if watching a horror story...

Shravan walked towards her...

"Sumo..???" He said...

But Sumo kept gazing at him...

"Sumo..." He said at cupped her cheek...

At that moment Sumo came out of her reverie ...


"Sh...sh..sh..shravan..." She managed to say only this much and fainted down in his arms...

So...kaisa tha...Hope u'all liked it...Plz Don't forget to like and comment...ur feedback matters a lot do come up with suggestions also...they are most welcome...see u soon guys...

Love,
ANU😳


P.S:-Constructive critisizm is most welcome...

P.P.S:-Tomatoes and chapplas most welcome...Par as always slowly...Mai Nazuk Hu...😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ohhh my god! Thank you yaar shravan ko vaapas lane ke liye. Tomatoes nahi aap pe to flowers barasane ka dil kar raha hai. Awesome update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Yayyy shravu is back... iske liye bada wala jaadu ki jhappi my zeherili chidiya... 🤗 bit sawal yeh uthta hai judge sahab, shravu 5 saal tak tha kahan! Hmmm😲 Suspense unified! 😕 Jaldi update kariyo... Till then lots of love... ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh My God ! Shravan is back !!! FINALLY😳
The emotions that sumo might be going through especially was !😭 She is meeting him after so long, after so long she thought she lost him. Her hopes didn't fail. And shravan's feeling too. Beautifully written part.

Thank God Jeevan is not in already😆

It was perfect, the moment they met again. Not she is gone to London and he is roaming here in India, also not he is in some hospital at London itself. They met at the airport for goodness😆

Waiting eagerly for their convo and family's moment again.
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Posted: 8 years ago
God bless you girl... jaan atka dee the ... cliffhanger vo bhe bada wala ... beautifully penned ... amazing story line😊

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