Once Again[AU]~A ShraMan FF(PART 10_PG 24)15.02.17 - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
Hi Anu...
I read last 2 parts one go...

So Shraman past has some bitterness...

In the show Sumo asking sorry... In u r story Shravan is asking sorry... Interesting...

What Shravan has done to Sumo in New York .. That she is so hurt that she can't forgive Shravan...

Continue soon

Thanx for the PM
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
hiii Anu...😊
read all the parts together, loving the story dear...👍🏼
awesome concept and perfectly written..👏
update soon, 'll wait..😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
thanks a lot for pm's anu ...love ya sweety ;*
it seems quite interesting... both getting ready to see each other for shadi n beda garg dono ne pehle s kr rkha.. sumo ka jhalli look hilarious it was ...loved it ...n sorry ?, past?? dil patthar?? bff?? new york?? wats the story anu?? pls update soon ...n thanks so much for writing new ff ;* ...going to read another ss :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
Hello people.🤗...First of all wish u all a very Happy New Year...🥳
And I am so sorry for this late update...aapko toh pata he hai mai late latif hu...Par itna tension chal raha hai ke pucho mat...assignments,UTs..aur mera 3rd UT bhi shuru ho raha hai from 11..so dead studing now...
Thank u all for your lovely comments...sorry counln't reply par amine har ek comment padha and Thanks to all of them who liked and commented...So here goes
part 3..ENJOY...😃



ONCE AGAIN

"Ye lijiye aunty...Sumo special coffee..."Sumo said serving the coffee cups...

"Thank u Suman...Vaise tera aur Shravan ka jhagda hua hai kya..?"

Sumo stopped sipping the coffee while Shravan froze midway..

"nahi aunty...aise..aise koi baat nahi hai..."Sumo stammered...

"Aacha thik hai...Vaise Priya...tumhe koi aitrz toh nahi hai na agar hum ek din yaha rahe toh...mera matlab hum kal Mumbai jaa rae hai na issiliye..."

"issme puchne vaali kya baat hai Nirmala...zaroor..."

"Thank u so much priya..."to ramnath"aare..aap abhi tak yahi hai...Flight miss karni hai kya..."

"Nahi nahi..nikal raha hu..."

"Aap kaha jaa rahe ho uncle..."

"Meri aaj sham ki flight ha Chennai ko...Chalo..mai chalta hu..."

"Ok...bye...apna khayal rakhna..."Nirmala waved him...

"Chalo Nirmala..tum bohot thak gayi hogi...ek kaam karna...tum mere saath kamra share karna..."

"Thik hai...aur Shravan tum??"Priya asked him

"Aunty mai who chachee par so jata hu...waha khuli hawa mey aacha lagega..."

"par beta itni sardi hai aur..."

"Koi baat nahi aunty..."Saying this Shravan ran up...

"Ajeeb ladka hai...Suman ja..usse kambal dekar aa..."

"Mai kyun jaao...usse apni fikar thodi na hai..."Sumo cut Nirmala's words and went in the room...

"Dono ke dono ajjeb behave kar rahe hai..par tum dekhna Nirmala thodi der baad suman khud usse kambal dekar aayegi..."Priya smirked..

They giggled and went inside...

11 P.M

"yaar neend he nahi aa rahi...Maa ne kaha tha ke Shravan ko kambal dekar aau...par mai kyu jaau...usse apni parvah thodi na hai...Mai kyu fikar kar rahe hu..."

11.55 P.M

"Kya karu...jau ya nahi...neend bhi dhoka de rahi hai...Nahi Sumo...apni self respect bacha...tu nahi jaayegi...

12.20 A.M

Sumo is tossing in the bed

"shravan bhi na...dimag he nahi hai usse..chache par sona hai...ghar mey kya kam rooms hai...Par nahi...janab ko chache pey hi sona hai...Sumo...tu kyu fikar kar rahi hai uski...koi nahi hai who tera...

12.50 A.M

Sumo is standing at the window

"Kitne Sardi hai...Shravan ne kambal bhi nahi liya...Kya karu...De kea au...Nahi Sumo...Par usse agar sardi lag gayi toh...jaa Sumo..kisi aur naate na sahi insaniyat ke naate toh de aa..."

Sumo took the duvet and ran towards the terrace...

Shravan was awake...staring at the stars...

His ears caught the trail of some one coming up...He smiled..He had heard her denying to bring him the duvet...

Sumo was shocked to see him awake...

She saw him and turned back but Shravan stopped her...

"Mujhe pata hai ke tum ho Sumo...vapas jaane ke zarrorat nahi hai..."

"Maa ne kaha tha ke tumhe kambal dee aau..iss liye aayi thi...aur koi baat nahi..."

"Aur koi baat na sahi..par aayi toh..."

