Once Again[AU]~A ShraMan FF(PART 10_PG 24)15.02.17 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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😔 Mereko aur padna tha! Aise kaise taang ke chali gayi... I am sure both of them talking about themselves only... Phir pata nahin..sumo shorts mein bahar ayegi.. Ab kya hoga!... 🤣...pagal ladki. Let's see... Lovely update..šŸ‘... Jaldi jaldi update kariyo... Aur these mothers... They always think about the guests! šŸ˜•
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Posted: 9 years ago
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NICE update. loved it . update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hola guys...kaise hai sab log...hope ke thik ho...So first of all thank u so so much for your response...made me feel good...meko laga tha ke ye wala ff pura flop jaayega but u guys proved my wrong...Thank u so so much everyone...Aur sabko bada vala sorry bcoz I couldn't relpy to ur comments..par maine saare comments read kiye and thank u all for ur comments...Luv ya all...So here goes the second part..ENJOY...

ONCE AGAIN part 2



I stood there perplexed...Those past events ran through my mind...that showdown...that insult... her tears were about to slide down her eyes..

Sumo came out of the trance after hearing Nirmala's voice...

"Suman...Aao na...vaha kyun khadi ho..."

"Haa...Aur ye kya pehen rakha hai...wapas newyork jaane ka irada hai kya..?? Priya questioned

"Haa..aab samjhi..toh tujhe saach mei laga ke tujhe ladka dekhne aane vala hai..Issiliye aise kapde pehne na taaki who log tujhe reject kar sake...haa??" Priya questioned leaving sumo speechless..

"Nahi maa...mai who actually..."

"Aare Priya..usse jo laga thik he toh laga...humlog use dekhne he toh aaye hai...Aapne Shravan ke liye...Hai na beta...??"

"Haa.." Shravan was so lost in looking at her that he didn't pay heed to the question...

Sumo's eyes widned and she gave her dangerous questioning look to Shravan which broke his Dwam

" Matlab nahi...aap kya keh rahi hai maa..."

Everyone laughed...

"Aare Suman...mazak kar rahi thi who...chehra toh dekho apna..aaise lag raha hai jaise bhoot dekh liya ho..." Ramnath said...

" Bata na...ye aise jhalli ban kar kyun bahar aaye hai..."

"Maa..mai woh..woh ..haa..woh mai apna mix and match kapde try kar rahi thi...dekh rahi thi kya kya fit aa raha hai...cupboard saaf karna hai na..." Sumo answered smiling victoriously as she managed to talk a single line in front of Shravan..

"Aacha...waise kaafi creative lag rahi hai tu...aise contrst colours ke kapde pehen rakhe hai..."

"Who toh hai na aunty...aakhir profession he aisa hai..."

"Haa bahi... professional ha apni Suman..toh beta kaisa tha who course..waise Shravan bhi 3 saal se NewYork mey he tha...tum log mile honge na waha..." Ramnath questioned...

ShraMan shared an eyelock..

"Mai abhi aap sab ke liye coffee ley ke aati hu.." Saying this sumo ran in the kitchen totally ignoring ramnath's question...

"Isse kya hua.."Priya asked to Shravan"Tum dono ka jhagda hua kya??"

And this time Shravan was speechless

"Nahi aunty...aisa kuch nahi hai.."

"Nahi...zaroor kuch hua hai...jao.baat karo use.."

"Aare nahi maa...aapko usska ghussa pata hai na...thode time mey thik ho jayega..."

"Matlab tum dono ka jhagda hua hai...jao..abhi manao use..."

"Par maa..." "Shravan..??Jaao.."

Shravan reluctuntaly went towards the kitchen..thinking about the past...how he had insulded her..how he had devalued her feelings..

He stood at the entrance.."Sumo" she was pretending to be busy as she had heard the convo taking place outside...

Shravan understood that...He stood there gazing at her...

After minutes of silence sumo broke it...

"Kya chahiye tumhe...aise yaha statue bankar mujhe taadne ki koi zarrorat nahi hai...agar kuch kehna hai toh kaho varna kalti bolo yaha se..."

"Mai woh...sorry..."

Sumo stopped her work

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With heavy heart and due to guilt I said Sorry...And she froze...

***

As I heard the words "Sorry"my mind and hands stopped working for a second...But I didn't get flustered...

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"Kya kaha tumne...sunai nahi diya..."

"I am really sorry sumo.."

She laughed out...

"Pata hai...aise words tumhe shobha nahi dete...aur rahi baat uss sorry kit oh please...mujhe koi zarrorat nahi hai tumhare sade hue sorry ki..."

"Mai jaanta hu ke maine galti ke hai...mai dil se sorry keh raha hu sumo...ple.."

She cut him off...

"Pehle baat toh ye ke mai tumhare liye sirf SUMAN hu..aur dil...(laughs) dekho toh kaun dil ke baat kar raha hai...ek aisa aadmi jiska dil patthar hai...sirf patthar..."

"I am really sorry..."

"JUST SHUT UP...I HATE SORRIES...I JUZ HATE SORRIES...maine tumhe ek nahi do chances diye the...par tumne...Khair...beeti baato ko yaad karke koi faayada nahi hai...kyunki aab who badli nahi jaa sakti...toh please for god sake phir se tumhara saada hua sorry mujhe mat dena aur jaise newyork me rehte the vaise he ajnabee ke tarah rehna...aur rahi yaha ke baat toh sirf formally baat karna...koi zarrorat nahi hai mujhe bff ke feels dene ki..."

"Meri baat toh suno..."

But Sumo went out with the coffee cups leaving a despondent Shravan behind...

*HUFF* Hogaya...so maine ye jaldi jaldi me type kiya hai..so please ignore the typos...and don't take tension...this part is must for build up..GOOD TIMES AHEAD...bohot kaam baaki hai yaar...4 projeccts baanane hai...So bye..see u soon...Aur ha..FINALLY ka update ke liye thoda time lagega ha...Sorry*puppy eyes*

hope u liked this one...Do remember to tap the like button aur ha silent readers do give feedback..Aagar encouragement na ho toh mai pheeke pad jaati hu..😃

Love,

ANU😳

P.S :- Constructive critisizm is most welcome...

P.P.S:- Tomatoes and chappals are also welcome...par bhulna nahi ke mai nazuk hu...😳


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome it wasšŸ‘ but bohot chotu tha. ...would love to read bigger ones...update soonish
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Posted: 9 years ago
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kalti bolo... Sade huye sorry... 🤣 by god! šŸ˜† me n my bff always talk like this... Loved this one!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Anu,
Great update. Eager to know what actually happened between the two in New York. Curious, why did Shravan insult Sumo??? Update real soon.

Lubna

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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Aww its a short update. But still it's nice. Hope shraman sort out their problems soon. Waiting for cute moments. Update soon and thanks for the pm.
Love
Madhu
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
It was awesome...well - written what that shravan is asking sorry for ??!
please update asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Nice update... eagerly waiting to know what happened b/w them
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
amazing update
too good
continue soon

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