Once Again[AU]~A ShraMan FF(PART 10_PG 24)15.02.17 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
Nice prologue! Waiting for more... But where's the pm! This is really not done! 😡
Edited by Sb1185 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hello mah lovelies...So as the story for this FF which I had written was deleted...I was vry sad and had thought that I wouldn't continue this...Par I did try to recover the story out of mah brain n penned down the first chappy successfully...So do tell me what u guys think...n sorry coundn't rly and send pms for the prologue...SORRY...😳
Here goes the first part...Enjoy..😊



ONCE AGAIN


"Maa..."

Aare...aa gayi tu...par maine taxi toh..."

"App toh kuch bolo hi mat...5 saal baad vapas aa rahi hu..aaur aap ek taxi tak nahi bhej sakti thi mujhe pick up karne ke liye...mai 2 ghanto se airport par sad rahi thi...this is not done..."She sulked

"Sorry beta...sacchi sorry..woh mehman aa rahe hai na..issileye..."she tried consoling her...

"Kya mehman...aapko bacchi se zyada mehman important hai..????"

"Sorry mera baccha...aab ek kaam karo jaldi se fresh ho jao aura a jao kitchen mey...tumhe.."

"Waah...aapki beti 5 saal baad ghar par aayi hai aur aap use abhi kitchen mey bula rahi hai..Aapko ho kya gaya hai mom..??"

"Beta...samjho na..tumhe khana banana hai kyunki aaj..."

"No...Aapne ladka bula liya mujhe dekhne ke liye...Kuch toh rehem karo an mujhpe plz pehle se hi love life me problems hai aur aap...'

"Sun toh sahi..."

"Nahi...aab jabtak aapke mehmaan aa ke chale na jaye tab tak mai room se bahar nahi aaungi..."Saying this she ran to her room..

***

"Toh beta ..kya decide kiya tumne..aa rahe ho na tum..."

"Of course mom..."

"Thik hai...aur ek baat...Woh Delhi vale ladki..."

"Mom please...maine aapse kitni baar kaha hai ke mujhe aabhi shaadi nahi karni...Pehle se hi love life mai problems hai aur..."

"Kya??"

"Kuch nahi...mujhe shaadi nahi karni..."

"Thik hai...Mat karo...Aab jaldi se tayaar ho jao..warna phir se late ho jayenge hum log..."

"Haa maa...aap jaaiye mai 15 mins mey ata hu..."

***

She sat on her bed wearing a shorts and crop top..

"maa bhi na..aaj he ladke valo ko bula liya...Shit man...maine toh keh diya ke mai bahar nahi aaungi par aagar nahi aaye toh maa ke khamakah insult ho jayegi...jaungi mai bahar.par sanskari ladki banke nahi..."She giggled and saw her self in the mirror...

"Aab dekhti hu kaunse ladke ki maa mujhe aapne bacche ke liye chunti hai..."She lauged out.. happily...

***

"Aare aao...is baar toh time par aa gaye...Namaste bhaisaab..kaise ho beta tum...jara dekho toh..kinna labma ho gaya hai tu..."

"Ha bhai..is baar maa bte time par ready hue...Jara dekhna bhabi..kahi aapke dost ka makeup toh kam nahi hua na...???"He giggled earning a whack from his wife..

"Chup karo tum..Khuch bhi.."Everyone laughed

***

She heard the people laugh..

"Lagta hai aa gaye who log...Chal beta ready ho ja..khud ko reject karvane ke liye..."she said adjusting her shorts and pulling her bangs on her cheek...

"Suman...bahar toh aao...dekho toh kaun aaya hai..."

"Aagaya mera bulava..all the best sumo..AAYI MAA"She took a deep breath and headed out

***

I saw the knob of the door go round and way back..my heart started beating..When the door opened my heart just stopped..

***

I opened the door and saw the guests sitting out...A sight of him made me freeze for the moment...

So...kaisa tha ye...plz honestly tell me if it turned out as carp...

Love,

ANU

P.S:-Constructive critisizm is most welcome..

P.P.S:- Tomatoes and challals are also welcome...Chappals shoul be heels...I don't like flats..Ur 6 number ke ha...😆


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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
Anuuu you are back!! With a dhamakedar update...this was fantastic...you are suprb at this jaani...ab or wait nhi hota...update soon...also me first yay!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
Hi Anu,
This was such acute one. I loved it. It was Shravan with his family out there. Lol. It would be interesting to read what Sumo does now to cover up. Please continue and soon.

Lubna.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
Hi anushka, thanks for the pm bae, great start i must say, love life main problems, budhu log pata nhin kya kaand karke bethe hain ek dusre ke saath, paka the peechli love life they are talking about is ek dusre ke saath hi😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Hate,padkar tho bohut maza aaya!!!Tho voh ladka Shravan hoga kya?
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Res
******
Unres

Annuuu...My Shonaaa..u r back..🤗
aur ya kya phir latakta chor dea...😔...mein tu curiosity ki dukan hon pata hai na tumhein...ab kaisay intezar karon gi...time hi ginti rahon gi🤪
wel coming to upii..
Bindasss!!
kamal ka tha...Sumo mistook bout her guests hana...she didnt knew ka Shravan anay wala tha😆...Jhali hai bilkul(in Shravan's language😳)
Starting was soo soo real...even meray sath bhi aisa hota hai..ghar ghuso nhi k awaz ajati hai mahman arahay hain zara hath bata do beta
Mehman bhi sometimes irritating lagtay...waisay aisa khna nhi chiyay buri baat hoti haina😳😆🤪

thank u shoo much for the pm shonna...will be waiting for ur update...plz be back soon😉
love yaa🤗


Take Care!❤️
Edited by Sunain - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
Nice starting Anu continue soon...
For Shraman story I never say no...

So update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
Nice start! Loved it, Update it soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
😆 sumo and her ideas...what is she even doing...wrong costume wrong place huh !!...😃 jhalli girl !!
Hope its shravan and his family out there...so excited to know their reaction...beautifully written 👏

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