Sumo threw the duvet at him...and turned to go...only to be stopped by him...

"Sumo..baitho na...tumhe bhi neend nahi aayegi I kno...Plz baitho na..."

"nahi...mujhe bohot need aa rahi hai..(acts as yawning) Good night..."

"Tumhe lagta hai tum mujhse jhoot bol sakti ho...koshish bhi kyu karti ho sumo..."

Sumo sat down reluctantly...They were staring at the stars...

FlashBack

"Dekho shravan...who star pink colour ka hai..."Sumo pointed at the star

"Nahi sumo...woh pink colour ka nahi..white he hai..."

"Nahi Shravan...dekho apna chashma nikal ke...Woh pink he hai..."

"Sumo...stars twinkle karte hai...padha hai na humne...woh white colour ka he hai..."

"Maine kaha na who pink hai...!!"

"Aacha baba...pink toh pink..."

FLASHBACK ENDS

"Tumhe yaad hai sumo...tum taaro ko pink samajti thi..."Shravan said staring at the stars...

"Haa...aur tum mujhe samajathe rehte the ke who white he hai...aur mai kabhi nahi maanti thi..."Sumo replied remembering the incident...

They giggled...

"Kitne saal ho gaye hume aise baat kare..."

Sumo looked at him...

Shravan took her hand in his..

"Please mujhe maaf kardo sumo...mai..."

Suman took her hand back with force...

"Please Shravan...tum jaante ho mujhe koi purani baat yaad nahi karni..."

"Mai jaanta hu tum hurt ho...par mai ghussa tha sumo...Please bhul jaao sab kuch..."

"Kaise bhul jaau Shravan...tumne ek nahi do baar meri insult ke hai...pehle baar toh mai samaj gayi ...hum dono immature the...lekin doosri baar...tumne mere office or clients ke saamne mera mazak bana diya...najane kya kya keh diya...tumne ek baar bhi socha mere bare mey..."her eyes were not able to control the tears anymore...She ran downstairs ...


So people...kaisa laga?? Hope u liked it...Do give me your sincere feelings...and don't forget to tap the like button and leave a comment...Every like and comment matters a lot...

Love,
ANU😳
P.S:- Constructive criticism is most welcome...
P.P.S :-Tomatoes and chappals are welcome too...Par iss nazukkali par dhree se phekna...😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
Res.. Though I'll take time to unress coz lagging behind the last two updates
Unressed at pg8.😊
Edited by theGoldenGirl - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
Anu is back with update yay!! *does a happy dance* and that too soo beautiful loved it completely finally she went to give him the duvet and pink stars lol🤣 sumo ki insult👏 and shravu ki maafi ❤️ update soon dea and best of lucks for your UT 's 👍🏼
Love,
Dolly😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37
Firstly wishing you a very Happy Newyear. Coming to the update it's soo nice. The terrace scene is sooo cute and I loved their memories about stars. Update soon and thanks for the pm
Love
Madhu
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
Naye saal me naya update ke liye thank you. And PM ke liye bhi thank you. Loved the terrace conversation😳
Shraman fit like a wink and a smile always when they get back to normal conversation... Loved the pink star part she can do it. Science and logic ka waise bhi usse se usually naata nahi jod paate 😆 and thats what we louv abt her.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
Read the three parts ! Sumo is such a jhalli 😆 , the flashback was cute ! Keep writing !
Good luck for the assignements and all !
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Posted: 8 years ago
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thanks for the pm n wish u a very happy new year anu :) finally you're back.. I was like ki ab ye kahan gayab ho gai?? I came n she left :-p lol.. now about the chapter.. how sumo started stammering ki everything's good between shraman.. n then whoa they're staying at her house.. ramu left ..happy journey kaka :-p n how priya n nirmu concluded ki kch der m khud hi dekr aygi ...lol.. n sumo pata tha soygi ni ladki ..kaise soti v when u love someone, no matter how much u try to hate other, you always end caring n loving other..ah zyada philosophical ho ra :-p lol.. n finally apni self respect ko she put aside n went to give him duvet..n he was awake n smile kaise krra tha jaise ptani stars hi mil gaye ho ...lol.. n how sumo threw duvet n started to ran down but stopped when he called out for her.. n flashback to itna zyada pyara tha kya kahu. loved it.. sumo stars pink hote n shravu nhi twinkle krte white hotel.. so cute their bickering was.. n realization how long it had been that they were like this .. n yar pls jaldi btao kya insult kara h shravu that they've become like this..ek to clients k samne kia but q qki gussa tha ...like really ..use ur brain Mr malhotra.. all the best for ur assignments n ut's anu ..n being studious good :-p ... but time mile to do update next part..waiting for next pm..loved it dear :)
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